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The final chapter : where all things end !
Please read the chapters 1 to 5 before this one. They all are on this site. ;)
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The french version will come later !

The final chapter : where all things end !
Please read the chapters 1 to 5 before this one. They all are on this site. ;)
***
The french version will come later !
 I didn't sleep well that night. I kept on hearing voices saying : "Help this guy !" So I made my choice ! I decided to help him.
While I was on my way to have breakfast, I heard noises in the "potion room." I was sure it was Joanne or Kitty preparing another potion. I had to talk with them, so I entered the "potion room". But nobody was there ! Some new potions were on the table and I wondered what they were really supposed to do. Again, I heard noises. They were coming from a corner of the room. I came closer to take a look of what was making those noises.
"GOD !!!! What is that... thing ?" "Oh no ! This can't be true !" "...a ... a dead guy ???" I run away, trying to find someone ! I found Joanne in the library. As I entered, completly panicked, I scared her ! "What is wrong my dear ?" she asked softly.
"I found a guy... a dead guy... in the potion room !" I mumbled. "He's not dead." she explained. "He is an... experiment that... didn't go too well !"
"What ?" I said. "Yes !" she continued. "I have to test my potions on living beings. I found a way to resurrect dead people and I use them to test my potions ! So you see, I don't kill them ! I offer them another change to live !" I could not believe what I was hearing ! Resurrecting people to kill them again ! That was... insane ! "My dear, you look puzzled ! " she said. " Come upstairs with me. I'll show you !" "There is nothing to be afraid of ! He can't harm us, he'll do everything I tell him !" So we came upstairs and Joanne ask the poor guy to drink one of the potion. And that's what he did ! Joanne was looking at him, expecting something to happen. Well ! He seemed to be fine... ... for a moment... ... and then, he collapsed ! ... and stayed there, on the ground... dead... again ! "What have you done ?" I asked Joanne. "You've killed that poor fellow !" "And then... what ?" she shouted. "Tests have to be done ! The result is my main concern !" "What would you prefer ? Killing all the neighboorhood ? The police has started to suspect me, so I found this new way !" "Now, if you don't mind, I have some work to do ! That 'poor fellow' as you said, has to be buried ! Will you help me ?"
"Oh my god !" I said. "No, I can't !" She left the room pulling the poor guy. I had to talk to someone ! But who ? Maybe Vlad ! Did he know what his wife was doing ? I had to wait for the night to talk with Vlad. Before leaving the room, I looked at the book again. What about burning it ? So many bad things came up with this book ! But if I burn it, I probably won't be able to help Vlad. As the night came down, I went and see Vlad in his room. He was painting as usual. He came to me, smiling, and I was happy to see him smile ! I told him everything : the dead guy, the tests of potions on the neighboorhood, the police that started to suspect Joanne. "Oh !" he said. " I suspected that my wife had to test potions, but I didn't know it was that bad ! She has to be stopped. Leave it to me ! I'll talk to her." "... but anyway !" he said smiling. "I had an idea ! We could do something for your face !" "What ? My face ?" I said.
I brought him awfull news and he was talking about my... face ? "You could be beautiful" he said. " There a lot of potions in the book. One could bring you beauty !" "A potion ?" I asked. "And I suppose Joanne will make this 'beauty potion' for me ! I don't trust her anymore !"
"No !" he said. "There is someone else ! You can trust Kitty. She will help you. Tell her what you've learned on Joanne, she probably doesn't know. And ask her to make that potion for you !" "Please, Horrora." he whispered. "Do it for me !"
I could not resist his charming smile and I said :
"Ok ! I'll do it !" "Great !" He said while taking me in his arms. Well, after all, if a potion could do something for my face... why not ? So I came and see Kitty. She was alone in the library. Again, I told everything : the dead guy, the tests of potions, the police... and the beauty potion ! She listened to me, and I saw on her face that everything was new to her ! She didn't know. "Are you sure ?" she asked me. "Maybe you could..."
"I am sure !" I replied. "I saw everything with my own eyes !" Then she felt very sad.
"So, she did it " she whispered. "She talked to me about testing potions on people." she continues. "But I thought she could never do it for real !" "What are you going to do now ?" I asked. "What do you want me to do ?" she said with anger. "She's my cousin and my best friend ! I can't go and see the police !" "I just can try to make her understand that her behaviour is awfull !" "... but for you, my sweet, Vlad told you the truth ! There is a potion indeed ! We can make it together. Do you want to ?" "Of course !" I replied. So, we went upstairs. While Kitty was giving me instructions, I followed the best I could. I don't know what I was doing exactly. I was just hoping not to mess this beauty potion ! And then, I filled a bottle with the strange liquid. Without thinking too much, I drank it. Well, nothing happened for a moment... ... and ... I suddenly failed unconscious ! I stayed unconscious during the whole day. When I woke up, Kitty was there in my bedroom. She was smiling at me. I rushed to the mirror, I had to know if the potion worked ! Well ! There was a difference ! Same old eyes, same old ears... but the rest ! Looking at myself without recognizing me was a strange experience ! But I was sure it could not last long ! "Thank you so much Kitty !" I said. "You're welcome, my dear." she replied. She was the nicest person in this house ! I didn't how to thank her properly, but she found a way ! "You must do something for me" she said. "Well, not only for me, but for everyone ! You must help me to get rid of Joanne ! I talked to her. She feels no regret for what she's done and she will go on !" "What do you want me to do ?" I asked. "I've prepared a bottle of poison." she replied. "I will go downstairs and talk with Joanne. In the meantime, put that poison in her youth elixir. She has to drink it every evening... and this evening, it will kill her !" "But ! Are you sure ?" I asked. "If she finds me ?"
"She won't !" Kitty replied. "I'll stay with her enough time to avoid her from going upstairs ! It's safe ! Remember that she killed a lot of people... including your own parents ! There is no other way to stop her and to help Vlad at the same time ! You and I will carry on the research to find a cure." She was right. So while she came down, I went to the "elixir" room with the poison with me. ... and I mixed it with the strange green liquid. Well ! I was a murderer now ! Did I feel guilty ? No time to think about it ! I went upstairs to see Vlad. He was painting... again... as usual ! "Horrora !" he said. "How beautiful you are now !" "And you're skin is so soft !" As he came closer, I felt that my heart was beating faster. ... and... well... yes, I was looking for this ! But, as I was still delighted by that kiss, Vlad began to do something strange ! He was trying to hypnotize me... ... with success ! Then, he bited me ! I was totally helpless ! "Ha Ha Ha !" he laughed. "I DID IT !" What was happening to me ? It was awful ! Then I realized I was now a vampire ! "What have you done to me ?" I shouted. "I did exactly what I've planned to do for months !" Then, he began to change ! "Yes ! I'm finally myself again ! Thanks to you !" "Joanne discovered that the only way for me to break the spell, was to bite someone who was willing to help me ! So Joanne and I made a plan. We choosed you, the little ugly girl who was always staring at our house ! I had to seduce you ! You had to trust me, and after what Joanne did to your parents, the only way for you to trust me, was to be convinced that Joanne was on her own... that I had nothing to do with her killings !" "NOOOOOOOOO !" I shouted. "By the way, my dear ! Look behind you !" he said. "Are you surprised to see me alive Horrora ?" Joanne said. "Well, that poor Kitty had never been able to keep a secret ! Poor thing ! She's dead now !" "I"m going to kill you ! You monster !" I shouted. "Of course not, my dear !" she said softly. "Because I have another little surprise for you !" She came closer to the strange device and took the phone. What was she doing ? That was insane ! Suddenly, a green fog surrounded us all... ... and in the middle of the fog, someone appeared. "No ! No ! NOOO !" I shouted. " DAD ! "
Yes ! Joanne did it ! She woke up my dad from the dead ! "Yes !" she said happily. "So now you see my dear, I know I will sleep well for the rest of my life, because if something happens to me, or to my husband or to my son... your dad will... die ! His life is in your hands ! So be careful !" And now here I am ! Locked inside this house, painting all night long, thinking of all the things that happened... ... thinking of revenge. But I have time now... ... and they don't !

**** THE END ! ****

The Blood House : The final chapter

Jun 4, 2012 by Vlana
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    73 Comment(s) posted so far

    On Jun 30, 2006 Vlana wrote:

    First, I would like to thanks all the kind people who posted comments on my story. Thank you all ! I hope you'll like this very final chapter ! \;\)

    On Jul 3, 2006 WitchyMama wrote:

    oh my, that was great, definatly ended nowhere near where I thought it would. You have done an excellent job with this story...

    On Jul 3, 2006 PRDGirls wrote:

    Wow, great ending! Not what I expected at all \:\)

    On Jul 3, 2006 McBeal wrote:

    Unexpected ending, i loved it!!! I told you SEEK AND DESTROY but you didn't listen to me \:D Too bad it's the end... \:\(

    On Jul 3, 2006 seasonsgreetings wrote:

    \:ph34r\: \:rah\:

    WOW I so was not expecting that ending..... Omg great story, can't wait for the next book.

    On Jul 3, 2006 TheMistress666 wrote:

    Bravo! excellent story! i wasnt expecting that to happen! \:wub\:

    On Jul 3, 2006 wrote:

    a very good one.I really didnt expect that ending but it is very intresting! i read every chapter of this story and i loved it all \:wub\: ! hope you are going to make anthor story as good as this one! why did it have to end?....\:\(

    On Jul 3, 2006 Love4oneAnother wrote:

    Great ending - it's a shame Vlad turned out to be so cruel, just like his now-elderly wife, but how long can he still be attracted to a woman old enough to be his grandmother? I bet he'll go back to Horrora in the next book, provided you write another...you'd better! \;\)

    On Jul 3, 2006 tonkpils24 wrote:

    \:wub\:

    On Jul 3, 2006 MissJay wrote:

    That was GREAT!!!!! And unexpected (as if everyone else hadn't said that already!) I hope you do another one! \:cool\:

    On Jul 3, 2006 LilyoftheValleyICE wrote:

    Ha! I loved the ending! At first I thought there was no hope for Horrora and I was like "Nooo!" just like she was, but then you added that awesome little bit about revenge at the end. XD I loved it!! Maybe one day you could even make a sequel in which she does get her revenge! Bwah ha! This was fun to read, so reading another of yours would be just as fun...*hint*...*coughs*...*hint*. lol. Great! \:D \:D

    P.S. I so did my dance and it was a huge success besides the chair I crashed into and the wall I fell through. Just kidding! XD

    On Jul 3, 2006 *louise* wrote:

    Great twist at the end! Congratultions on such a great series of stories.\:\)

    On Jul 3, 2006 sheneiney wrote:

    that was the best chapter yet. it was so spooky yet very cool. you should make a sequel

    On Jul 4, 2006 wrote:

    I would like all of you to look at my comment on the previous chapter when I gave advice on what she should do. Note the date was before this chapter was posted. \;\)

    Overall great story!!! It was very interesting and creative. I can't wait until you come up with another one!! BTW if you could, check out my story, Sim University Hospital and see what you think!

    On Jul 4, 2006 D2Diamond wrote:

    WOW! Awesome twist! This whole story was so great, and the shots were so clear and done really well done. I really hope you continue this story. I'd love to read it and/or any other stories you submit. Five Stars!

    On Jul 4, 2006 minsmusic wrote:

    FANTASTIC set of stories Vlana. I've been looking forward to each of them. You've kept the intrigue going with each chapter, and WHAT a conclusion! YAY! I love stories that don't have predictable happily ever after endings! I think it's very creative and brave! Well done.\:\)

    On Jul 4, 2006 neenornina wrote:

    Wonderful twist at the end ! You write so well ! Thank you for sharing xx

    On Jul 5, 2006 tephielea wrote:

    Wow great story but you could do more.. Hope!!

    On Jul 5, 2006 spottsmom wrote:

    What a fantastic ending.
    I loved the whole story. You kept me on the end of my chair wanting to know more and not wanting it to end. You have great talent.
    I can not wait to see what you come up with next. \:D

    On Jul 5, 2006 cos65 wrote:

    \:\( I did'nt really like it

    sorry
    \:confused\:

    On Jul 5, 2006 SimsBarbie wrote:

    wow...great ending! Its nice to have a little evil in a few stories.\:ph34r\:

    On Jul 5, 2006 vivz wrote:

    The ending was really twisty. Greatttt story overall!

    On Jul 5, 2006 mainegal wrote:

    That was a twist I didn't expect. I love that in stories. Thank you for yet another really good chapter. I feel really bad for Horrora. Thanks again for a great story. I look forward and hope to see more stories from you. \:rah\:

    On Jul 7, 2006 Koronoin wrote:

    Wow! that was so cool!!\:cool\:

    On Jul 7, 2006 Jubilant wrote:

    That was insane. Totally loved the ending. Bravo! \:D

    On Jul 7, 2006 willowswand wrote:

    \:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\: that was really good, ever thought about a career in the film industry.

    On Jul 8, 2006 ConnieR2003 wrote:

    Awesome story line with a great twist! (Sniff) but I was hoping for a happy ending lol \:ph34r\: \:D

    On Jul 9, 2006 shiva_jmr wrote:

    this was a very very cool story i just love it
    \:wub\: \:wub\: \:wub\: \:wub\: \:wub\: \:wub\:

    On Jul 13, 2006 Olga2102 wrote:

    Scary story

    On Jul 19, 2006 nikki40336 wrote:

    This has to be one of the most amazing stories I have read! Excellent job! Can't wait to see what you come up with next.

    On Jul 19, 2006 baconhead91 wrote:

    \:D you are the best! awesome story

    On Jul 22, 2006 wrote:

    The ending was so unexpected but I still loved the story\:rah\: \:cool\: \:P

    On Jul 24, 2006 Kismyname wrote:

    These stories were absolutely amazing. I loved them. Please write more!\:D

    On Aug 6, 2006 Jasmine206 wrote:

    Wow! How creative! Amazing! What a cool story! \:rah\: 5.0!!!

    On Aug 12, 2006 Sergeykins332 wrote:

    =O man if i can get my hands on those eyes AAAAAAAAAH T_T translation: loved it! i want those eyes NOW! XD ~Serge

    On Aug 18, 2006 cns244 wrote:

    I liked it!\:D Keep on making stories please..\:\)

    On Aug 20, 2006 Tuesdai wrote:

    I loved it. Mostly the ending. Now that part was great.\:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Aug 23, 2006 Karie wrote:

    Wow! I just finished your whole story and I LOVED it. I wish there were more chapters to go with it. You had me on the edge of my seat and I could hardly wait to get from one chapter to the next. You did a great job. \:D Just like everyone else said, the ending was a great surprise....

    On Sep 10, 2006 Lidia wrote:

    Great story! Loved it from start to finish.\:D

    On Sep 16, 2006 huntress2005 wrote:

    that was a great story \:cool\:

    On Sep 28, 2006 darqstar wrote:

    Wow, that was fantastic! Great job.

    On Oct 8, 2006 Mistress Useless wrote:

    YAAAAA! What a scary ending!

    On Oct 17, 2006 zlsuter wrote:

    that was a great story, keep up all the good work \:rah\:

    On Oct 19, 2006 rafaelwow wrote:

    Very good creation! \:D

    On Nov 4, 2006 MoriaG wrote:

    awwwwwwwww, the only wrong with her was her nose. but i have to admit she does look alot better now. hehehe, love the story

    On Nov 9, 2006 wrote:

    Just wanted to also say that I loved your whole story, I never expected that ending. Thankyou for writing it!

    On Nov 12, 2006 wrote:

    \:rah\:

    On Dec 6, 2006 civetinja wrote:

    Thanks!!!! Great story \:\)

    On Dec 10, 2006 kiwiana girl wrote:

    cool story

    On Dec 23, 2006 Pete789 wrote:

    \:rah\:

    On Dec 28, 2006 Nikouchoco wrote:

    Splendide ! Quel dénouement !!! \:rah\: It's a marvelous story Vlana ! Good job ! \:D

    On Dec 30, 2006 Lizziecat62 wrote:

    OHMYGOD! wot happened? I can't believe that they did that to her! Cool story tho!\:D

    On Jan 4, 2007 manuela55 wrote:

    \:D

    On Feb 2, 2007 wrote:

    Very good story! Congratulations!\:\)

    On Feb 13, 2007 Palina wrote:

    Fantastic and wonderful set of stories!! Your characters were all wonderful!!!\:\)

    On May 25, 2007 spacemouse wrote:

    Great story. \:cool\:

    On Jun 1, 2007 nanapon wrote:

    l'OH ma ça alors quelle histoire impressionnante ! tellement tellement si inattendu ! ! j'aime cette histoire parce que c'est ainsi differnet de toutes mariage, enceinte, histoires de scandale. Great job! \:\)

    On Jun 18, 2007 MinnieID wrote:

    GREAT ENDING! I thought the vampire was hot xD where do you get the vampires from? i was always wondering bout that...

    On Jun 18, 2007 MinnieID wrote:

    PERFECT 5.0 \:wub\:

    On Aug 8, 2007 andi and grim wrote:

    wow grate twist in the tale luv it \:wub\: \:rah\:

    On Aug 8, 2007 andi and grim wrote:

    i for got to rate \:o

    On Aug 12, 2007 Wigwog wrote:

    Wow, amazing!!!

    On Sep 9, 2007 EnchantedRose wrote:

    Wow amazing story so glad i went to the last page of the storys to see the ones i missed i defitanely have to go and see if you wrote anymore you are a great writer keep up the work\:rah\:

    On Oct 19, 2007 maxi king wrote:

    \:cool\:that was a great story!!!!!!! \:rah\:

    On Jan 26, 2008 jadespacemonkey wrote:

    I can't believe that was the final chapter,\:wacko\: you done an amazing job....

    On Jun 13, 2008 ritakwolf wrote:

    \:rah\: very good story with a very goos twist at the end\:rah\:

    On Oct 22, 2008 cutedazy wrote:

    awesome!

    On Nov 14, 2008 saturrn wrote:

    I love your stories...you are really good at this

    On Nov 23, 2008 damnanoir wrote:

    cette histoire est la plus belle et intéressante qui j'ai jamais lit!

    5.0! \:wub\: \:cool\:

    On Nov 28, 2008 skyblue7377 wrote:

    always so wonderfull...love your work

    On Dec 7, 2008 fee sims wrote:

    that was great, not what i expected.

    On Dec 7, 2008 fee sims wrote:

    you should think about writing a book if it was as good as this i would buy it.\:D \:D \:\)

    On Aug 14, 2010 melaniecox wrote:

    Fantastic twist.
    Didn't think Joanne or vlad could be trusted.
    well done, very creative and original.

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