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The Adaline Legacy pt. 2 ( FULL )
Published Jul 30, 2012


Written By

courtneymh

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Srry for the full version taking so long, I hope it won't mess up again! Hope you like it!

Oh, and any weird names you see like "blutbad" are creature names from the series, Grimm, best show on earth! And i hope it will let me show the link to the book of the names and what they are in here...

http://www.nbc.com/grimm/exclusives/trailer/

and if u r wandering where to go, just click the door than the desk then the book! and go to any of the names i used!

Srry for the full version taking so long, I hope it won't mess up again! Hope you like it!

Oh, and any weird names you see like "blutbad" are creature names from the series, Grimm, best show on earth! And i hope it will let me show the link to the book of the names and what they are in here...

http://www.nbc.com/grimm/exclusives/trailer/

and if u r wandering where to go, just click the door than the desk then the book! and go to any of the names i used!
The nightmare is still going, who is that man?! Where is my mom?! Why is my moms necklace so important? We're in a house. More like a mansion than a house, it's huge! Also very old. And spooky, I think it might be haunted. I see someone again, it's me. But I look older, maybe 15 or 16. I'm trying to fight this thing, it looks like the thing from the park. My mom says monsters aren't real! Why is it that I can only see it! That man again, who is he? Who ever he is he must be a good man. Because he's helping me. I'm looking around for something to hit it with, but all there is is a rusty broom. I try to hit it with it but it doesn't work. I can hardly do anything, I feel defenseless, no one can help me! It's picking me up now, I keep screaming and screaming. But nothing.
...
Mom- OK, waky waky! Time to wake up!

We hear the doorbell ring, but she managed to give me a quick change before she opened the door.
Mom- Wow... I haven't seen you in forever. How are you?
Jake- Fine, what about you? (He asked in a friendly tone.)
Mom- Good, who's this?
Jake- That's my son, Luke. Who's this?
Mom- Little miss Adaline! Can you say hi?!
Me- Hi!
Mom- Isn't she adorable?!
Jake- Yes she is. Can you say Hi Luke?
Apparently he just smiled at me. I new at that moment we would be best friends!

Jake- I guess he's a little shy.
Mom- I see that. *laughs* Maybe you should go play with Luke for a while as us grown ups talk ok?
Me- ok!
She sets me down on the ground and I just sit there until Jake put's Luke down. He shouldn't be more than a year older than me.

Mom- OK, now I'm going to go talk to Jake for a while. Don't go anywhere!
Me- OK.
Jake- There we go, Now go play with Adaline for a while OK?
Luke- OK!

Sounds way less shy now. We start to walk towards our parents and sit down in the back of them. Close enough to where we can barely hear them.
They start to talk to each other. They seem really close.

Mom- So um, how have you been?
Jake- Good, good, you?
Mom- Oh yeah, raising Adaline to be just like her mommy. Not to be rude but, what are you doing here? Your supposed to be in Bridgeport! Why did you come here?
Jake- I wanted to say hi, and our plane is delayed for the next few weeks. Maybe even months. And I thought...
Mom- You could crash here.
Jake- Is it a problem? Because our house has already been bought and I thought we would be long gone.
Mom- Oh no, it's fine. Just don't ruin anything.
She gives him a quick hug, but it seems like he doesn't want to let go.
He finally lets go, but still has her in an embrace.

Jake- Still the one I remember.

Mom- Yeah...

She starts to gaze into his eyes. His big blue eyes. But hey used to be green like her eyes used to be.


Mom- I know why you really came. It's because your eyes turned blue. You know what that means.

Jake- I know, they turned blue yesterday. How long have your eyes been blue?

Mom- A long time now, maybe 7 months.

Jake- That can't be! I haven't been able to see you since graduation!

Mom- Relax, I bet it's not going to happen for another month or so.

Jake- But I don't want it to ever happen.
Mom- But it's going to happen whether we like it or not. Just take care of her and tell her everything she needs to know about what she is.

Jake- I will. What happens when I'm gone?

Mom- Don't worry about that now. Just make sure she knows and Luke knows Before they turn into teenagers ok?

Jake- Ok.
Mom- I mean look at them. They're so innocent. But they gotta know what to do when they come.

Jake- I just hope nothing happens to them. I don't want to see them get hurt.

Mom- When they are teens they will protect each other. Maybe even when they are still kids. Make sure she gets this if I don't get the chance.

She holds her necklace out.

Jake- OK. They will be safe with me, for now anyway.

Mom- Don't say for now...

She starts to cry, I see she's been holding it in for the whole conversation.
She lets herself fall into his arms. She can't help it. She can't fight back the tears.

Jake- It's OK. Shhh, don't cry. Nothing bad will happen to them I promise.
Me- What do you think they've been talking about?

Luke- I don' know.
Me- They've been talking for long time.

Luke- What do you think they are talking about?

He can talk way better than me, I can't wait till Mom teaches me how to talk.
Me- I don't know. Wanna play with my dolls?

Luke- OK!
So we go and play with my dolls while our mom and dad go on a date, or something. I thought it was a play date. She waited for a while for the baby sitter to come. She gave me a kiss and was out the door. I guess it was going to be a really fun play date. Jake- That was nice of you to go buy a cake from that little girl.

Mom- Yeah, but it looked like no one even touched her food.

Jake- Is it good?

Mom- A little, is that glitter in there?

The laugh for a few seconds.

Jake- So, where's Micheal?

Mom- Oh, uhm. He kinda just left us there. But he left a note saying he would come back. One day.

Jake- Now how could some one leave a girl as beautiful as you?

She blushed.
Mom- So... Umm, what happened to Margret?

She started to blush non stop, so she folded her hands but her elbows shot up.
Jake- She died right when Luke was born.

They stayed silent for a few moments. He tried to crack a smile.
Mom- I'm so sorry. Are you OK?

Jake- Yeah, yeah. I'm fine, it's OK.



Mom- Maybe we should go home and check on the kids.

Jake- Oh, yeah.
They started to get up. Pulled out there chairs and stood.

Mom- Sorry if I made it feel awkward.

Jake- No, no. It was OK. I just haven't talked about it often, you know.
They both hear a rearing noise.

Mom- What was that?

Jake- I don't know.

They hear the noise again. But closer.

Mom- We should hurry.

Jake- Come on!

He grabs her hand and they run off. They actually run all the way home.

Mom- What was that thing?!

Jake- I don't know, I didn't get to take a look at it!

Mom- You think it may have been a Blutbad?

Jake- I don't know, but we're safe now. Relax...
He pulled my Mom in close to him.

Mom- You always knew how to calm me down.

Jake- And to make you blush.

Mom- Shut up.

Jake- Remember when we were fighting that Hexenbiest?

Mom- Yeah, you totally liked her.

Jake- Did not!

Mom- Did too!

They laughed for a moment.
Jake- I only thought she was cute!

My Mom let her head down a little.

Jake- But not as Beautiful as you.

They gazed into each others eyes.
He loosened his grip.

Jake- I still love you after all these years.

Mom- I do too. But I thought I would never see you again.

Jake- I love you.

Mom- I love you too.
Jake- I don't ever want to loose you again.

Mom- And you won't.

Jake- Yes I will, Why don't you understand that?

Mom- I know it's true, but I will always be with you. In your heart.
Mom- I will never forget you. Not now, and not ever.

Jake- Me either. Not now nor ever.

Mom- But don't let me be the one keeping you sad all the time. Just look at Adaline and think of me.

Jake- I will.
Mom- I love you so much.

Jake- I love you more than anything.
... ... ... Mom- Well, say good night to Luke.

Me- Good night.

Luke- Good Night!

Jake- I guess he's not shy any more.

Mom- I guess not.
... ... Mom- OK, nighty night!

Me- Night!
OK! That's pretty much the end of chapter 2!
*boo!*
Hey, hey. calm down! Chapter 3 will come out soon
*YAY!*
That's what I like to hear! I would like to thank the makers of CC. Thanks for all of the stuff you make! I wish I could list all of yall but I used over 100 cc so i don't know what yalls names are!
*HAHAHA*
I know I know, IM FUNNY! lol, jk,jk. But realy thank you for all that you do. I would also like to thank the makers of Grimm. ( season 2 comming out augest 13, mondays at 9 8 centural. ) I love your show! AMAZING! YOU INSPIRE ME! lol.

I would also like to thank TSR, I mean i wouldn't be doing any of this without you!
*duh!*
lol, I would also like to thank my friend lauren. for helping me with the romance stuff. ( I actually only used one of her ideas. The part when... IM NOT TELLING YOU! Cuz it isn't in this chapter and i don't wanna spoil it for ya.)

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