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In the Old West, one man was Captain of the prairie schooners that crossed the plains with regularity, he was responsible for their safety, health and happiness, without giving any thought to his own...
He was "WAGON MASTER..."
He was "WAGON MASTER..." WESTPORT LANDING, KANSAS 1860
A last minute meeting is being held for the wagon train leaving at dawn. Overseeing the association is Nathan McIntyre, the wagon master. Nathan is explaining how important it is not to overload the wagons with inessentials, as they had many rivers and mountains to cross.
With the contracts now signed, he reiterated the point, "The trail can get harsh, we may have to lighten the load. You will find the way littered with family heirlooms and such that somehow don't seem essential 1000 miles outside of Westport Landing."
Nathan sighed as he scanned the small group. A lot of elderly people and kids, there was a young lad of about 16, and his searching eyes stopped at the young woman sitting ramrod straight in her chair.
She looked up and met his gaze boldly; Katie O'Toole knew the man was sizing her up, to see if she was up to the arduous trip. Katie was making the trek with her elderly father Patrick and young brother Seamus. Nathan's eyes rested on a flaxen haired man not much older than him. He said his name was Lucas Tanner; he was heading to California for what most young, single men did, 'gold'.
Nathan sniffed contemptuously. He had seen many men make this trek, to have it all be for nothing. But it was nothing to him if the foolish man thought money or gold was the secret to a happy life.
It was a bitter lesson Nathan learned long ago... Nathan wondered who in this group would not make it. The Overland Trail was dotted with crosses, crosses that marked the trail deaths of many crossings, many he was wagon master on. The crosses seemed to multiply like seeds strewn to the wind.
He warned them of the many problems that may arise, but did not want to frighten them. His solemn face drove the point home. Nathan called the meeting to an end; there was nothing much else he could say. He has been doing this for over six years, he could usually tell on the first day, which wagons would turn around, and head back before they reached Fort Kearney.
He wondered if it would be the appealing young lady and her family. Katie looked at the gruff and taciturn wagon master, she smiled briefly. She had confidence this rough man would be up to the task of getting them to California.
Ever since they left Ireland 2 years ago, this has been her families dream; they lived and worked in New York for over a year, saving every penny for this journey west. Now here they were, Katie was beginning to feel a little excited at the prospect. Dawn at last, the canvas covers on the wagons flapped in the brisk Kansas breeze. Nathan made sure the wagons were lined up and ready to go. Finally, he yelled, 'Wagons Ho!"
Slowly but surely the wagon train started on its way... The dust was far worse than the wagon master had described. Katie also felt as if every bone in her body had been jarred loose from the constant rocking of the wagon. She watched Nathan all morning riding from one wagon to the next, checking equipment, giving advice and elevating spirits as his group took their first steps beyond civilization.
Katie had to admit Nathan was ruggedly handsome, even the severe scars on his face were alluring.
She shook her head, 'get a hold of yourself, my girl!' she admonished herself. The wagons stopped around noon, in deference to the first-time nerves and muscle aches of the new pioneers. Katie was certainly relieved to climb down from the wagon and stretch her back, she felt as if she spent the morning inside a butter churn.
As she was preparing a quick lunch for her father and brother, Nathan walked up to her; it was her first close up look at the wagon master. She studied his craggy face closely, it had the look of a man who spent a lot of time outdoors, a strong face that matched the raw strength of his tall, fit body. It had the look of a man who rarely smiled. She wondered where he got the scars...
"Miss O'Toole?" His voice said rather loudly. Katie snapped back to reality. "I am just checking to see how everyone made out, and to tell you there will be a meeting tonight to discuss any problems this first day..." "Thank you Mr. McIntyre, our family will attend the meeting. So far we are doing fine, I thank you for the asking." Katie said politely.
Nathan smiled slightly; she had a beautiful lilt to her voice. "Is that a Scottish accent?"
"No, Irish." Katie replied.
Lucas Tanner watched from afar as Nathan and Katie looked at each other intensely. He snorted derisively at the wagon master's attention to Katie. Nathan was flabbergasted. "You all came from Ireland? My Lord!"
Katie smiled. "By way of New York, we lived there over a year, we all worked down at the docks and saved every penny, this trip is a dream of my Da's, Mr. McIntyre..."
"Call me Nathan, we don't stand on ceremony out here on the trail, especially since we are going to be in each other's company day and night for 3 months."
Katie beamed. "Only if you call me Katie, Nathan."
"Fair enough..." Nathan touched the brim of his hat and walked down to the next wagon. Handsome woman, he thought to himself. They travelled all the rest of that day, when Nathan spotted the river, he motioned for the train to pull up, they would make camp here tonight.
A fresh water source was always ideal for camping by, besides Nathan reasoned they went far enough for their first day.
Patrick O'Toole walked up, "Howdy boys! I think camp is set for the night. Everyone seems settled in, I think we did alright for the first day!" he said brightly in his thick Irish brogue.
Lucas began to start the fire for the meal. Mrs. Klassen, one of the older women, came over with some stew she had prepared; she placed it on the fire to keep warm. "I should tell you boys not to drink from this river, it is too low, the water gets infected and can cause dysentery. We can get some water from the streams up in the hills as we travel." Nathan said. "I have already told everyone else." Nathan motioned to the large pot next to the fire. "Beef stew, help yourselves and enjoy while we have the fresh meat. Also there is coffee in the pot." Lucas's clear blue eyes focused on Katie walking toward the chuck tent. He smiled slightly; she was a fine looking woman, no mistake. It wouldn't hurt to amuse myself on this trip, he thought. The nights can get cold and lonely, and she was the only single female under 50 and over 20! Why should the wagon master have all the fun?
However, there was another young woman on the wagon train, she was tempting as well, Mrs. Roseland.
Lucas never let the fact a woman was married stop him before. He smiled craftily. This may turn out to be an interesting trip! The other men had moved off to attend the horses, and Lucas found himself alone with the pretty Irish girl, he grabbed a plate of chow and motioned to Katie that she join him.
She was a little hesitant, but he had a pleasant enough face, what would be the harm? They were soon deep in conversation; Katie found she could chat easily with Lucas Tanner. He was charming and easy going, everything Nathan McIntyre was not.
"You are quite attractive Katie, you should have no problem finding a husband, young women don't stay unmarried for long in the West." Lucas grinned.
Katie flushed at his flattering remark. "I'm not interested in having a man in my life telling me what to do." Katie said forcefully, but not unfriendly.
Lucas barked out a laugh. "I guess that states it plain enough. Good for you."
Nathan stopped and watched the exchange from afar. He felt a slight wave of envy wash over him for some reason. He decided to join the two. "Don't you have duties to see to, McIntyre?" Lucas said with a slight grimace of annoyance.
Nathan smiled crisply. "My duties will not be done until I see you and the others safely to California, Tanner. But done enough that I can stop for a bite and a cup of coffee..." Nathan grabbed a plate and joined them. Nathan took a bite. "You'll be in front of the line tomorrow, Tanner, the next day you move to the rear, that will give everyone a dust free day."
"I don't think so," Lucas sniffed. "I am going to move my wagon behind the O'Toole's, they can have my dust-free day."
Nathan looked up at Lucas. "We are not changing the order of the wagons."
There was a moment of silence as the two men glared at each other across the table. "That's Ok Lucas," Katie said quickly. "You should take your day in front like everyone else."
Lucas shrugged. "It's my wagon, I guess I can put it where I want."
Nathan gave the man a dark, thunderous look. "It's your wagon, but it's my train. And you'll put your wagon where I tell you to put it, or I will be asking you to leave."
Lucas looked into the shadowy face and decided it was not worth pursuing. "All right, we'll keep the wagons in order." he said simply.
Nathan stood up. "Good." He picked up his plate and walked away. Later that evening, Lucas stopped by the camp of the Roseland's. He politely introduced himself to Mrs. Dorothy Roseland, who was even more attractive than Lucas first realized. "This your daughter?" he asked politely.
"Yes. Her name is Cheri-Sue. We are hoping to set up a ranch in California. My husband is off seeing to the stock. Would you like a bite to eat, Mr. Tanner?" Dorothy asked sweetly. Lucas stared into Dorothy's pretty cornflower blue eyes, he found himself feeling uncomfortable in her presence, he never felt that way before with women! He always had the upper hand!
"No ma'am, thank you I have already ate. Smells delicious though, I may stop by again at another time if that is alright with you, and your husband of course."
Dorothy for her part could not tear herself away from his gaze. He was indeed handsome, his eyes had a mischievous look, but not cruel. She bet if he found the right woman she would settle down his wayward ways. Almost a week on the trail and they saw their first signs of what Nathan had spoke about, 2 lonely crosses and some scattered dishes bore out his warnings exactly. They were sure to see more the further they travelled.
Thankfully so far, the weather has been with them, no heavy rain or winds as yet. Nathan raised his arm to stop the wagon train. He cricked his neck to alleviate the stiffness. He thoughts drifted pleasantly to the handsome Irish girl...he shook his head firmly. Enough of that, not since Alice...
Nathan jumped down from his horse, putting all thoughts of women from his mind, he had a wagon train to see to. Nathan sought out Katie once again. "How are things Katie, any questions at all? Any thing I can do?" he asked kindly.
Katie smiled slightly. "We are fine, thank you Nathan."
Nathan's jaw was working furiously. He made a solemn promise to himself that he would never get involved with any woman under his charge, he became very good over the years of suppressing certain urges, but Lord, she was beautiful. "Are you Ok Da?" Seamus asked worriedly. "You do not look well at all!"
Patrick's hand went to his head. "I don't feel well, must have been something I ate. I think I will lie down in the wagon for a bit, see to the horses, will you lad?"
Seamus nodded his head. "You can count on me, Da." That night, Lucas stopped by the Roseland wagon; he knew Cyd was off watering and tending the horses. "Good evening Mrs. Roseland, how are you doing on the trail?" Lucas asked gently.
Dorothy looked into his eyes and felt her insides melt. "I am doing well, Mr. Tanner. Thank you for the kindness." The intense look from Dorothy was having its affect on Lucas. He suddenly felt as if a fist slammed into his middle. He turned away, not able to look into the lovely face any longer. He stood for the longest time, not speaking.
Dorothy could not tear her eyes from him, and he felt the intense gaze.
Finally, Lucas whispered, "Then I'll say good-night, ma'am." Back at the chuck tent's campfire, Cyd Roseland sought out Lucas. He was livid. How dare this stupid prospector chat up his wife, hang around his camp! Cyd clenched his fist in anger.
Lucas curled his lip, he did not like this man, he had seen him verbally attack his wife and daughter many times, he had seen him slap Dorothy on one occasion.
Vicious cur! He walked up menacingly behind Lucas. "Stay away from my wife, Tanner. I have seen the way you look at her. You got no right! Go near her again and I won't be responsible for the consequences! I have already warned Dorothy of the same thing!"
"With your hand?" Lucas whispered through clenched teeth. "I have seen the way you treat your wife Roseland, lay a hand on her again during this trip and I won't be responsible for the consequences!" Cyd began to sputter. "What is between me and Dorothy is none of your business, nor is how I treat her, she's mine to do with what I like!"
Lucas stepped closer, his hands on his hips. "Maybe you would like to test my meaning..." he hissed.
Nathan had seen enough. "KNOCK IT OFF!" he thundered. "I'll have none of this on my wagon train! Roseland, get back to your camp!" Roseland grumbled and swore, but did as he was asked. Nathan turned to Lucas. "What are you playing at? I will have none of these shenanigans on my wagon train, Tanner! Stay away from that man's wife! It is in your contract, no 'bundling'!"
Lucas fought to keep his rage under control. "Fine, McIntyre...no 'bundling' as you call it. But I will talk to her if it pleases me."
Nathan lay by the riverbank, letting the cool night air refresh him, and soothe the worry that knotted his brow. The camp had grown quiet; he could barely see the glowing embers of a few fires. Tanner was going to be a problem.
At first, Nathan jealously thought the would-be prospector was interested in Katie, now it seems he was interested in the married Dorothy Roseland. This was all he needed; he had seen these types of personal problems tear a wagon train apart.
Not his! He thought to himself firmly. A few more days passed. They had crossed their first river, the Kansas, with only one broken wheel. The Thompson's had to get rid of some of their cargo to get across, but everyone made it unscathed.
Nathan was exhausted, river crossing days were one of the most difficult on the trail. It was if he used up a little piece of himself with each wagon safely across. Lucas did not heed Nathan's warning, or the threat of the brusque Cyd Roseland. He continued to visit Dorothy Roseland whenever her menacing husband was not around.
Their talks and flirting soon grew to be much more, more than both of them had realized. "I care for you Dorothy, very much...I have never felt this way toward a woman before. I know you are married, but from what you tell me, not happily. When we reach California, come with me, you and Cheri-Sue. Tell me you will think on it." Lucas pulled her in close; his heart was thumping in his chest.
He had done the one thing he swore he would never do, he had fallen in love, and with a married woman. Dorothy pulled herself closer, her hands running though his silken golden locks. Her insides were trembling terribly. She had never felt like this in Cyd's arms, not ever. Not once. Her hand was on his chest; she could feel the rapid beating of his heart.
Her eyes grew moist,' I love him. I tried not to, but I can't help it.' she said to herself.
Dorothy was being carried away on a wave of intense emotion.
Aloud she said, "Yes Lucas, I will think on it..." she whispered huskily. Lucas bent over Dorothy, blotting out the sky and the world turned to darkness as her eyes closed and his mouth pressed against hers. The roaring of the river thundering in their ears, Lucas pulled Dorothy into a romantic embrace and kissed her deeply.
She returned his luxuriant kiss enthusiastically, for Lucas' kiss was thorough and proficient; like he had done it many times before with other women, but this kiss was only for her, and she knew it.
Lucas finally backed away, breathing heavily; he looked at Dorothy. "I swear..." he whispered. He turned and went back to his wagon before he was tempted any further. Meanwhile, Katie went to find Nathan, who was writing in his logbook of the day's activities.
"Nathan, please come at once! My Da is deathly ill! He can keep nothing down! He just holds his stomach and moans! And he tells me he has had 'the relax' for a couple of days now, oh please come!"
Nathan's face set in a hard mask. Everyone feared Indians on the trail, but dysentery was by far the deadliest killer on the plains. Nathan followed Katie back to her father's tent and went inside. Seamus and Kate waited. "He looks so pale, so weak..." Seamus said worriedly.
"Don't worry little brother, Nathan will know what is to be done, maybe it was just something he ate..."
But silently they both remembered Nathan's stern warning back at Westport Landing; the dangers of dysentery. Nathan came out. "It is dysentery. Seamus, I want you to go to every wagon and tell them not to drink the water, just to stick with milk or cider. We will have to find fresh water supplies tomorrow. And ask at the wagons if anyone else is sick. Go lad!" Nathan urged.
Seamus took one look at his sister, nodded and ran off. As soon as Seamus left, he turned to Katie. No use lying to her, better off to tell her straight out. "I am sorry Katie, it does not look good, he is passing blood. He can't even lift his head. But we have to try and get him to take some nourishment, will you help me?"
Katie felt her eyes filling with tears. Her beloved Da, please let him recover! She began to cry quietly. Nathan was genuinely moved by Katie's tears, he quickly gathered her is his strong arms and held her close. He began to stroke her hair and talked sympathetically to her, to calm her,
Lord, she felt wonderful in his arms.
For a brief moment, he forgot about Patrick and the sickness that may cripple his wagon train... He kissed her deeply and urgently, something he had wanted to do from almost the first day. But the intense and searing kiss was over quickly; he regained his wits and backed up several steps.
Seeing her look so sad and vulnerable caught him off-balance. He already found her attractive, but to act on it?
The kiss was devastating and earth shattering to them both...
"This is totally against my rules..." he said in a voice tight with frustration. "I have taken 6 wagon trains across country and never once let this happen to me. I have no business kissing you or any woman under my protection. Better for both of us if it doesn't happen again. Come, let us tend your father." Nathan walked toward the tent, leaving a thunderstruck and confused Katie. Nathan and Katie tended Patrick all night, but it was to no avail. He died the next afternoon, and at dusk, they laid him to rest there on the prairie. A few of the pioneers attended the sombre service.
There were two other people on the train also ill, but it looked as though they would recover.
Only Patrick, his age against him, could not fight it off. A few hours after the short service, Nathan sought out Katie. "I am sorry for your loss, Katie. I am here to tell you that when we reach Fort Kearney, I will see an agent is hired to take you and your brother back to Westport Landing where you will be reimbursed by the Overland Stage Company." Nathan sighed deeply. "I am exhausted. We will talk more in the morning."
He walked away leaving Katie utterly dazed and shaken. Early the next morning, Katie found Nathan, demanding to know what he spoke of the night before.
"You can't do this! It has been my Da's dream for us to start a ranch in California! We did not come all this way to quit now! You can't be serious!"
"I am deadly serious, a single woman and a raw boy have no business on a wagon train. Not on my train." Nathan said firmly. "Read your contract Miss O'Toole...No single women allowed. It is out of my hands. We should be to Fort Kearney in two weeks, I might be able to find an agent to take all the way to St. Louis, but that is all."
Katie was flabbergasted, but she did not want to argue, not today, "I don't accept this, we will talk about this tomorrow."
Nathan shrugged. "Talk all you want, all the way to Fort Kearney, it won't do any good. You are going back East." The next morning, Seamus sought out Nathan at breakfast. "Please don't send us back sir!" he pleaded, his large eyes brimming with tears.
Nathan felt a tug on his insides. He was fond of the boy, they had grown close on the trail, Seamus often rode with Nathan some afternoons. "I'm sorry," Nathan said quietly. "Your sister doesn't understand what a terrible place the West can be for a woman alone." "But Katie is strong! And Da always said she was smarter than any of the men he knew!" Seamus cried hopefully.
"It doesn't matter Seamus, horrible things can still happen. Being smart doesn't help!" "You don't like us, that's why you want to be rid of us..." Seamus said sadly.
"That is not true Seamus, not at all. I like you very much, that is why I cannot allow this, your lives would be in danger. I couldn't bear it. It is for your own safety, believe me." Nathan said kindly. Two days had passed; they had to deal with death and loss already. Last night there was a horrible thunderstorm, some of the wagons got damaged and some of the stock were lost. Old Mr. Klassen and Cyd Roseland were out trying to round up the strays, Nathan contined the wagon train on the trail.
Katie sat behind him, watching his strong muscular back, wondering how she was going to convince Nathan to let her and her brother stay with the wagon train.
Also the memory of that kiss played over and over again in her mind... Katie tried again, several times to try and reason with Nathan, but the inflexible wagon master would not budge. She pleaded her case, why turn around now? They are already a third of the way there! And hasn't she shown he is able to handle a wagon, as is Seamus?
Nathan was beginning to get a little irritated. "I will not hear anymore on this subject. What I say goes on this train, end of story!" Fort Kearney. What had once been a wilderness outpost, now it was a bustling little town. Businesses had set up to cater to the thousands of wagons passing through the fort each season.
Most of the wagons were delighted to arrive at some sort of civilization, but not Katie.
Fort Kearney meant the end of the road for her and Seamus...unless she could get Nathan to change his mind. At the urgency of the other ladies, they encouraged Katie to use her feminine wiles to persuade Nathan to let her stay. She grudgingly let them dress her up for the dance being held at the fort that night, so with a borrowed dress and her hair down in a flattering style; she waited for Nathan.
She felt guilty and little strange, the kiss still foremost in her mind.
Sure enough, Nathan walked in; she stood and held her breath. Nathan was entirely enchanted. The green dress brought out her coloring to its fullest advantage.
"May I say you look lovely, Katie." His eyes regarded her with a leased intensity.
The way he was looking at her made Katie feel all warm inside.
"Thank you, Nathan." she whispered. The music started up again nearby, and Nathan held out his hand. "May I have this dance, Miss O'Toole?"
"You may, Mr. McIntyre." they danced slowly for a bit, Katie was at a loss what to say or do next, she had no experience flirting with men!
"It's a beautiful night," she said lightly. "Everyone seems to be enjoying themselves..."
"Yes..." Nathan sighed. "It will be good for them, they will need to remember the good times during the days ahead, we have barely started, you know..." Was now the time for her to bring up staying on the train? She wondered, while Nathan seemed relaxed and in fairly good humour...and while he was still looking at her with that 'look', that look that was making her cheeks flush?
Nathan slowly pulled Katie closer, it was not proper, but Katie did not pull away. Seamus watched for a moment then backed out of the room to let them be alone. The heat from his strong body was making her dizzy, she gulped, as her mouth had gone dry. "You are starting out again in three days?" She managed to squeak out.
"Yes, by that time I should have the arrangements completed for your way back East." he said. "If you sell your wagon in Westport you should have enough to get back to New York."
Katie fought to keep the fury out of her voice. "You know very well that's NOT where my brother and I want to go!"
Nathan immediately stepped back from Katie, his face was guarded but he smiled admiringly at her tenacity."I thank you for the dance Miss O'Toole, but I do not want to spoil the evening by arguing with you. If you will excuse me..." He bowed stiffly and left the room. Katie wiped the tear or two of anger that spilled onto her flushed cheeks. Oooh that man was stubborn! If only her father were here! A few more tears clustered in her eyes for her Da. How she missed him; she had not even time to grieve for him...
She would not give up! She would find another way to stay with the wagon train!! But what worried Katie more is she was starting to have feelings for the rough, taciturn wagon master. She wondered if Nathan felt the same...the way he held her said more than words. She exhaled deeply.
How could she make him understand she was strong, she wasn't afraid of hard work, she had done plenty back in Ireland and in New York. She didn't need a man to protect her; she could take care of herself, and her brother!! The next day, Katie found Nathan working in an office at the Fort. She took and deep breath and began her final plea. Nathan politely listened...then shook his head.
"It is quite plain in the association papers you signed, no single women on the wagon train." Nathan said emphatically.
At that moment, a number of the pioneers came into the office.
Nathan snorted. So they intend to gang up on me! Mr. Klassen spoke first. "Mr. McIntyre, we represent the association, and since the association is us, all of us...we don't see why we can't just change the rules. We all feel that particular provision of no single women is unfair."
Nathan clenched his teeth. "I've never allowed any of my trains to change the rules in the middle of the trip." "Well," Mrs. Klassen spoke up firmly. "That's another rule that could be changed, so I think." The other murmured their agreement.
Nathan noticed that Katie wisely did not speak further. He sighed deeply. Just how far was he willing to pursue this thing? It will be a long miserable passage if everyone was against him, and dangerous. Dissention of any type...he would have to find a balance. "I would be willing to put it to a vote..." Nathan capitulated.
"And that vote would of course include the women..." Mrs. Klassen specified firmly.
Nathan looked over at Katie. She was smiling. This vote means she will stay with the train, her constant presence to remind him of their kiss, and the way she looked at the dance. This was a mistake..."Fine, now if that concludes our business, I bid you goodnight." Lucas managed to get Dorothy alone behind the Fort's dispensary. . It had been many days since they had seen each other and since that lush kiss next to the river.
Dorothy was blushing furiously. She felt so shy, she could not look into those glorious eyes of his, or she felt she would be lost.
Lucas' heart was thumping mightily against his rib cage. He gently tried to lift her chin. "Look at me sweetheart..." he whispered huskily. "You must know how I feel; I love you. I never thought I would say that to another person as long as I lived."
Dorothy felt tears of joy spring to her eyes. But, oh what a mess! She was married, Cyd would never let her go...what could be done? Lucas kissed her tenderly, he began to kiss her tears away. He murmured lovingly to her. Cheri-Sue stopped cold. What was her mother doing with Mr. Tanner? They were talking softly to each other but she could not hear what was being said. Confused, Cheri-Sue backed away, and started to feel annoyance for her mother swirl in her brain.
She was too young to quite grasp what was going on, but she knew her mother should not be kissing another man!! Their time was up at Fort Kearney, it was time to move on down the trail. The hardest part of the trip was coming up; they were heading into Pawnee country. He silently prayed the Indians would be quiet this trip. He found one of the Fort's puppies wandering among the cattle.
Nathan gently picked up the whimpering puppy and nuzzled him. "You best be careful little fella..." Katie watched the gruff man affectionately nuzzle the dog. She smiled warmly. The vote was indeed taken, and she and Seamus would continue on with the wagon train. She had not spoken to Nathan since; he seemed to be avoiding her for some reason.
"Yours, Mr. McIntyre?" Kate smiled.
"No...But I wonder if Seamus might like some company on the rest of the trip, a puppy is a lot of work, but I think he could handle it, it may lessen the pain over the loss of your father..."
A pain shot through Katie's heart thinking of her Da.
She was also very moved by Nathan's thoughful gesture. He handed the small puppy to Katie.
"Oh, why don't you give him to Seamus?" Katie said softly.
Nathan shook his head. "No...You do it." he said thickly.
Katie gave him a broad warm smile that nearly melted his heart.
He watched as she walked away, his insides were churning... So they set out from Fort Kearney, they were heading into Indian Country, rough terrain; mountainous passes, raging rivers, severe weather, hot, dry desert. The easy part of the trip was over; the worst was yet to come.
Nathan let all the worst case scenarios drift through his head, but visions of Katie kept invading his thoughts. It would take all his willpower to shutter his thoughts and keep it professional toward the attractive young woman. Unbeknownst to Nathan McIntyre, Two brothers are quietly tracking the wagon train at a safe distance...
Two brothers from the now scattered Lakota Sioux. Buffalo herds have been decimated by the encroachment of the white man and their rumbling wagons...they were hungry, and resentful...
TO BE CONTINUED...
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On Jan 18, 2008 drewsoltesz wrote:
Hi! On a western kick, more stories on the go, you can read my blog at my mini-site for more info. The male lead Nathan is 'Miguel' by Go GO Glamour Girl, MTS2, Katie is 'Jennifer Connelly' by Jirka (TSR subscription only)(I made changes with hair etc.) Rideable Horses and wagons by Hexameter, MTS2, decorative horses by Dragon Slave, MTS2. I did my best considering I have only 2 EP's! Could have used Seasons for this! Hope you enjoy! Cheers!
On Jan 19, 2008 Shannen124 wrote:
Hi, your story is great, and I hope there is more, pease keep me updated when there is another....
p.s. your lucky, at least you have 2 expansion packs (EP??) I have none, i luckily mad a couple of storys, but my sims2 stuffed up, but once i put it on, i coulkdn't do anythin in build mode, at all, or add more ep's on, grrr. but it sucked, and i was told by my friend who started me on this, that i should uninstall and have a sims2 to put back on. i tried it and it wouldn't let, me, i sat there for 5 hours clicking retry every 14 seconds
On Jan 19, 2008 cpyle822 wrote:
On Jan 19, 2008 plyangel456 wrote:
Wonderful story I love all the animals they are beautifully made. The western story was just incredible this was the first one that I have read on here I can't wait to read more! -plyangel456-
On Jan 19, 2008 coolsimz wrote:
Wow! This is REFRESHING! TX!
On Jan 19, 2008 Daishi wrote:
On Jan 19, 2008 jadespacemonkey wrote:
I really enjoyed the story so far. I love the attention to detail...
On Jan 19, 2008 GFitz wrote:
There is no one that does a period piece the way you do. Every bit of scenery, clothing, decor to a tee. Now on to the good stuff...Nathan, Lucas (reminds me of someone LOL...) As always your writing is brilliant and spot on with every detail. I love a good western and yours will be full of adventure!
On Jan 19, 2008 tasha4ever92 wrote:
3 reasons why I love this story:
(1) very well written
(2) great pictures
(3) DIFFERENT! i'm tired of typical stories- this was refreshing XD
On Jan 19, 2008 VictoriaGrace wrote:
What an excellent story! I'm very impressed and anxiously awaiting the rest of the story!
~Victoria
On Jan 19, 2008 eva hanstvedt wrote:
good
On Jan 19, 2008 captainlicious wrote:
Wow! I love the sims you made, as well as the story!
On Jan 19, 2008 sweetcharming wrote:
Amazing beginning!
Again this story is so well written, has great settings, beautiful characters and an interesting storyline!
I'm curious how this story is going to continue!
On Jan 19, 2008 cariadbach wrote:
On Jan 19, 2008 katty007 wrote:
Nice story! Those western stories...
The plot is brilliant
On Jan 19, 2008 Veronn wrote:
Wow
Amazing beginning 
Very Good 
On Jan 19, 2008 Devalyn wrote:
Another great story from you,
the pictures are amazing! I love how you used the horses, even when there are no playable horses in the game - sadly...
On Jan 19, 2008 maxi king wrote:
On Jan 19, 2008 Fizzle-fluffy wrote:
HEY! why does it stop now
I want to read on! I like the story!
On Jan 19, 2008 Claudia35 wrote:
nice effects and the plot was good
well done
On Jan 19, 2008 DragonessGirl wrote:
It's great to see a uniwue and original story here! This is marvellous work, and I hope you let me know when the next part is posted!
//Dragoness
On Jan 19, 2008 plemun wrote:
reallly good story
On Jan 19, 2008 paige_turner wrote:
Oh, very good, you've captured the sense of old westerns and it feels dusty and yet romantic.
On Jan 19, 2008 MinnieID wrote:
WOW, very very nice story. I'll be waiting for more.
On Jan 19, 2008 kitty675 wrote:
how romantic i love it great work
On Jan 19, 2008 thekewlestnerd wrote:
Amazing story...everything looks so beautiful too! I saw the intro screenshot and just had to read this! Thanks so much!!!
On Jan 19, 2008 BoodaMae wrote:
This was such a great story! I really can't wait for the next part! I like your CC, where did you get the horses and wagons?
Great job!
On Jan 19, 2008 terriecason wrote:
On Jan 19, 2008 thekewlestnerd wrote:
Amazing story...everything looks so beautiful too! I saw the intro screenshot and just had to read this! Thanks so much!!!
On Jan 19, 2008 Earcat wrote:
Wow! Great story, and great use of cc. I can hardly wait
for the next episode!
On Jan 19, 2008 binky13 wrote:
Very nice story.
I don't see too many western stories around here so that's a nice change.
On Jan 19, 2008 jaundyce61 wrote:
Love your title page! Romance on the dusty plains, I love it! You have an uncanny knack for capturing a certain era, great use of CC and your pics! I wish there was a western/cowboy EP!! And Can I say I have a crush on Nathan? LOL! Great characters, another hit from you!
On Jan 19, 2008 tinajean1 wrote:
Great story I can't wait for the next part
On Jan 19, 2008 1ayotola1 wrote:
TOTALLY AWESOME!
5.0!!!!
On Jan 19, 2008 Zayury wrote:
(I wrote this comment last night, fortunately I saved it, because as soon as I hit Comment, TSR went down lol)
On Jan 19, 2008 leifofdel wrote:
What a great story. I
it can hardly wait for the next installment. The pictures are awesome as well!
On Jan 19, 2008 sandybvv wrote:
OMG! Karen you are fabulous!! what a wonderful way to write, so emotional, so descriptive, so powerful and so everything, I have to say there are some stories that definitely don't need pictures to transport you to a different place, era or time, and yours is one of them, just the writing is wonderful. but i have to say, YOUR PICTURES are breathtaking, you pay attention to every single detail, customs, sets, hair, make up, everything was perfect, and your pictures just make this story even more enjoyable. You are so good! and I love everything you do!
great job! and keep the stories coming you have many readers and we will follow you wherever you post your stories, Great job!
On Jan 19, 2008 spicylove wrote:
wow great story,and very nice photos
On Jan 19, 2008 BBKZ wrote:
OMG!
This is amazing! This is fantastic! This is gorgeous! 
I was waiting for that story and after reading it... there are no words to say how wonderful it is 
Thank you for sharing 
On Jan 19, 2008 Kungfuchicken wrote:
That is a beautifully done story. You've have obviously put a lot of thought into it. Very, very well done.
On Jan 19, 2008 jdgunraj wrote:
Wonderful job! I cannot wait for the next chapter. I love the little ending with the American Indians. The foreshadowing is fantastic. I wonder what will happen next: kidnapping, dangerous weather, angry husbands?! Woot!
On Jan 19, 2008 OpheliaNival wrote:
Amazing twist on a western story! A very original idea indeed, usually it's the lonesome cowboy walking into a town and either saving the citizens from a bully or being one... Great job with the scenery and text, too bad you had to make the bad guy, Lucas, so dang gorgeous
! Looking forward to your next part of the story. Again: Great job! 
On Jan 19, 2008 S.Cains wrote:
This is a great story - I love it. I have seen the one on your blog as well, since we are both writers of Simtales. Anyway, I was confused at first because I presumed it was the same story. How wrong I was! Thanks for the great tales. It's amazing that you could write two high quality stories in such a short period of time and on the same genre. Perhaps they will intertwine in some way? I would give you a 5 but you have switched ratings off, so 10/10 from me!
On Jan 19, 2008 dealer_day wrote:
It's great! thanks
On Jan 19, 2008 iluvhorses13 wrote:
Wow! Fantastic job! I truly look forward to the next part!
On Jan 20, 2008 amd11 wrote:
amazing! cant wait for the next part!!!
On Jan 20, 2008 Melody Curious wrote:
Oh this reminds me of all those John wayne's I grew up watching... The Irish maid and the gruff cowboy I just love those cows! Yet again you prove to be the mistress of drama and bringing your characters to perfect life. I await the next installment... Yeah!
On Jan 20, 2008 wrote:
Another great recreation of another time in history, well constructed, your pics are rich in detail and your romantic story is plausible. Look forward to more!!
On Jan 20, 2008 Deanna73070 wrote:
Karen, what a fabulous story. I am falling in love all over again with this group of characters. Nathan is absolutely breath-taking, I might add!
I'm so anxious for the next chapter!!!!! YOU ARE AN AWESOME WRITER AS I HAVE STATED BEFORE! Your stories are NEVER boring! Fantastic, fantastic, fantastic!
On Jan 20, 2008 happyb8888 wrote:
What a great story! Reminds me of the old television series Wagon Train that I watched as a kid. I really love your scenery and clothing...everything is so authentic. I can't wait for the next part! Very realistic story line!!! Sad about the Da dying though; I was hoping he would pull through.
On Jan 20, 2008 SMB2121 wrote:
Great story! and Pics!
On Jan 20, 2008 KatCat wrote:
On Jan 20, 2008 samcactus101 wrote:
Yep Yep Yep I COMPLETELY agree with all the others!
Its awesome. Such hard you put into this story. Its wonderfully beautiful
!!!!! The pictures were not just stunning, they were bright, colourful, faboulously edited. Such talent at making those pics!:P
The storyline was also good, I truly enjoyed it! excellent job! Kudos!!!!
On Jan 20, 2008 Chloe8100 wrote:
Very good. I'd love to know where you got all the cc.
On Jan 20, 2008 wickedgoddess_athena711 wrote:
On Jan 20, 2008 atangki wrote:
Great!!!
i SOOOOO Cannot wait for the next part! 
On Jan 20, 2008 katlin194 wrote:
Loved it!
On Jan 20, 2008 +Deep_sin+ wrote:
Very good story!
On Jan 20, 2008 odnavgorode wrote:
Great!!! interesting
On Jan 20, 2008 daivuska wrote:
great story
On Jan 20, 2008 wrote:
a western story is a new/great idea! and I loved it!
Great job! Loved it and your sims are beautiful
i was wondering where you got the horses?!
On Jan 20, 2008 alley1800 wrote:
On Jan 20, 2008 Hazy13 wrote:
Wow, wow
What a wonderfully written story. Also fantastic pictures with wonderful details to go with it. I just do not do westerns, but the picture and reading puled me in to the end. So please bring more of this asap. I will be looking forward to the next instalment. 10 out of 10 plus more.
On Jan 20, 2008 estatica wrote:
I had seen your story featured yesterday, but I didn't want to read it in a rush, so I saved it for today. And let me tell you, what a fun ride this was! I loved all the characters so far, the sets, the details, the plot and, of course, the romance
I can't wait to see what happens to Katie and Nathan. I'm not sure I like Lucas, I hope he doesn't mess things up with his beloved! And I wonder what will happen to the two Siouxs following the wagon... I look forward to read your next chapter! 
On Jan 20, 2008 panda_bears1 wrote:
Wow, I just love all your stories, but I think this one will be my favorite!
Hot, hot, hot Nathan. Love him!
I also love the way you tell a romance tale, not at all cheesy like some real life romance novels
5.0!
On Jan 21, 2008 sallyhails wrote:
I can't wait for the next part, wonderful writing, well done
On Jan 21, 2008 hazabaza1 wrote:
I. Loves. This. Story. Some sadness, but I can't wait for the next part! You gotta make it soon! (tell me what you're book's gonna be called. I'll buy it! ;D)
On Jan 21, 2008 pickleface wrote:
can't wait for the next part!
On Jan 22, 2008 Hordriss wrote:
Nice juxtaposition of romance and well-researched historical nastiness (especially the dysentery outbreak).
Feels nicely authentic. Slight flash in the pan with Lucas chasing Katie only to switch to Dorothy, but things could go any way in part two, and I certainly wouldn't say that Lucas has been redeemed as yet... Love those Sioux outfits, by the way. Don't suppose you know where I could find some decent pictures of Aztecs (ordinary peasants, rather than warriors)? Now that Sims can farm, fish (with seasons), and have step pyramid temples (with Bon Voyage), it seems a waste not to make some...
On Jan 22, 2008 Alyosha wrote:
Very wonderfully made story as usual! Im really so sorry if I haven't had the time to go in the storytelling section lately, school has been taking up most of my time! Anyways, I am so excited to learn more and about those two Sioux brothers too! Magnifico!
On Jan 22, 2008 eshuff wrote:
I am constantly amazed at your ability to put your reader so completely into another time period. And this one, with the horses...incredible job! Every detail perfect!
I wasn't sure what I felt about Lucas at first but I'm a great deal more sympathetic now.
and Nathan...sigh...put a strong, gorgeous man on a horse and I am gone!
Wonderful, wonderful job; looking forward to more!
On Jan 22, 2008 wrote:
This is such a wonderful story!
What a treat - TWO westerns by one of my favourite writers.
And Nathan is sooo handsome - never midn those scars, he's still gorgeous.
On Jan 23, 2008 candy820 wrote:
What an awesome story. I loved it
On Jan 23, 2008 rover202 wrote:
Wondefully told! Loved the scenes and theme (even though Im not a big fan of western, but.... YOU made this one awesome!)
Thanks for sharing and so look forward to the next story!
On Jan 23, 2008 maurie wrote:
Awesome. Your pictures are wonderful and the story is captivating. Great job!
On Jan 23, 2008 evetsangel wrote:
Great job! I love Westerns, I can't wait till the next chapter.
On Jan 24, 2008 loverien wrote:
Great Western story! Great artwork too! Katie was gorgeous in her green dress. Hope to hear more soon! Please don't leave us hanging like so many do!
On Jan 24, 2008 Kenvjo wrote:
Don't you just love and hate cliffhangers? Excellent as always!
On Jan 25, 2008 lokidavis wrote:
I loved the story and the pictures where awesome cant wait till the next part
On Jan 25, 2008 wrote:
What a wonderful story...you do the most beautiful period dramas/romances. Pure pleasure.
On Jan 26, 2008 md198 wrote:
As usual, great story, nice sims and great use of cc. Looking forward to part two!
On Jan 29, 2008 SongChild99 wrote:
Finally got around to reading this and the other one. Haven't been able to concentrate lately. -.-' In any case, this was wonderful and I'll be looking forward to Part 2. ^.^
On Jan 29, 2008 qvisn wrote:
I can almost taste the dust and grit and the way you have of portraying the emotions had me wrapped up in the story,it was a shock when it ended before i was ready, it was like, oh no now i have to wait. Thank you for the work i know went into this, your amazing.
On Jan 31, 2008 theheatmiserette wrote:
Once again, amazing! Beautiful pictures, great writing. I stayed up past my bedtime to read this, and it was completely worth it!
On Feb 6, 2008 SIMcredible! wrote:
GREAT!!! Claps!
On Feb 7, 2008 Little Seer wrote:
Jumping up and down clapping! Wonderful! Cheers
On Feb 24, 2008 lynbo wrote:
Well done, Please more, more, more.....
On Mar 13, 2008 kissme87 wrote:
Great Story
On Apr 5, 2008 whitmartinez wrote:
I like your theme. I am looking to do a story set during the slavery period. Any ideas, tips, dl's whatever would be a great help to me. Keep up the good work!
On Apr 11, 2008 wrote:
On Apr 23, 2008 midland_04 wrote:
This story is great... I was only able to read though, I'm on dialup and wasn't able to play the movies smoothly. Thanks for sharing... I'll have to read the other 3 parts when I have more time.
On May 2, 2008 chrisa_gr wrote:
Wonderful! Thanks
On May 23, 2008 twofee wrote:
totally awesome story.
(and i love the hair that katie has when shes wearing the green dress.)
On Jun 13, 2008 jayb04 wrote:
Hummmm Good i want more
On Sep 10, 2008 mpatton wrote:
I love the story so far. I'm looking forward to reading the remaining stories. Another great story. Keep up the good work.
On Mar 30, 2009 omik79 wrote:
Awesome! Great story so far! Onto the next!
On Jul 28, 2009 fabrizioammollo wrote:
This is such an interesting story!