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Wilted Lily: Chapter One
Published Jul 23, 2011


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ScottieJonny

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Guten Tag! This is my first story on this site. It's a remake of my own story called Wilted Lily. I really hope you guys like it!

Guten Tag! This is my first story on this site. It's a remake of my own story called Wilted Lily. I really hope you guys like it! I don't consider myself beautiful. I don't even consider myself attractive. I don't go out on the town and go "boy hunting.'' I'm just not that type of woman. I stay at home and go to work. Wishing and hoping that someone will find me. I am certain no one will find me-and love me. So that's what I do. Sit at home and go to work. Its what I will always do.

My name is Marci Hahn, and I am alone.
I live in my own apartment.Well, my parents got it for me after I got out of college. I am a Video Game Designer. Its fun, easy, and I don't have to socialize with Sims. Every now and then I have to talk to my co-workers, but they usually stay away from me. I guess I'm not really warming to them. I do everything online. I buy my groceries online, I interact with my family members online, I even buy my clothes online. I just can't imagine going out in public and seeing all of those Sims. It makes me jittery just thinking about it.


Though, I do have one motive for going out in public. I want to see a witch. Assuming that we got the whole "I'm weird" thing out of the way. I have a witch thing. I look up to them so much! They have power and they can do spells! Freaking spells! One day I will go out in public and meet one, one day. I just can't right now.
My job requires that I make some connections. I don't know what for but I need the promotion. There were a few Sims outside, so I made the bold decision to go talk to one. One Sim in particular caught my attention. He had this Earthly feel to him. I actually wanted to meet him. For the first time in a long time, I wanted to meet someone.

I have officially shocked myself.
"Um, hi. My name is Marci. I moved here not too long ago... I've never seen you around here before."

"I'm Daniel. I've been here for a while with my family." He rolled his eyes when he said family. I got the impression that he was unhappy. "I was just visiting a friends house. He lives in this duplex also. I've never seen you around here either."

"Uh... well, you know... I work a lot. I'm always there. I'm only here to sleep and eat most of the time, hahaha! It just so happens today I finally get a day off." I'm always home on weekends...

"Oh great! My wife won't be expecting me for a couple of hours. Have you made dinner yet?

"No, but I can. Um... would you like to come in and watch T.V. while I uh... cook?

"Sure, thank you! Lead the way!"
I've never had a man inside my house before. Let alone a man I just met. What if he tries to kill me? Okay, okay. Calm down, Marci. Just stay calm and follow what he's doing. If he talks to you, talk back. That's all you have to do. As I was making dinner, my mind was racing a mile a minute.

Okay. There's a man inside my house. A nice man. But I don't know him. He's good-looking. But I don't know him. I feel extremely out of my element. I don't know what to do. He has a wife. He's not attracted to me. Its okay. Its okay. I have nothing to worry about. If he does something to me, his wife is going to be worried and look for him at his friends house. When she can't find him-- Okay, shut up Marci. Everything is going to be okay.
"So, Marci, what do you do for a living?"

"I'm a Video Game Designer... Um, I'm working on an independent project called Juxtapoz Blocks."

"Interesting. I'm the Assistant Coach to The Llamas."

"Oh yeah, I watch their games when my father comes over. I see you sometimes."

"Haha, yeah. I try to stay out of the spotlight. I love it though."

"I bet you do."
I was starting to warm up to Daniel. I didn't feel shy anymore. I feel liberated. I've done something I've never dreamed of doing. I'm starting to feel hope. After this one conversation, I feel hope. Well Miss Marci, I better be heading on. My wife is expecting me around this time. Thank you so much for the dinner and conversation. I enjoyed myself. I'll see you soon!" Right then and there, he hugged me. I felt amazing. I've never hugged a man. I can't believe it. He thought I was attractive enough to hug.

"Goodbye, Daniel. I hope to see you again soon."

"You will."
That night when I soaked in the bathtub I thought of him. I think I'm attracted to Daniel. He felt really good against my body. I can't stop thinking about that. I had this weird feeling in my stomach. Like falling rain in my body. I felt alive. I felt I had something to live for. Okay, I have to get a new outfit! And go to the salon! I think I can handle going out on my own in public. Its for Daniel, anyway... The next day I got off work and went clothes shopping. I bought $1800 worth of clothes. I couldn't wait until Daniel saw. I'm going to completely 180 myself. After that I went to the salon to get the ugly piercings out and to do something with my hair & makeup.

"So who are you doing this for, hun? I've never seen you in here so I know you're not married."

"Well... uh... Its for a man... Daniel. I like him, a lot and I just want to look pretty for him."

"You've come to the right place! I'll make you look so much more beautiful!"

"Thank you!"
"Woah! Foxy mama!"

"Oh my goodness! Thank you so much! I love it! I really do!"

"You're welcome! Come back any time if you want to try something new!"

This is the first time in a long time where I felt like I was beautiful. I felt wonderful. I felt like my old self again.
Well... today is the day I make a move on Daniel. I'm a little nervous. What if he doesn't feel the same way about me? What if I'm having this sick fantasy and he thinks I'm crazy? I mean, the glances and stares were obvious signs. I really hope he likes me! I know he's married. But I know he's unhappy. I could tell. Well I'm putting my best foot forward. I just hope he sees that. I'm going to make dinner beforehand. I think I'm going to ask him to stay the night. I hope he says yes. I really have faith that this will take off. No matter what though, I'm glad to have this new found faith. Even if it doesn't take off, I'm happy that I feel this way. And I'm grateful I got to experience this for the first time in my life. "Hi, Daniel. Its Marci. I... uh, just wanted to know if, um, you would join me for dinner."

"I'm glad you asked! I was wondering when I would be able to see you again. I'll be right over!"
"Hi, Daniel! Its so good to see you again!"

"Well hello, Marci! You look amazing! I love what you've done to yourself!"

"Thank you, I just thought it was time for a change. I'm glad you like it. I was wondering what you will fell about it!"

"I think you look lovely..."

"Well dinner is inside, I don't want it to get cold!" He was stuck in a daze. He's mine, now.

"Oh, yeah. Right. Coming!"
"So how was your day, Daniel?"

"Pretty stressful, to be honest. My wife is angry with me. She says I don't do anything" Strike one. "Then she threatened to leave me if I don't try harder to get a promotion. Strike two. "She wrecked my car the other day, and blamed it on me because I didn't get the oil changed soon enough. Strike three. "And she's withholding sex." He's definitely mine.

"I'm so sorry to hear that. I really hope things get better for you. I can only imagine what fighting with the one you love feels like."

"Its not fun. I'll tell you that much, haha!"

"I bet its not..."
"Listen, Daniel... I really like you. You make me feel like I'm beautiful and amazing. Please stay the night with me. We don't have to do anything. But please spend the night with me."

"And you make me feel like a man again. I really like you also. Of course I'll spend the night with you. But I want to do something to you first..."
He kissed me. It was so passionate, so warm, so exciting. I couldn't believe I was kissing Daniel. Everything I ever wanted was in this moment. I used to think I would never be loved. But now... I know that this will turn into something special. One thing led to another. The next thing I know, he was in my bed.

"Daniel, I've never been with a man before..."

"Its okay, we don't have to do anything. I'm happy with just doing this all night."

"But I want to. I'm ready."

"Are you sure, Marci?"

"Yes, I'm ready..."
To be continued...

Thank you everyone for reading! I will upload chapter 2 asap! =]

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#1urm0mVIPJul 24, 2011

I hope he doesn't hurt her!

#2GirlydfJul 24, 2011

\:D 

#3ShelleyBVIPJul 25, 2011

\:\( Marci, please be careful. Daniel may be in an unhappy marriage, but he is still in a marriage. Take it easy... I like your beginning anyway, though. \:D

#4CleotopiaJul 25, 2011

Great \:D  I had a sim with the same outfit, skin, and hair a long time ago....

#5FranJaneJul 26, 2011

Marci, be careful of Daniel's wife. She might kill you for sleeping with him.

#6MsConcitedJul 30, 2011

so awesome

#7ScottieJonnyAug 2, 2011

I'm in the midst of making chapter 2 right now! Thank you for your feedback!

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