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Once Upon a time in mystical forest...

Once Upon a time in mystical forest... They're lived a family of elves... they were very kind creatures... but they weren't the only creatures in the forest!! there was an evil ice queen... who demanded that everything was hers... she was a very lonely creature... and didn't understand why no one wanted to be friends with her!! one day the Fairy Queens children came across a particularly cold part of the forest... they looked around in amazement at the shiny white layer that covered the grass and at the icy water that stood still on the pond!! but then they noticed a woman sitting all by herself minding her own business!! then all of a sudden she was stood infront of them, "WHAT ARE YOU DOING HERE?" she boomed!!
the little elves just said to her... "how come we have never seen you before?", she just simply said "i don't get out much because i have no friends!!"... the young elves ran home to ask their parents who she was... and before they knew it they knew all about her, but believed she could become a better person if she just had some people to help her!!
so they ran to her little place amongst the forest to find her before they knew it they were best friends with the ice queen...
the ice queen soon found out that everything doesn"t have to revolve around her for her to be happy!!!
 they were soon the happiest lot of creatures in the forest!!!


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Childrens stories/Fairytopia, a magical forest

Mar 16, 2007 by oh-so-smexi
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    16 Comment(s) posted so far

    On Mar 16, 2007 oh-so-smexi wrote:

    leave me a comment/ im only 13 yrs old but i absolutely love writing abot fantasy creatures... its just me lol
    plz tell me if its a good story or not... plz be honest!!!\;\) \:\) \:D

    On Mar 16, 2007 spiffyriffic wrote:

    A cute story with a good moral to it \:\)

    On Mar 16, 2007 R.Quest wrote:

    You have a very creative mind... and Your Sims look great\:rah\: \:cool\:

    On Mar 16, 2007 scarlet_white wrote:

    Wow impressively short and a very good start, the more you write you will get more talented, its a good start, keep at it

    On Mar 17, 2007 MoriaG wrote:

    short but sweet. I love elves and faires!!

    On Mar 17, 2007 super_niin wrote:

    the sims look cool\:D

    On Mar 17, 2007 xtessax34 wrote:

    that was a very cute story, i can't wait to read any more stories that you come up with, keep up the great work\:rah\:

    On Mar 17, 2007 Little Seer wrote:

    That was very sweet and really did have a good morale. Great job! Cheers, \:\)

    On Mar 17, 2007 nanapon wrote:

    very short but the sims looked great!

    On Mar 20, 2007 cawilley wrote:

    \:D wow your so young and talented, you will be an awesome adult , keep it up!!\:rah\:

    On Mar 25, 2007 oh-so-smexi wrote:

    thnx everyone!!! u have made me very happy!!!!!\:D \:wub\:

    On Apr 13, 2007 Mistress Useless wrote:

    Lovely story!

    On May 3, 2007 eva hanstvedt wrote:

    \:\) good\:\)

    On May 23, 2007 sadie7684 wrote:

    Such a cute story! \:\)

    On Feb 8, 2009 angelapleasant2008 wrote:

    Very Good Story\:D

    On Mar 28, 2009 oh-so-smexi wrote:

    thanx everyone.. i havnt been on in a while\:\)
    im 15 now and at the moment i am writing a book..
    when my computer is up and running again i will make more stories
    thanx again
    x \:\)

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