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This is my second story.
I would appretiate some comments on how to improve my story's.
Thank you and enjoy!

PS- Sorry its so short!

This is my second story.
I would appretiate some comments on how to improve my story's.
Thank you and enjoy!

PS- Sorry its so short!
Being in college is great.Your free from annoying parents and siblings.This is Keely Casey,the daughter of Morgan and Jared Casey.She also has an alien brother.You'll meet the family soon! This is Kyle Francis her best friend.Keely persuaded him to go to college as he was backing out. Kyle is studying drama major and Keely the art major.They are both "A" students. Keely has a part time job as the chef and cleaner in the cafeteria in the dorm house.She works from 11-1 And Kyle works from 1-4. They both love to dance in front of everyone and not care what others think. Keely is the champion in chess in the dorm house.She gets it from her mother. Then they would sleep through the night for tomorrows final exam.

An Alphebet Legacy: College Life.

Mar 27, 2011 by xXxskittlesxXx
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    5 Comment(s) posted so far

    #1 On Mar 29, 2011 TinaSteele wrote:

    Nice Start \:D I cant wait to read more about it!

    #2 On Mar 29, 2011 -kalisa- wrote:

    It was a nice start! \:\)

    #3 On Apr 3, 2011 lalaya wrote:

    well itvcould be longer and more deleted i thin the both frwinds should hook up
    \:wub\:

    #4 On Apr 8, 2011 kolapants wrote:

    it's more info than story...
     

    #5 On Apr 22, 2011 ilyxoxovee wrote:

    Good start. I wish it could have been longer though. (: but still, great!

     
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