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My Name Is Isabelle Parker I Have Just recently Moved Out Of My Parents House In The Country.
I Am A Young Adult Trying To Create A New Life Without My Parents Trying To Forget All The Bad Memories I Left Behind, I Have Left My Friends and my work too.
Hopefully it will not be the same here :)
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On Feb 5, 2012 starsky524 wrote:
Good start but you should use a capital I, maybe you should slow down and introduce more and if you have Full Walls, it looks more realistic.
On Feb 5, 2012 Samzie2012 wrote:
ok thank you
On Feb 5, 2012 snowsnow2133 wrote:
uhmm it's really fast, i agree with starsky524 with the capital i's and the walls. and some of the words arent in the right pretense and it make sit difficult to read >_< sorry if i was harsh!, it's a really good story plot though! you should keep writing
On Feb 5, 2012 Samzie2012 wrote:
Thank You snowsnow2133 I Am I Am getting better it's just taking time