Stories / The Night People .:part 2:.
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Hey everyone!
Now I know what some of you might be thinking,'Wait, this isn't right, what with the title on the cover?' Well this is let you all know that it will be changed to 'The Silence'. Thanks to everyone who read and also the people who read the first part, it really means a lot to me that you like the story so far, and I hope you like this part as well. My biggest thanks goes to Rabold8 for making these apartments, Ican't thank you enough. Dedication goes to Fikcija, she not only inspired this story but she actually came up with the idea for this chapter.
Hope you al like this part!
Read on...

Hey everyone!
Now I know what some of you might be thinking,'Wait, this isn't right, what with the title on the cover?' Well this is let you all know that it will be changed to 'The Silence'. Thanks to everyone who read and also the people who read the first part, it really means a lot to me that you like the story so far, and I hope you like this part as well. My biggest thanks goes to Rabold8 for making these apartments, Ican't thank you enough. Dedication goes to Fikcija, she not only inspired this story but she actually came up with the idea for this chapter.
Hope you al like this part!
Read on... I didn't know what to think. My heart was beating at a fast rate. I felt dizzy and was about to throw up. I looked around the room seeing no evidance that someone had been here.
The phone rang.... I ran out of my room towards the phone. "H-Hello?" Even my voice sounded shaky and scraed.
"Isabella, is that you?" Relief washed over me when I heard Simone on the other end. "You sound really worried..."
"N-No I'm fine. I'm just...tired..."
"No your not. What happened?"
"You wouldn't believe"
"Try me..." I took in a deep breath. I told her the whole story. She didn't interrupt at all while I told the story. My voice started to shake when I got to the bit where I screamed.
"Your right, I don't believe you" Simone said.
"You have to believe, come on Simone, please? When have I ever lied to you"
"...That's true. You wouldn't lie to me about anything. It's just so hard to believe."
 "I know but I don't know what to do" I said my voice having a worried note in it now.
"Hmm...You have three options. One, call the police. Two, go confront your neighbour. And three, get on with your day."
Strange I deas coming from Simone. "I'll think about it. What did you want to call me about?"
"Oh, nothing. We just arrived in Fiji and were at this house near the beach shore."
From what I could tell I could hear cars in background. That's strange, maybe she was near a road. She did just say she was NEAR the beach shore.
"I have to go, Brian's calling me. Let me know if anything else happens."
"No wait, Simone -" The phone the other end hung up.
I stood there for a few moments. I had a bad feeling about option one, and option two couldn't be done because she had moved out. I guess I had to with option three then. I went back to my room after breakfast and got changed I could get this morning off my mind as I walked out of the apartment. A FEW HOURS LATER...
I came back from the shop with the perfect present for mum, a new computer. She was always complaining her computer was old and rusty, so I booked to get her a new one. I owed my mum a lot. She has always been there for me and always will be.
I walked throught the doors of the Parisian Apartments and walked up to the elevator. I saw there was an elderly woman in there already. She looked a lot like my mother actually, it was almost like they were twins. I stepped in and the door shut closed behind me. We stood in silence as the elevator went up. I could feel her stare at me. I turned my head to look at her. She quickly looked away. I looked at what floor we were on. It seemed to be very slow today. I felt her stare on the side of my face. I ignored her as she continued to stare.
"I have never seen eyes like yours." She had a croaky, hoarse voice. I turned to look at her again. I smiled nervously. This was very weird and strange. Then I looked away. Couldn't the elevator go any faster?! I could still feel her gaze on my face. "Pretty eyes, like clear blue topaz." I did my best to ignore her. When the elevator doors opened, I didn't care what floor they opened on, I stepped out all too quickly. I felt embarressed because I she may have thought I was being rude not responding ans trying to get out of there was soon as possible. I was glad it was the right floor. When I looked back to the elevator the elderly woman smiled and waved at me. I quickly turned around went into my apartment as the elevator doors closed. As I walked to the kitchen I couldn't stop thinking about that woman. She seemed strange, a lot like my neighbour...a lot like her.... Later that night I got ready for bed but I couldn't sleep. How could I sleep? No, I wasn't going to fall asleep tonight, no, no way. I won't even blink...
I felt my eyes open. Oh great, I fell asleep. I felt my head. Nothing different. My eyes seemed really blurry this morning. I rubbed them as I stood up. My eyes didn't change. What? I rubbed them again to make sure... No different, in fact now it was worse. What?! I looked down at my arm... I think it was my arm, I wasn't sure. Everything seemed so bright and blurry. WHAT WAS GOING ON?! Now my eyes were different. I looked up from my arm I jumped and nearly fell foward. I could see these painting surronding me. Pictures of...my eyes.... I needed to find the mirror. My hand searched the room. I felt like a blind person, I was a blind. I found the mirror after what felt like hours of searching. It felt so cold under my fingertips. I took a step back and saw the mirrors outline. I couldn't see my self clearly at first, the paintings were very clear to see. I blink and the paintings on the wall behind me disappeared. I saw more clearly. I gasped. MY EYES, WHAT HAPPENED TO THEM?! No, no, no, no!! Whay was this happening to me?! I blinked again and everything went bright and blury and again. I felt so dizzy all of a sudden, like the whole world was crashing around me. I fell to the floor. I crawled to the door but stopped because I felt as though I was out of breath. I breathed heavily and gasped for air. I couldn't get up no matter how many times I tried. I wanted to call for help but it seemed like my voice was caught in my throat and didn't plan on leaving there. I tried to stand up again but my legs felt numb and shaky. I blinked again and the paintings of the eyes appeared all around me again.
Then I heard one phrase, repeating over and over in my head "I have never seen eyes like yours..." TO BE CONTINUED....
A little longer then the last one, I think. Thanks for reading the story and I hope liked this part. If you have time please commenting. AND DON'T FORGET: THE TITLE OF THE STORY IS GOING TO BE CANGED TO The Silence.
Thanks againa everyone. You guys ROCK!
Keep Siming and Creating!!
-Warrayfinson.

The Night People .:part 2:.

Nov 2, 2008 by Warrayfinson
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    62 Comment(s) posted so far

    On Nov 3, 2008 Livdude wrote:

    Excellent\:P Pure genius cous\:cool\: 5.0 from the judges (well, me)

    On Nov 3, 2008 zucchinideen wrote:

    \:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Nov 3, 2008 Jaws3 wrote:

    Loved it!\:D \:P

    On Nov 3, 2008 atangki wrote:

    Great part! \:D And is every part of her body going to be taken away from her? LOL. Poor her! \:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Nov 3, 2008 jackieQ789 wrote:

    wow i loved it cant wait to read the next part thanks for sharing\:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Nov 3, 2008 Fikcija wrote:

    It's so awesome that you used my idea for a story! \:D I knew you'd make a great one. Can't wait for the next part \:rah\: You got me wondering what comes next!

    On Nov 3, 2008 wrote:

    OOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! how spooky... and how fab and groovy that ur continuing the story!!!can't wait 4 the next one!

    On Nov 3, 2008 jennnnnie02 wrote:

    I can't imagine what will be taken next. So its official, old ladies really are the creepiest people alive. Another excellent chapter and hopefully I'll remember the new name. Please continue with the story, its excellent! \:D \:D

    On Nov 3, 2008 shelllharn wrote:

    hey i absolutley love this story it is so freaky haha you are a great writer plz keep up the excellent work xxx \:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\: 5.0

    On Nov 3, 2008 evi wrote:

    Great!\:rah\:

    On Nov 3, 2008 -kalisa- wrote:

    Scary...VERY scary...\:eek\: Can't wait for the next part!\:rah\: 5.0

    On Nov 3, 2008 Little Cloud wrote:

    Very creepy \:eek\:!!! It's like the people are taking away bits and pieces from her, slowly, but surely! Can't wait for the next part \:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Nov 3, 2008 Earcat wrote:

    Creepy! Great story! I can hardly wait for the next part.

    On Nov 3, 2008 jarlet wrote:

    It's my favourite story at the moment! very creepy...and suspensefull! I haven't a clue how it will end; It looks like a nightmare, a spooky daydream...Can't wait for the next part!\:cool\: \:D

    On Nov 3, 2008 kezsridg wrote:

    Love this chapter again!!! It's getting so suspenseful now...I wonder if its just a dream or if she's really being haunted? Anyways 5.0 here!\:wub\:

    On Nov 3, 2008 tonya99rn wrote:

    \:\) Can't wait for the next part!\:\)

    On Nov 3, 2008 lassekatten wrote:

    whoouw. thats awsome. but poor her \:P 5.0 !! \:wub\:

    On Nov 3, 2008 narniana wrote:

    Cool part!!And scary too...\:eek\: \:D

    On Nov 3, 2008 leifofdel wrote:

    So interesting and a bit creepy. Loved it.\:wub\: \:P \:\)

    On Nov 3, 2008 smiley00girl wrote:

    WOW I loved it! Great part! Keep up the good work!\:D \:P \:D

    On Nov 3, 2008 Foxy8609 wrote:

    \:rah\: woot! I love this series its soooo spooky!

    On Nov 3, 2008 DiddakoiGirl wrote:

    Woah....Freaky \;\)

    On Nov 3, 2008 pretty_bunny wrote:

    What is with all these people taking her body parts, its like a horrible and scary dream! But I love it!

    On Nov 3, 2008 skyblue7377 wrote:

    oh wow...so good...I love it!!!!

    On Nov 3, 2008 candy820 wrote:

    Awesomely scary! \:o I hope it's just a bad dream.\:cool\: \:D \:D

    On Nov 3, 2008 wwechick38 wrote:

    this is creepy. but really good. a well-earned 5.0 \:\)

    On Nov 4, 2008 cep1247 wrote:

    Great chapter. This story is really coming along well. Just woundering but are continuing the other story you started, War of the Ancients?? Really good work on this chapter her eyes are REALLY creepy!!! 5.0!\:D

    On Nov 4, 2008 Rabold8 wrote:

    \:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\: Wow Warrayfinson, this isn't scary at all! Just kidding! This one really freaked me out! This is actually kind of thrilling! VERY INTENSE! \:eek\: I cannot wait for the next part, I just hope that this doesn't keep me up at night! LOL! Anyway, this really is an amazing story, you are so talented! Thanks again for crediting me as well; I can't wait for th next chapter! :

    On Nov 4, 2008 charray wrote:

    Very good part \:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Nov 4, 2008 redtheprep wrote:

    i love ett plzzz continue

    On Nov 4, 2008 wickedgoddess_athena711 wrote:

    Eeep! Who are they? hm.what did they do to her eyes?\:o (me scared) and i have a feeling that old woman did something to her mother as well. Cant wait what will happen next! \;\) \:D

    On Nov 4, 2008 Luecy wrote:

    This story FREAKS ME OUT \:puke\: \:confused\: Anyway nice chapter , looking forward for more \:rah\:

    On Nov 4, 2008 mogan44 wrote:

    Excellent chapter, the pic of her new "eyes" was kinda scary lol

    On Nov 4, 2008 nelsonj wrote:

    \:rah\:

    On Nov 5, 2008 angeliney wrote:

    whoa this is creepy, but very good. very very nice job. keep it up! i wanna see what happens. \:cool\:

    On Nov 5, 2008 stephanie1225 wrote:

    Scary!!\:D

    On Nov 5, 2008 odett wrote:

    Oooooh wow thats really creepy,Very very good work\:rah\:

    On Nov 5, 2008 lisa9999 wrote:

    I saw it coming, but it still startled me! Great job. But what is next........\:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Nov 5, 2008 bosnombehar wrote:

    OH this poor girl, makes me really wonder why this all happens to her? \:confused\: 5.0!!

    On Nov 5, 2008 da_chick44493 wrote:

    Amazing.............this one is even more interesting!

    On Nov 6, 2008 PenelopeT wrote:

    LOVED it! It was pretty creepy. I can't wait for the next chapter. \:rah\:

    On Nov 7, 2008 Hardyfan101 wrote:

    That was creepy!! I LOVED IT!!!!!!!!\:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Nov 7, 2008 mihimarugt wrote:

    Really nice keep it up!!Can't wait for the next part!!Thanks!!\:\)

    On Nov 7, 2008 simsnina wrote:

    ctually awesome! Is the next thing that is going to go her voice as its called the silence! I am really hooked on this story now! great job you've done!

    LY x \:rah\: \:wub\: \:cool\:

    On Nov 7, 2008 sabsiix33 wrote:

    Great Part \:rah\:

    On Nov 7, 2008 wrote:

    love it 5wow cool that was creepy \:wub\: 5.0\:rah\:

    On Nov 7, 2008 wrote:

    soory that 5 shouldent be there \:o \:D

    On Nov 8, 2008 Downunder2006 wrote:

    Very creepy,but i loved it 5.0 \:wub\: \:rah\:

    On Nov 8, 2008 butteryy wrote:

    How scary! This kinda reminds me of the movie 'Jeepers Creepers'...kinda. Are her hears gonna be taken in the next one, is that why its getting changed to 'The Silence?' haha. Great job, can't wait for the next part! \;\)

    On Dec 7, 2008 supersimcookie wrote:

    OMG! I LOVED THE SECOND PART BETTER THEN THE FIRST! YOU ROCK!
    Keep on writing! Love, supersimcookie

    On Dec 15, 2008 simslover123 wrote:

    OMG was the old lady walking through the door???\:D \:D \:D

    On Dec 18, 2008 xPinkCornX wrote:

    5/5 totaly !!
    Love it

    On Dec 20, 2008 CE-A-CE wrote:

    sooo awesome cant wait until next part!!!\:rah\:

    On Dec 25, 2008 chaz95 wrote:

    Amazing!

    You have to do more \:\)

    On Jan 30, 2009 simsbababii wrote:

    cant wait for the next part.

    On Feb 3, 2009 nytika wrote:

    wow i really liked this part.

    On Feb 15, 2009 miller1220 wrote:

    What's next, her ears? And her nose? And her mouth? Jeez!!!! GREAT JOB
     

    On Apr 5, 2009 martaerika wrote:

    cool

    On Apr 24, 2009 Jennifer_R wrote:

    Great storey, very scary! \:\)

    On May 2, 2009 fabrizioammollo wrote:

    What a frightening story! \:cool\: \:cool\: \:cool\:

    On May 5, 2009 evi wrote:

    Excellent!\:\)

    On Jun 19, 2009 Sweetie224player wrote:

    Great story!\:rah\: Just great!!!\:rah\:

    But why her eyes, dissapeared? Is the old woman, a which?

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