Stories / Young Forever - Chapter 1
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Hi all!

To start with, I'm so sorry I never finished my last ''Unfindable you'' stories - I had just a really busy time and I lost the game.. it was impossible for me to continue with that one.

So I came up with this new story, it's called young forever: I just hope you will enjoy it!

Hi all!

To start with, I'm so sorry I never finished my last ''Unfindable you'' stories - I had just a really busy time and I lost the game.. it was impossible for me to continue with that one.

So I came up with this new story, it's called young forever: I just hope you will enjoy it! Everything just seemed to be so perfect, me and Joe in this little house in the woods.. Nobody could tell us what to do, in fact, no one could find us here.

Yes, we did make a lot of mistakes, but I think people do make mistakes. Your ups and downs are what makes you who you are, that's exactly the way it is for the two of us. Untill the third week we were in the woodhouse. Joe sat on the ground, his skin looked pale. He tried hard to speak.

''Baby'' I said ''Are you alright?''
''I'm just...'' the next few minutes flew by, I couldn't remember what exactly happened, but I do remember crying, watching Joe's passed out body on the floor.

''Baby, wake up'' I tried many times.
He didn't answer.
''Baby, please, come one'' I heard footsteps running on the swamp, there were numerous footsteps. A male voice gave instructions to other men, and I could hear their feet moving closer to me. ''Jill Fox, come outside and show your hands where we can see them!'' I didn't move. I didn't have the power to give up. How sad it sounds, I was already dead inside. Give up all me and Joe had wouldn't be the way Joe wanted it. I was dead without him. I heard a knock on the thin, wooden door.

''Jill, my name is Mariah, I'm with the FBI! Open the door please!''
..
''Jill, I can help you if you want, all you have to do is get outside!'' Help? What help? They didn't know me. Nobody knew me. No one ever would. Only Joe did.

''Go away!'' I whispered inside myself ''Please, go away'' I went off the couch and sat down next to Joe's body. His heavenly light gray eyes looked at me, but there was no more emotion in them.I could still hear his words. ''You and I will be young forever''

There was no forever. It was over now. The seconds after that went so fast. The FBI broke the door and ran inside.

 You might think I'm the criminal in this story, the bad guy, the evil... but that's totally not what it is like at all. All I wanted was love.

To understand me better, we need to get back five years in time... - Five years earlier -

When I was sixteen everything seemed so bright. Me and Joe could just walk for hours untill we found that beautiful perfect spot underneath the trees. We would sit down on the grass and watch clouds. I loved him. He loved me. And nobody could stop it. ''I think that cloud looks like a sheep''
''Which one?''
''That big one, underneath the tiny one''
''Oh, yes!''

We could just sit and talk forever, untill the blue sky got stolen by the night. There was a lot I liked about Joe. He was exotic, handsome and funny. His skin was skinkissed and his eyes were silver pearls in his face. When we kissed his beard tickled my face. He was the onliest person in the world who would understand me. He wasn't like the other boys in my town. He was emotional, not much of a show-off and he had no friends, just like me.

''Jill?'' he said.
''Yes?''
''You know I love you, right?''
He had some kind of nervous tone in his voice.
''Yes, why do you even ask?'' I asked.
''Well... Would you like to get away with me? When we're older? See parts of the world? Chase the sun and the stars? Have beautiful children?''
 ''Yes! Ofcourse I will'' I laughed. ''Nobody else but you!''

Then we kissed.

''Promise me you will never love somebody else'' he said.
''I promise'' I said.

 Joe was the best thing that ever happened to me.

''Jill'' he said. ''You and I will be young forever''
 Then we kissed again. We kissed the bright blue sky away, so it was filled with dark sky and the most beautiful stars. This was our night. Our moment. Our promise.


TO BE CONTINUED

Young Forever - Chapter 1

Dec 27, 2011 by Cleotopia
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    9 Comment(s) posted so far

    On Dec 28, 2011 urm0m wrote:

    Beautiful start Cleo \:D

    On Dec 29, 2011 Guslucky wrote:

    Really good start \:\)

    On Dec 29, 2011 fabrizioammollo wrote:

    Great beginning!

    On Dec 30, 2011 BBKZ wrote:

    I love her shoes (picture 4 & 7). Where did you download this outfit?

    On Jan 4, 2012 evi wrote:

    Great start Cleo\:rah\: These people are so beutiful!\:wub\:

    On Jan 5, 2012 Mangio wrote:

    Intriguing start Cleo \:wub\: Nicely captured, they fit perfectly with the writing \;\) I wonder what Jill needs help with???

    On Jan 5, 2012 Mangio wrote:

    Also congrats on the feature \:rah\:

    On Jan 9, 2012 starsky524 wrote:

    Awesome start!! I'd like to know more about it!

    On Feb 16, 2012 taxa08 wrote:

    \:wub\:

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