Stories / What You Don't Know Can't Hurt You...
1163 Views
3.5 Rating

Hey everyone!
This is my first story ever just to let you know. I got this idea from listening to Gone by Daughtry - don't ask me how I got it it just popped into my head there and then. I really hope you like it!

Hey everyone!
This is my first story ever just to let you know. I got this idea from listening to Gone by Daughtry - don't ask me how I got it it just popped into my head there and then. I really hope you like it! My name's James, and that's me right there...alone. From the recent events that's what I became, alone; alone in guilt. Tell me, what if you could stop death? What would you do? I tried, I am happy she is still alive, so why am I guilty. I don't know why I did it, I guess I was blindly in love. Let me tell you my story... Ah, there's my angel, Amber, and her son, Eric. Eric's real father died in a terrible car accident. At this point, me and my perfect angel were engaged. My parents were pretty excited when they found out, as well as my sister, Heather, and my brother, Mark. That's my family. That's my sister, Heather, on the far left and that's her daughter, Samantha, on the right with the black hair. Heather's husband was killed in a fire that destroied her entire mansion, so she know lives with mum, Helen, and dad, John. There's my brother, Mark, the blonde guy at the back, with his wife, Sue, his daughter, Rebecca, the girl with blond hair tied back in a bun, and his son, Joshua. That's my house. Beautiful, ain't it? Took five years worth of saving to buy it. But now that have a little bit of an intro, here's my story... I just came back from work that night not really knowing what to expect. Then was I opened the door I heard a windy kind of noise. Little did I know who was in my house. There he was himself, the Grim Reaper, siting on my leather couch watching my widescreen TV! I was too shock to move or talk. He then stood up and walked over to me, I could feel his invisable eyes fix on me. "W-Why are you here?" I stammered out fear takin over me.
"I have come to take Amber, it is her time, James" he explained in his dark, deep voice. "what?!" I exclaimed louder then I expected. "You can't do that! I love her for goodness sake and we aren't even married yet. Wy does she have to die?!"
He shook his head from ide to side. "It's apart of my job, okay? However, there is a way you can keep her alive..." "Please tell me, Ibeg you!" I begged.
"You must replace her with another person, someone who is close to you, and you must decide now...make your choice a wise one"
 I thought for a moment. Why was I going to do this? I know why, because I was madly in love with Amber nd I always told her she was my whole world and nothing else mattered. But then there was my family. I didn't want any of them to die, none at all. So who would I choose? I chose...

TO BE CONTINUED!
Who will he choose? Can he do it?
Find out in the next part: Decision
I hope you liked, (sorry for some of the bad images, it's my first time!)

What You Don't Know Can't Hurt You...

Jul 23, 2008 by Warrayfinson
    Rate this:
       

    Page 1 / 12

    More from this Category:

    Report this Story:

    If you find a problem with this story or wish to report inappropriate content, click here

    Add a Comment

    Note: Please report any offensive comments so we can remove them. Use of bad language, unsuitable links or flaming will result in deletion of your account - regardless of your membership status.

    22 Comment(s) posted so far

    On Jul 24, 2008 stephanie1225 wrote:

    lol he should choose himself \:D

    On Jul 24, 2008 thekewlestnerd wrote:

    interesting \:D

    On Jul 24, 2008 maryash2 wrote:

    thats interesting and different, great job!! \:D

    On Jul 24, 2008 BBKZ wrote:

    a bit short but interesting \:\) very nice work \:\)

    On Jul 24, 2008 wrote:

    Great first story! I hate the grim-reaper. His ribs are gross!! lol! \:cool\:

    On Jul 24, 2008 arc1801 wrote:

    \:wub\: \:wub\: \:wub\:

    On Jul 25, 2008 Herzen & Blasen wrote:

    \:rah\:

    On Jul 25, 2008 maxi king wrote:

    \:wub\: nice start of your story!\:wub\:

    On Jul 26, 2008 wrote:

    IT'S GRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRREAT!\:cool\:

    On Jul 26, 2008 AutumnKisses402 wrote:

    I liked it!!! Can't wait for the next part. \:\)

    On Jul 26, 2008 kazakh wrote:

    Really interesting!

    On Jul 28, 2008 Warrayfinson wrote:

    Thank you everyone!
    Keep Creating!!\;\)

    On Jul 29, 2008 joxanth wrote:

    The suspense is killing me! \:eek\:

    On Jul 29, 2008 spacemouse wrote:

    Great story. Thanks for sharing! \:\)

    On Jul 31, 2008 Sxylady_1978 wrote:

    very interesting \:rah\:

    On Aug 2, 2008 sappbaptiste wrote:

    I wonder what's going to happen...

    On Aug 2, 2008 blackbutterflys wrote:

    how you get the grim to watch tv?

    On Aug 11, 2008 hiedibear75 wrote:

    I hope he picks the right one! \:eek\: Cute story so far. \:rah\:

    On Sep 14, 2008 cutedazy wrote:

    off to read part 2\:rah\:

    On May 1, 2009 fabrizioammollo wrote:

    It's a greta story!

    On Sep 3, 2009 madea wrote:

    Good Start, keep going.

    On Aug 30, 2010 Maevyn wrote:

    Very good story idea! \:D

    Random Featured Stories:

     
    Please wait - loading...
    Please wait - loading...