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Hi, this is my first story. I'm fro Czech Republic, so I apologize for some grammar mistakes. ;) This is intro part of the story, you'll find in this part little about main charakter. Enjoy. ;)

Hi, this is my first story. I'm fro Czech Republic, so I apologize for some grammar mistakes. ;) This is intro part of the story, you'll find in this part little about main charakter. Enjoy. ;) Hi. This is me. I'm 16 years old girl named Samantha, but people rather call me ,,sea girl" because most of my time I spend by the sea. I live in a small town called Green Hills. This is my most favorite place in the whole world. Beach in Green Hills. I'm here every single time I can. Well, stop talking about beach. This is my best friend Abigail. I know her since the birth. We are best friends whole life. We are completing each orther's sentences, laughing at our awkvard jokes... Just best friends forever. This is Green Hills High School. I love it. Only thing I hate about that are mean girls. Courtney and Phoebe. They always find something bad about me and Abigail. They are most popular girls on our school. And we are just ,,dirt which has to be deleted", as they use to say. They hurt me with their words and actions little bit. But Abigail is always there to bright my day. Let's move little further. This is my loving family. Well, better say it was, but you'll see later.
My mum, dad and my boyfriend Tim. Even If we are too young to get married, I count him to my family. He's such a sweet person, who gives me all love, which I need. My parents like him too, what makes me more happy. He lost his parents when he was a kid, now hi live with his aunt. My parents take him as their son. Maybe we wasn't rich family, but we were happy family. But Tim's 17th birthay destroyed our happiness. Tim didn't have any good friends, so he wanted to celebrate his birthday at the cinema. Of course with us. But when we were passing through the town on the way home, some drunken driver dashed from turn and my dad wanted to avoid, but unsccesfully. All what I remember was terrible screaming of my family and me. When we crashed, people in park saw us and wanted to help us.
,,Someone call fire brigade!"
,,It's Samantha and her family!"
,,Hey there, are you okay?"
,,Oh my gosh, what happened?"
I have just flashbacks from that tragedy. I thought It was just ,,normal car accident". But after days, something weird started happening to me. Something.. unusual... Something... Mysterious. Ok, that's all. Guess what happened to Samantha? Next part I will post as soon as possible. ;)

Voices - intro part

Jul 20, 2012 by Sunsetangel4
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    5 Comment(s) posted so far

    #1 On Jul 21, 2012 fruitopia wrote:

    Good story

    #2 On Jul 25, 2012 TheRedCortina wrote:

    Wow, I can't believe english isn't your first language! I'm pretty sure that in any of the languages I know, I couldn't string together an opening paragraph. Excellent work, and I love your title pic.

    #3 On Jul 28, 2012 Sunsetangel4 wrote:

    Aww, thank you all. \;\))

    #4 On Jul 31, 2012 AmandaRay10122 wrote:

    good start. I was wondering if you could read my story and give me input over mine. \;\) its my first story. You also did very good with the grammar.

    #5 On Aug 1, 2012 Sunsetangel4 wrote:

    To AmandaRay10122: Thank you so much! \;\) This is my first story too, now I'm working on part 3 but when I'll finish it, I'll sure look at yours! \;\)

     
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