Stories / Slient Fear - part 1
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Hello and welcome everyone!
Great to be back again for my next story. Yes this is going to be a seperated part story seeing as the story is really long if you put it all together into one. I might not be able to get part 2 out straight away because I have assignments and studies to work on so you'll have to bare with me.
I'd like to dedicate this part of the story to Livdude, she has ben my best bud since I was 5.
Hope you all like it!

Hello and welcome everyone!
Great to be back again for my next story. Yes this is going to be a seperated part story seeing as the story is really long if you put it all together into one. I might not be able to get part 2 out straight away because I have assignments and studies to work on so you'll have to bare with me.
I'd like to dedicate this part of the story to Livdude, she has ben my best bud since I was 5.
Hope you all like it! 3 PM SUNDAY 25TH AUGUST, 2008
"Now Heather, I want you to relax" Dr. Grain said.
Heather relaxed slightly but was still very nervous and uncomfortable.
 "Now tell me everything that happened" Grain requested. Heather just looked at Dr. Grain for moment. Then with an unsteady breath she started "It was two weeks ago... "A camp? In Blackwater Woods? What?" I asked. "Yeah it's going to be great!" Ashlee said excitment in her tone. "I have been accepted into this scout group that is only run by teens, and they said I could bring a friend if I wanted to. It's like a welcoming ceremony.Big bonfire and everything. Can you come?" I bit on my lip "Probably not..."
"Oh, why?"
"I have studying to do and my mum will get pretty mad at me."
 "Come on Heather, this is only for one night, and besides your mum hardly notices you anymore. "Come on, I know it will be fun. They are other people from our school going too. Come on please!"
I bit on my lip again. I thought about it for a moment. I guess it would be fun. Anything Ashlee said was fun is usually true. "Yeah, okay. I guess I can go"
"Great! Remember 8 o'clock tonight!"
She then hung up. I packed everything I needed for tonight. I took one last look in the mirror. 'You Heather are looking good' I thought to myself. Then I ran downstairs and out the door before mum saw me. I arrive a half an hour later. Ashlee was there in front of the forest. She waved to me as I approched. "What excuse did you give your mum?" she asked.
"No excuse" I said "Just snuck out"
"Okay, cool" she said "Well come on, they're probably waiting for us" We ran into the forest. Ahead I could here whispers of chatter. And strangely nearby I hear the shuffling of feet... When we reached camp I saw two familar faces. One was Rebecca Jackson and the other was Danny Green. Both of them were in the popular group at school and weren't so good at their subjects. I knew Ashlee had a little crush on Danny. What were they doing joing a scout group?
 Then my gaze fell upon the person they were talking to. He looked Native American or something and had long black hair tied by in a ponytail. It reached to the ground.
"Okay every one this Heather. Heather this is everyone."
Danny and Bec just looked up at me and then started talking again. The guy they were talking with before stoof up and walked over to me with a warm smile. "Cliff's the name" he introduced himself.
I smiled "I'm Heather, but I guess you already know that."
He chuckled slightly. He then looked past me "And that over there is Punk"
I looked behind me at the boy standing near the trees of the clearing He looked...distant like he was in a far away place. I couldn't take my eyes off his head. Across his whole scalp was a strangely designed tatoo.
"Right let's light the fire." Ashlee said a little excited. We lit the fire. It engolfed the wood and crates that were set up. We gathered around it.
"Hey, anyone got a good story?" Ashlee asked after a moment of silence. "Oh alright fine." he answered in a joking tone. He cleared his throat. "Okay about five years ago," he started "Back to a time when the Army base was still around, an elvan scientist by the name of Lexwyn Rufford worked in the underground labs at the base. Now he was married and had a child, a child without a mark unlike all the other elves. He was so ashamed by the child he stayed longer hours at the labs. "But one day, on the same day as the sons, he took him away and threw him into one of the cells in the labs. From then on he experimet on the poor kid and even injected him with different genes to make him a monster. But one night the boy escaped the labs, along with other specimans. They say that they escaped to this very forest, and they could be right here, right now...watching us..." Everyone fell silent. "That's a not a story" Bec said a nervous tone in her voice.
Was she scared.
I pondered on the story. It didn't sound possible at all. A scientist experimenting on his own son, that was just awful.
I felt a gaze on the side of my face. I think it was Cliff. Why was he looking at me?
A cracking sound filled the atmosphere. We all turned to look but there was nothing there.
"You guys hear that?" Ashlee asked. "We'll go check it out" Punk said.
"And me and Heather will stay here at camp" Cliff suggested.
My eyes widened slightly. Did I hear him right?
Everyone else ran into the forest. Cliff walked up to with a smile on his face. "No use in u getting bored is there?"
"Well then what do you want to do?"
He pondered for a moment "We Native Americans have this special dance we do on occasions like this. Just follow what I do."
He folded his arms. I folded mine. Then he started to dance around looking like an emu or some weird bird. I laughed and joined in. I wasn't as good as he was. I don't know how long we did it for but it was a load of fun. We both laughed at the end. I'd completely forgotten about the others.
Cliff rubbed the back of his neck as a nervous gesture. "You have really...pretty hair."
 I felt myself blush in the cheeks and my face get hot. I turned my face a away from his. "I could say the same for you..."
He chuckled a little. "No need to be shy around me,"
 Just then I heard something crack. "Did you hear that?" I asked turning around to see.
"Yeah" Cliff answered following my gaze.
Silence hung in the air. Then a scream of pain ripped through the atmosphere. I began to feel worried. Another crack and this time it sound sickening, like a bone cracking. My head began to feel dizzy as I heard foot steps head this way... Ashlee came running in from the forest. She had a panic look on her face. "Did you guy's hear that?" "Yeah.No idea what it is though," I said "Any idea?" "If you ask me it's probably Punk up to his old tricks" Ashlee said "Or that Bec saw a bug." "Hold on I'll call them in." Cliff said his voice edged with announce. "Oi, guys, you out there?! GUYS! This isn't a joke, come on!!"
No response came. I heard a crack of a stick and it was close. "Did you hear that?"
We all turned to the sound. We all sceramed in unison as we saw it...
TO BE CONTINUED...
Right, part 1 done. I know it is a bit slow but it'll pick up in the next part. If you can please rate and comment, I really appreciated it. Any questions let me know. Also, sorry if there is any spelling and grammer mistakes that I missed. I'm not sure how long this story is going to go for but we'll see. Thank you for reading and I hope you enjoyed it.
Keep Creating and Siming everybody!!
-Warrayfinson

Slient Fear - part 1

Aug 24, 2008 by Warrayfinson
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    27 Comment(s) posted so far

    On Aug 25, 2008 clairepitts1994 wrote:

    cool story\:rah\:

    On Aug 25, 2008 Jaws3 wrote:

    That is so good!\:D

    On Aug 25, 2008 bosnombehar wrote:

    Not bad. \:\) I like your horror stories, they're different than the rest here! \;\) Can't wait for the next part. \:rah\:

    On Aug 25, 2008 wrote:

    Nice chapter\:D \:D

    On Aug 25, 2008 Ultra-Violet wrote:

    Oh my gosh that was sooooo freaky the bone cracking part sent me under the table.\:D \:D LOL Fantastic absolutely brilliant can't wait to see what happens next.

    On Aug 25, 2008 iluvhorses13 wrote:

    Good job. You're definitely improving each time you write.\;\)

    On Aug 25, 2008 Fikcija wrote:

    Interesting beginning, really. I'll be SO looking forward to the next part! And thanks for letting me know about this new story \;\) 5.0

    On Aug 25, 2008 islandchild97 wrote:

    OMG!!!!!!!!!!!! LOVED IT!! SO CREEPYYYYYY\:rah\: \:rah\: \:D

    On Aug 25, 2008 butteryy wrote:

    Great beginning! The suspense of no knowing what they saw or what was making the cracking noise is intense. I can't wait for the next part! \:D

    On Aug 25, 2008 Username111 wrote:

    Thrilling! \:rah\:

    On Aug 25, 2008 tonya99rn wrote:

    Loved it as usual!Great work!\:D

    On Aug 25, 2008 qasert wrote:

    \:D

    On Aug 26, 2008 kazakh wrote:

    Excellent story! \:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\:
    I love the pictures you take. The bonfire from upside, the view through the trees and so on. You're really great at this!

    On Aug 26, 2008 ScoobySnax wrote:

    I like it, I like it alot, I definitely saw the arm of someone hiding in the trees \:confused\:

    On Aug 27, 2008 stephanie1225 wrote:

    very very good \:D

    On Aug 27, 2008 Livdude wrote:

    Can't wait for the next part of the story. \:rah\: Good start to the sotryline, where did you get Ashlee's hair from?

    On Aug 27, 2008 wrote:

    Is it me or does cliff's story sound familiar...\;\) 5.0 awesome story

    On Aug 31, 2008 Little Cloud wrote:

    I really liked it. And it was really cool how you mixed the two stories!!!\:rah\:

    On Sep 6, 2008 hiedibear75 wrote:

    WTG! \:rah\: 5.0 \:cool\: Too bad about her and her "mum". \:\( It's a shame when kids feel that way. \:wacko\: Great use of shot through the trees looking at them. \:D I'm so gonna have to go read the next one to see what's "out there". \:eek\: Great job! \:wub\:

    On Sep 7, 2008 skyblue7377 wrote:

    I saw your last chapter of this storyline and just had to read the whole thing from the begining. I adore scary movies and scary books so when I saw this I was plesantly suprised. Not only that but I can tell I won't be disapointed=)

    On Sep 7, 2008 LIUBlueJeans wrote:

    Nice start...off to read the rest.

    On Sep 13, 2008 cutedazy wrote:

    very nice!

    On Sep 21, 2008 wrote:

    I'm going to go read the next chapter now! Very good!!\:rah\: \:D

    On Oct 3, 2008 lisa9999 wrote:

    Now you have peaked my interest!\:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Apr 16, 2009 LellieG wrote:

    I LOVE this Warray. \:rah\:

    On May 1, 2009 fabrizioammollo wrote:

    You master the suspance \:\).

    On Jul 6, 2009 Desu Baloney wrote:

    0.0
    Woah

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