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Prom Night Six
Published Jul 23, 2010


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Chapter Six. !

Sorry it took so long, I had to change a few things to make sure it wouldnt get rejected. Enjoy(:

Chapter Six. !

Sorry it took so long, I had to change a few things to make sure it wouldnt get rejected. Enjoy(:
"TAYYLOORR? TAYLORR? TAYLOR WHERE ARE YOU?"
"You won't find her here."

"Aubrey? Is that you?"
"You won't find any of your friends here. I will show you where they are."

"Aubrey, what are you talking about? Why do you sound like that?"

"I didn't get my prom, none of you shall have yours.!"

"Aubrey??"
*screams* "Did you hear that? There was another scream."

"That was the fourth scream we have heard today and there just so happens to be four of our people in that house. Now, Carter, me and Angel are going to go into that house. We don't know whats in there but since you won't tell us we have no choice but to help our friends. Two of my best friends could be in danger and your being too selfish to tell us anything."

*sigh* "Wait, I'll tell you."

"A father with his two daughters lived here. The mother was said to have died of a foreign disease she picked up from a business trip to Europe. The doctors were unsure of how to cure her and only found ways to lessen the pain.

The father, Morie, was an inventer. It began as just a hobby but he became self-employed in it after his wife passed. It was a way to stay home to raise the girls.

But, he became so engrossed in his inventing he almost never left his bench. He never shaved and the girls had to remind him to eat, sleep and shower. "
The younger daughter was only a child, I am unsure of her exact age but I think she was around 10. She loved fish and loved to swim. Her mother had bought her a little fish bowl of her own and told her that if she could keep all of the fish in there alive for a year that she would buy an even bigger one. Kira, the daughter, succeeded in keeping them alive and a big fish tank was put into the living room. "The oldest, Mallory, was a sophomore in high school when her mother passed away. She was a senior when the accident happened."

"Accident, what accident Carter?"

"I am getting there, Kim."

"Mallory was excited as ever for her Senior Year Prom but she knew her dad would never let her go. She never understood why but ever since her mom died, her dad hasn't let her go to any of the school events & dances. Mallory was planning on sneaking out. She already bought a dress when she went shopping with a friend of hers. A cute boy at school had asked her to go. She was determined to get to this dance."
"Once the night of her special night came along she got herself all dressed up and began sneaking out when her dad stopped her. He knew it was Prom Night and he knew Mallory wanted to go so he was ready to stop her from going." "He told Mallory that she was not to go to that dance. Her mother was not there to see it and so she was not allowed to go." "But she begged and begged her dad to let her go to just this one dance. She said that she had missed out on everything the past two years of her high school career. Mallory told her father that Prom was the most important night of high school and that she had to go." "After more refusal from her father she got angry and yelled out that her mom ruined her life." "Morie's face squished up and steam blew out his ears. He asked her to repeat what she had just said and again she yelled into his face that her mom ruined her life." "'Say it one more time' he said and one more time came out 'Mom ruined my li-'" "Only that time, he didn't let her finish before he slapped across the face. They both stood there stunned for a second as tears filled up Mallory's eyes.

With her hand holding her face, her eyes filled with tears and her voice shaky she looked at her dad and told him that she was going to prom."
"And she meant it. She ran out that very door right there at the front of this house and starting running towards her school. She didn't care what she looked like anymore she just wanted out of that house and away from her father." "Mallory was so focused on getting out of the house that she didn't even see the car coming her way." "And the car wasn't able to see her coming in time. Mallory is the third tombstone. Morie lost it, he knew that Kira hadn't seen the car hit Mal, she had only heard the fight and possibly the slap. Morie was scared he would be put in prison for this. His head was no longer on straight. He never gave Mal the proper burial."

"What happened to her then?"

"No one really knows. There are rumors of course."
"Some say that she went out with the garbage that night. Others say he just threw her in the lake. No one knows. The only thing that is for sure is that she was never buried."

"And the only two tombstones? What about them? Morie and Kira?"
"Well there are rumors as to what exactly happened to them as well. Its been said that Kira asked her father about what happened to her sister and it blew Morie over the edge. All I know is that their two bodies were found here by a relative who came to check up on them. There was no evidence as to how they died exactly but they got a proper burial and funeral right here at the house. They are those two tombstones you saw earlier." "Then what is the danger? Why is this whole thing so scary? Why do we keep hearing screams?"

"Rumors have it that the ghost of Mallory haunt this place. Prom Night every year, a group of seniors will be taken hostage by her and she prevents them from having their prom just because she never got the chance to have hers."

"So you think shes the reason Ryan's car broke down?"


"Yes, and she is also probably the reason why our tow truck isn't here yet."
"My lady is in there! I have to go in. You two do what you want but I worked hard to get her to be my date. She will never be my girlfriend if she isn't around."

Angel left Kimberly and Carter there and ran off towards the front door.
"Angel, wait up! I am coming with you!" "Kim wait. I am coming too. I can't let you go in without me." Right after Angel, came Kim and following her was Carter. The three entered the house planning to help their four other friends to safety.

Right now, prom was on hold.
"AUBREY?? RYAN?? TAYLOR?? LEAHHH?? WHERE ARE YOU GUYS?" (Simultaneously) "We're right here."

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#3spitzmagicJul 24, 2010

Bravo...love the screens...congrats too...awesome chapter...\:rah\:

#4Caul14xJul 24, 2010

that was great, really enjoyed the scene's and reading it \:\)

#5nik74Jul 24, 2010

great job!

#6JeciMKJul 24, 2010

Please make a happy end \:\))

#7MangioJul 24, 2010

Poor Mallory, if only her father listened... I hope nothing happens to their friends \:wub\: Can't wait for more

#8my_bullittJul 25, 2010

Wow, it's getting even better as it goes along! \:rah\:

#9plyangel456Jul 25, 2010

It's really good! \:D Can't wait to see what happens next! \:\)

#10mysteryjack1Jul 26, 2010

Super Exciting! I really can't wait to find out their fates \;\) Great chapter \:D

#11AmateurGamerJul 27, 2010

\:o I cant read past this episode..... (sad moan \:\( )cant wait for the next piece

#12ChloeelizabethAug 1, 2010

Wow this is amazing\:o! Can't wait for next chapter \:wub\:

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