Stories / The Adaline Legacy
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Hello! This will be my second series! Hope you like it! I would like it if u leave any comments/criticism, or KK. I would call it cc, but that means custom content. Oh and remember, this is a 6th grader doing all this.
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Twards the ending i kinda changed it to where she is in the story and not telling it anymore... Srry, i'll keep it to where she is in it and not telling it. I like it that way!

Hello! This will be my second series! Hope you like it! I would like it if u leave any comments/criticism, or KK. I would call it cc, but that means custom content. Oh and remember, this is a 6th grader doing all this.
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Twards the ending i kinda changed it to where she is in the story and not telling it anymore... Srry, i'll keep it to where she is in it and not telling it. I like it that way! I guess your wondering who the real Adaline is? Well, I'm the one being read to. She is the best mom in the history of moms! She is kind, friendly, Eco friendly, and she's nurturing. even though she can barely work, she gives me everything. Back then, she would do anything for me. Since my dad had left us when I was just a day old. He left a note saying one day he would come back for me. But i knew it wasn't going to happen. When i got older of course.

Right now shes just reading me a story. Snow White And Seven Dwarfs. I loved that one. One day she took me to the park to teach me how to walk. I was riding in the stroller and I was having a blast. All the friendly people saying how cute i was. They didn't even notice i was still in pajamas. Me- Mommy! Mommy! Looky! A squirrel!
Mom- Yeah, see how it's putting nuts in it's mouth!
Me- Mommy, can i have it?
Mom- Oh no, it has to stay in it's home. OK?
Me- OK...

I was so Innocent then.Not knowing what would happen when i was just a month older. We both saw something on the way, it looked weird. I pointed at it. I couldn't make out what it was, I only got to see it for a second. It vanished when my mom noticed it. She told me we were close to the park, but I had my attention to the vanishing object. We finally arrived at the park. She immanently taught me how to walk, but it was fun! I didn't feel embarrassed that i was still in pj's. But I was a kid, i didn't get embarrassed yet. I wasn't thinking of the object anymore. Since I had a short attention span. I still could remember. Mom- Come on, we're almost done Hun! You can do it!

She was amazingly good at teaching. It wasn't hard at all for me to learn.

Mom- One more step... And you did it! I'm so proud of you! C'mon, let's go to the spring riders. It was an amazing day, I had so much fun. I learned to walk, I got to finally ride a spring rider, it was awesome! Except for seeing that strange object, But that's not going to ruin my day.

Mom- Are u having fun?
Me- Yeah! Hahahaha!
Mom- Well, it's time to go. It'll get dark soon.
Me- OK, Mommy. She was taking me home until she saw something, something strange. It looked like the thing i saw. She stood there for a moment. It felt like she wanted to run, but didn't want to scare me. I turned around and looked at it, It looked... Inhuman. We started our way home, trying not to stare at it. I didn't want to mention it, because i knew something would happen if i did. The only thing that i noticed, is that no one else noticed the inhuman beast. They were just going on with there business.

Didn't they see it? Didn't they react? Why didn't they react?

All those questions kept running through my head. But what was I supposed to do? I was a toddler who could barely speak, let alone walk. We just kept on walking home, I don't know why she didn't take me in the stroller. I don't even think we were going the right way! I think we were just trying to get away. And we are finally home, she put me straight to bed. It was a tiring day. I fell asleep instantly. She didn't seem as tired as me. But I'm just a kid, we get tired faster. I didn't even notice her necklace.
... ... ... I started to have wired dreams. Dreams of me as an adult, trying to fight something. And it looks like... Oh my god!
... I hope nothing happens to her...

The Adaline Legacy

Jul 18, 2012 by courtneymh
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    4 Comment(s) posted so far

    #1 On Jul 19, 2012 geulizz wrote:

    beautiful mommy.. \:wub\:
    i want read more.. \:rah\:

    #2 On Jul 19, 2012 starsky524 wrote:

    Really nice chapter one!! I really wanna see chapter 2!!!

    #3 On Jul 20, 2012 fruitopia wrote:

    What is weird inhuman thing, curious minds what to know.

    #4 On Jul 21, 2012 pancakewafflewarrior wrote:

    aaah, i love it. Can't wait for the next chapter!

     
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