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Valley of Dreams - Part Two
Published Aug 23, 2009


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Chapter two – Of Little Big Things.
This story is created by Spitzmagic, my loving "sis" Barb and me Fred Brenny, two partner in crime...We are still laughing because of all the fun we had together creating it as ...sisters....
We left off were we found a little baby out on our porch... Remember?

Ik liefde u zuster!

Chapter two – Of Little Big Things.
This story is created by Spitzmagic, my loving "sis" Barb and me Fred Brenny, two partner in crime...We are still laughing because of all the fun we had together creating it as ...sisters....
We left off were we found a little baby out on our porch... Remember?

Ik liefde u zuster!
We stood there …stupefied… Who on earth would leave a baby on our porch… We looked around and saw no one. Sean picked it up and said he would take it to the hospital right away It was dawn already when he returned. He said he had to fill in some forms and answer a few questions.
“No one has reported a missing baby. I left my number in case they have more questions…Boy, what an adventure…I feel so sorry for that little one…”
Sean was feeling just as nurturing as we all were.
We talked about the baby into the early hours of morning. Whose baby was it? Why? Why here on our porch? So many questions. We said our goodbyes and Sean promised to check back at the hospital later that day to find out more about the little fellow. After that one night Nita and I started dating. We spend as much time together as we could.
It had been almost a month without someone claiming the baby. The police have been unable to locate his parents. We went over to the hospital every day to check on “little Mikey” as we lovingly called him.
Nita and I understood each other completely. We were like two souls united in one. Nita spends the night quite often and sometimes dear Fred would stay over at Sean’s just to give us room and privacy to build our relationship. We had the most romantic dates ever…We found the most beautiful spot near the waterfall and we both believed that this is where we would grow old together We are the happiest people on earth. I had never thought coming to the Valley was coming to my Valley of Dreams… Then Sean called…said the hospital called him to ask if we were interested in adopting little Mikey. I instantly called Nita to tell him we should take care of the little man… Not just me, but Fred also, we were like busy bees. I was talking on the phone with Nita and she with Sean… Could we pull it of? Taking care of a little baby? We decided to pack us a nice picnic basket and go to the beach to talk about it. We where so excited and we hadn’t even begun to worry about yet, who was going to sign the actual adoption papers. “Boy…” was what Fred said…We were all lost in our own thoughts. Fred?...Shall we fix up the shed and make room for the little man?
I hadn’t even thought of other possibilities as to where we all would stay.
“Sean…I am going to ask Barb to marry me, tomorrow… I have never been so sure of anything in my whole entire life….”
Sean gulped, it suddenly hit him that things were going to change drastically for all of them…
The next day Nita said to wear something nice. I’ll pick you up for Brunch. We stopped at a beautiful look out point and he whispered something in my ear……”WHAT????” “Barb Brenny…will you be my wife?”

He puts this beautiful ring on my finger, says it was his mom’s… I cried and fell in his arms….”Oh…YES..YES YES!!!” Oh my…Fred will you look at this ring? It’s so gorgeous. Nita said it belonged to his mom. Do you know what happened to her? The next morning Fred was talking Sean into coming to the beach with her again. Sean always knows to pick the appropriate attire for a visit to the beach. He was so NOT expecting what happened next… Sean Collina, my love… Would you do the honour of marrying me and make an honest girl out of me? Sean stood there …speechless…”Well?...Honey…?” Fred….You are the craziest woman on this face of the earth! Of course I will! As Fred stood there letting it all sink in Sean said: “Are you coming sweetheart? I will take you to a real nice restaurant for dinner to celebrate.
Baby Mike would arrive the next morning.
So we all got up really early and couldn’t wait to bring Mike home with us. Welcome to the Ohinyan clan my little one… And so it happened we were planning our weddings. And a baby in the house. Fred told Sean that Barb and Nita had decided to adopt Mikey and were going to move to their new home at the waterfall afterwards. “Fred…I would really want to….you know…have our own baby… Did you hear from your mom? Is she still in Egypt?”
“Don’t worry sweetie, We’ll call her as soon as we say our I do’s! Did you call your dad to look after Mikey while we are at the Lake?”
The next morning we were having Sean and Nita’s dad over for a visit to get acquainted with Mikey before our Big Day in two days. Nita is happy to see him… And so is Sean… Barb…don’t look too worried! I raised kids too you know…You are marrying one of them… We will have a real good time now won’t we son.. Daddy will take good care of Mikey…he promised. The Big Day had arrived in all its Glory… It was going to be the most beautiful day ever… I felt almost sick with excitement…boy…Calm down you butterflies! We were just the four of us…just like we wanted it to be. Since mom wasn’t here we decided to have no one but us on this day… We said our vows…it was all so romantic! Fred and Sean were staring at each other for more than an hour it seemed. We laughed and ate and even danced to the song of the birds and the soft wind. Fred called mom…Oh yes mom! We are married now! You have two new son’s in law.
Here I give you to Barb…hold on…
“Mom? I am so happy! It couldn’t have been more perfect. Mom…you know you’re a granny now don’t you? Next time you are home please come see us you have new family members to meet. Mom, love you, talk to you again soon” Barb….Who would’ve guessed half a year ago…that we…well… there is something I have to tell you… Fred began to tell me “ I am pregnant…” You What???!! Oh my Gosh sis…I don’t believe this…you know…I am TOO!!! What’s up ladies?
Ehhmm…Nothing…we are sooo happy we just had to scream!
Barb, I will tell you a little story when we get home…OK? Sean…I love you! I have a small surprise for you when we get home… And so the BIG DAY ended. Is there more? Yes…there will always be more!

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#17mpattonSep 13, 2009

Great story.  Will we be seeing more of the Valley of Dreams?

#18oldmember_msthickemsSep 20, 2009

omg!! I loved it... I really enjoyed this story it was so cute and so loving... like I told ms spitzmagic.. I couldn't wait to see what happens with those four and the baby and Im now so anxious to find out what will happen when they have their own kids and will the birth mother of lil mikey ever show up..oh and how the grandma will react to their marriage and her two new handsome son N law's.... kudo's to you for an excellent story
smooches \:\)

#19ladytaurus67Sep 28, 2009

This truly a great story! I was excited to see the baby was adopted! And now anxious to see how things will go with Fred and Barb's own bundles of joy! You and Barb have done a fantastic job on this story! ((((((HUGS))))\:wub\: -Scarlet

#20martoeleVIPOct 5, 2009

Great romantic chapter. Now, who of you two is going to write the next part? Congratulations you doing fine together....\:rah\:

#21topaz27Oct 10, 2009

I loved this so much, wonderful reading and beautiful pictures, can't wait for more \:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\: \:wub\:

#22luckyoyoOct 12, 2009

Love the screenshots, lovely romantic story.\:wub\: \:rah\:

#23MerryMFeb 3, 2010

cool \:\)

#24simsjeanieApr 7, 2010

Now I've found this I haven't enough time to give further feed back - have to read the next chapter - NOW ... can't wait ... \:wub\:

#25Dec 19, 2010

romantic....

#26HellsaintJul 29, 2011

swweeett... \;\) congrats to the Brenny sisters!! *clap hands*

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