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This is the story of love
This is my first story
Hope you like it

This is the story of love
This is my first story
Hope you like it
Jake :Hey do you want to have some fun
Voice on phone:sure meet at the water park in 5
Jake:ok
Jenna:you have fun now baby see you soon and invite her and her parents round if you want
Jake:mum shes not my girlfriend
Jenna:ok then remember to invite her round for dinner
Jake:MUM!!!!!
Jenna:bye have fun
Jake:well im on my way to meet my friend im so excited not Alice:well im on my way to meet my friend Alice:well im here now i will wait Jake:hmm somone looks different Jake:does she love me love your new hairstyle
Alice: thanks i love you and i never want to be away from you
Alice:oh my gosh you talk to much
Jake:travling is so much fun
Jake Thinking:should i ask her to be my Valentine
Alice Thinking:why wont he ask me to be his girlfriend
Jake Blurts:will you be my girlfriend?...
Alice:YES I WILL I LOVE YOU SO MUCH
Jake:Race you
Alice:your on
Jake:your eyes are soo pretty
Alice:stop your making me blush
Jake:they are just like katelins eyes
Alice:katelin Whos she
Jake:umm my...nothing
Alice:okay
Jack:hi im jack jakes dad
Joey:oh hi im joey Alices mum
Jack: may i ask what is your last name
Joey:Just Joey no last name
Jack:Well Just Joey i remember you im Jack russel your old boss
Joey:no way
Edward: well well Jenna russel
Jenna:how do u know me
Edward:i was your boss when you worked for me
Jenna:right
Jenna:jake what was your date like
Jake:you know pretty good
Alice:yeah it was wonderful
Jake:man she talks to much
Alice:jake your the one thats talks alot
Edward:jake you take care of my little angel
Alice:DAD!!!!!!
Joey:Honey your embarrasing her
Edward:ok i will stop
Jenna:show her your room
Jake:no please no
jenna:go
Jake:come Join me
Alice:ok
Jake:you look amazing
Alice:*blush*stop it please
Jake:why should i
Alice:i dont know
Jake:hug
Alice:sure
Alice:where do we stand
Jake:your my girlfriend and im your boyfriend
Alice:ok i have something to tell you
Jake:what
Alice:nothing
Jake:i need to know what the something is from last night
Alice:oh that
Jake:tell me before we go on our second date
Alice:i cant tell you
Jake:tell me when the time is right
Alice:ok
Alice Thinking:there he is the guy im seeing at the same time im seeing that jake boy Alice:(sings found a peanut)
Jake:yeah allright rock on
Jake:I love you
Alice:I love you too
Alice:what is it
Jake:my heart
Alice:aww your so sweet
Jake:thanks
Jake:well i love you lots
Alice:i love you to
Jake:what do you want to tell me
Alice:oh yeah My secret
Jake:yeah
Alice:lets not ruin the moment
so will alice ever tell her secret to jake and have to make the dicission of the lifetime

in the next part they will look different

this is the end of the story unless
i get comments wanting more parts to it

The story of love

Jan 1, 2010 by DarthAshoka
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    4 Comment(s) posted so far

    On Sep 13, 2009 DarthAshoka wrote:

    hey guys i might be able to make more parts but my games got uninstalled cause it was way to slow with all my expansion packs most likey i will remake them

    On Jul 8, 2010 RockingRoxxi wrote:

    Hello DarthAshoka nice story but it could be improved no offense but i have read better stories but good job as its your very first story 
    xoxo~Ashlee~xoxo

    On Jul 8, 2010 DarthAshoka wrote:

    Thanks Ashlee im making another story it might be better but when i put it up you can read it
    xoxo~Krystal~xoxo(sorry i stole your thing it was kool)

    On Sep 24, 2010 RockingRoxxi wrote:

    Haha Sis i love this soo much can you make a story of me and my bf i'll  PM you the details and stuff
     
    looking forward to seeing you in the holidays
     
    love you sis
    xx ~Ashlee

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