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Hello!!! Here I leave you with my new story called "The Legend of the Magician and Fairy", I hope you like it, sorry for my english, enjoy it and leave your comment!!!! Thanks!!!

Hello!!! Here I leave you with my new story called "The Legend of the Magician and Fairy", I hope you like it, sorry for my english, enjoy it and leave your comment!!!! Thanks!!! They count the story of a magician That one day in their charmed forest he cried
because in spite of their magic
he had not been able to find the love.
The moon, their only friend
She gave him forces to support
the whole pain that felt
for blame of their so long solitude.
It is that he knew very well that in their to exist
it never owed leave of their destination.
If somebody has to speak to you,
you will already know it
you will only have to know how to recognize it.
It was in one afternoon that the magician
going for a walk in the forest the view crossed
With the sweetest look
that in all their life he never knew.
From that same moment
the fairy and the magician wanted to be
alone both in the forest
being always loved and in all place.
And "The Evil" that it always existed It didn't support to see so much happiness between two beings And with their hate it attacked Until the fairy fell In that fatal dream of the beings. In their castle it spent the nights
the magician looking for the power
To return their fairy,their love, yesterday's so sweet look And it didn't stop from then on Looking for the form of recovering
to the woman that day
amid the forest he could finally love.
And today he knows that it is the love And he will have forces to support that incantation He knows that one day will see its sweet fairy arrive
and forever with him she will stay.
This is the end for my story!!! Bye bye!!!

"The Legend of the Magician and Fairy"

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    44 Comment(s) posted so far

    On Feb 9, 2008 wickedgoddess_athena711 wrote:

    Poor Magician his faerie love was taken away from him...

    On Feb 9, 2008 bec71 wrote:

    That was....AWSUM!! That was such a kwl little story, and aww his love was taken from him\:\( \:wub\: Ur sims are very pretty.

    On Feb 9, 2008 OpheliaNival wrote:

    Such a sweet story and teatrical expression... The words and text seemed so poetically formated and accompanied with those beautiful, crystalclear pictures. \:wub\: Although I must admit that the story was a little bit hard to understand at times, the main point came thru and I couldn't help but being charmed at your little tale \:D Hope you keep up with making stories!

    On Feb 9, 2008 thekewlestnerd wrote:

    very cool, loved the story! \:D \:rah\:

    On Feb 9, 2008 mangooo1 wrote:

    So romantic and sad in the same time \:\( \:\) But I liked it, your pics are beautiful!

    On Feb 10, 2008 spicylove wrote:

    very nice story i love your photos\:rah\:

    On Feb 10, 2008 qasert wrote:

    \:rah\:

    On Feb 10, 2008 dealer_day wrote:

    Beautiful pictures and sims. \:wub\:

    On Feb 10, 2008 Zayury wrote:

    Maru, this is a very lovely story! Your pictures look fantastic! They are very clear and sharp! I LOVE the colors, the outfits, and the GORGEOUS characters! Great job amiga! \:wub\: \:rah\:

    On Feb 11, 2008 qvisn wrote:

    I hope he gets her back.\:\( beautiful pictures.\:D

    On Feb 11, 2008 aaaaaaac wrote:

    \:rah\: GREAT STORY!!!\:rah\: \;\)

    On Feb 11, 2008 123456789_1234 wrote:

    I love your fairy \:wub\: nice \:\)and sad \:\( When does she get back? Very artistics your pics!!!

    On Feb 11, 2008 cinderellimouse wrote:

    Great story!!! Your English is very good!!! I like the fact that your English isn't quite perfect because it made your story sound very poetic! It's a romantic story and I hope the magician gets his fairy back in the end!!! \:D \;\) \:wub\:

    On Feb 11, 2008 pjeff03 wrote:

    Were did u get the horse?\:o I need one for my story.
    \:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Feb 12, 2008 Muccy wrote:

    Thank you for this romantic story, your pictures look great. I hope the two can be found. Your English is popular. Many thanks \:wub\: \:wub\:

    On Feb 12, 2008 Katriona! wrote:

    That was....AWSUM!! \:wub\: \:wub\: \:wub\:

    On Feb 12, 2008 simangel234 wrote:

    That Was A Great Little Story! I Really Enjoyed Reading It!\:wub\: You Get A Five From Me!

    ~Celeste

    On Feb 12, 2008 lexiann123 wrote:

    OH maru! THAT WAS BEAUTIFUL!!!!! Really I'm not just saying that!\:wub\: \:wub\: \:wub\: I think I almost cried. Love stories are my FAVORITE and I LOOOOOOOOOOOOOVED this! VERY VERY VERY BEAUTIFUL! 5.0!
    *Lex*

    On Feb 12, 2008 tinkerbell7716 wrote:

    Great story. Hopefuly he gets his fairy back soon.

    On Feb 12, 2008 eshuff wrote:

    Gasp! Girl you are an artist! Every shot breathtakingly gorgeous! You mix it up and include shots from so many different sets, but every single one is perfect!

    Heartbreaking and beautiful story. I'm sucker for long lost love, and this was very well done. \:rah\: \:rah\: -- Beth

    On Feb 12, 2008 querubin wrote:

    hey buenisima c nota q le metiste laburo y quedo padrisima un poko triste la historia pero me gusto le pongo un 5 seguro girl... despues tengo q leer las otras. abrazo\:D \:D \:D

    On Feb 12, 2008 querubin wrote:

    me olvide hay va el 5...\:P

    On Feb 13, 2008 Dirtdevill wrote:

    Wow, what a great story! I really enjoyed to look at your amazing beautifull pictures and reading every letter you wrote. Your Sims are the best, they look verry georgious. In my eyes, the male Sim with the long dark hair, looks a lot like Ville Valo. Maybe he is your beautifull Ville Sim creation? I like him verry much, he does have a wonderfull face with such lovely blue eyes!\:wub\: Thanks for sharing this wonderfull story. I enjoyed to read it and rated 5*, you've done a good job!\:wub\:

    On Feb 13, 2008 muaxxx2004 wrote:

    hi hi... I love your story!!!!!! Awesome \:D

    On Feb 13, 2008 jabire wrote:

    Maru . I loved your history and photos are perfect
    I wait for new histories\:wub\: Maluy

    On Feb 13, 2008 spacemouse wrote:

    Good story. Thanks for sharing. \:\)

    On Feb 13, 2008 danaszy wrote:

    I love your romantic story. Your pictures are fantastic and wonderful. Very great job.\:D

    On Feb 13, 2008 jaundyce61 wrote:

    Breathtaking shots, you are to be commended! Well done story!!\:rah\:

    On Feb 13, 2008 cariadbach wrote:

    I love fairies so this was perfect for me. Beautiful pictures. A great job\:wub\:

    On Feb 14, 2008 ticticc13 wrote:

    \:wub\: How do you know I love fantasy-themed Sim stories? \:ph34r\: The pictures are beautiful as well as the characters and the set. The only thing I noticed are some English errors but all are tolerable. Wonderful work and I could see the hard effort you did for this story. A well deserved 5-star from me. Keep up the great work. ~Tictic

    On Feb 14, 2008 Nefira wrote:

    fairies are so beautiful!!!!and it's a very sad story,but very interesting!\:wub\: \:wub\:

    On Feb 17, 2008 sunny33 wrote:

    Great story and beautiful pics!\:rah\: But, where did you find this horse?Please tell me!\:\)

    On Mar 11, 2008 wrote:

    Magic! \:rah\:

    On Mar 14, 2008 wrote:

    goo job

    On Mar 20, 2008 civetinja wrote:

    Good work! Thanks for sharing !\:\)

    On Mar 31, 2008 Augusto_0820 wrote:

    Very nice \:\)

    On Apr 2, 2008 BOAV wrote:

    \:rah\: \:\)

    On Apr 20, 2008 hjdjhgf wrote:

    aww that was really great, the characters and settings are both very beautiful. \:wub\: \:wub\: \:wub\: \:wub\: \:wub\: \:wub\:

    On Apr 20, 2008 maryash2 wrote:

    you make cloths? \:o

    On Apr 21, 2008 Lillou204 wrote:

    Very nice story and your pictures are great! \:\)

    On Jun 19, 2008 Angela! wrote:

    \:rah\:

    On Jun 25, 2008 pegasaus7 wrote:

    Wonderful story!Very nice pictures and forest is very magical.
    Five Stars!

    On Nov 2, 2008 KelseaMaid wrote:

    \:wub\: this story is amazing i love the clothes hair wings ect. of the characters. it was so sad but hopeful fabulous job \:D

    On Mar 9, 2009 maxi king wrote:

    \:\(sad story!Great done!\:rah\:

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