I decided to change the 1st pic here..I just liked this pic and wanted to post it. Thanks for all those who read and commented in the past chapters! Hope you'll like this one as well.
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On Dec 1, 2007 Alyosha wrote:
Hey! You did it again! Wonderful! Your story keeps on making me even more desperate to finish mine!
On Dec 1, 2007 samcactus101 wrote:
On Dec 1, 2007 wickedgoddess_athena711 wrote:
It may not be now but soon you'll see more fire coming out from Lizzie's hands.
On Dec 1, 2007 lillith_666 wrote:
Wow, another awesome chapter, This story is sooo good, I loved the dream sequence, your choice of cc was perfect, very spooky
Thanks for the update, I look forward to the next part
On Dec 1, 2007 Elena. wrote:
Ammmaaaaziiing!!! I love what you did to the story - the decorations of the cript and chambers!!!
You are good! And the plot really thickens, I just can't wait for the next chapter - I wish I could have powers like Liz, let's just say life would be more easy
Fantastic Job!
On Dec 1, 2007 qasert wrote:
On Dec 1, 2007 mangooo1 wrote:
Awesome part! It's good to see that Lizzie's getting more and more powerful and it would be great if she would have the same powers as her ancestor. Can't wait for the next part
On Dec 1, 2007 Foxychik925 wrote:
that was great!
cant wait to read the next part
5.0
On Dec 1, 2007 Katriona! wrote:
Cool stuf
On Dec 1, 2007 cariadbach wrote:
Another brilliant chapter. the scenes in the toms were eerie, I'm glad I had the lights on
Wonderful use of CC
On Dec 1, 2007 wrote:
Had a lot of catching up to do , cool story
On Dec 1, 2007 OpheliaNival wrote:
I think this was great even though there wasn't so much magic. Your story is so strong and I think it's great that you gave us some hints and explanations for what has happened and what will happen. The story seems so well thought thru and the CC are really doing their job to enhance the eerie feeling. I love it!
On Dec 1, 2007 Wigwog wrote:
Cool!! Loving the gothic outfits
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On Dec 1, 2007 LillyKP wrote:
I like how this story is turning out. Good work
On Dec 1, 2007 fishies123 wrote:
Its rocked!
On Dec 1, 2007 Emilie Jolie wrote:
Yay!
On Dec 1, 2007 sweetcharming wrote:
awesome continuation
I loved the dream at the beginning, it seduced me to want to read more!
Well done!
On Dec 1, 2007 123456789_1234 wrote:
another great chapter
On Dec 1, 2007 iron mum wrote:
Great
I think Lizzie could be in trouble wareing the medalion
Greet work.
Caint wait for next chapter.
On Dec 1, 2007 qvisn wrote:
Great stuff, i really enjoyed this part, cant wait for more.
On Dec 1, 2007 jaundyce61 wrote:
very enjoyable continuation, keep up the good work!!
On Dec 1, 2007 MissIlly666 wrote:
Its good, makes me interested in seeing what happens next. Good work!
On Dec 2, 2007 jadedqueenie wrote:
very good job - very interesting plot line
On Dec 2, 2007 dayane_hola wrote:
Really cool I just love it!!
On Dec 2, 2007 atangki wrote:
Great!
On Dec 2, 2007 wrote:
You're too good at this lol
On Dec 3, 2007 candy820 wrote:
Another Great chapter. Thanks for letting me know it was up.I might have missed it with the new picture.another 5.0
On Dec 3, 2007 hiedibear75 wrote:
Wow you've made yet another amazing and suspenseful chapter.
On Dec 3, 2007 maxi king wrote:
On Dec 6, 2007 jabire wrote:
Perfect!!
I like very much ,I want more
On Jan 13, 2008 Seerlyn wrote:
Waw
On Jan 17, 2008 Dirtdevill wrote:
Wow, what a wonderfull story! Your screenies are wonderfull again, it makes me interested in seeing what happens next!
On Apr 25, 2008 wrote:
Good, as usual!!!
Make me dream, in the next chapters!!!
On Apr 26, 2008 angelnicole wrote:
On May 1, 2008 johndenver wrote:
On May 3, 2008 Elisa G wrote:
I know it's just a "small story" even though of 12 parts, but to me it seems like a book. And when it comes to books etc, I'm not much of a reader to be honest. Your story, however, is one of the few that capture my interest! Harry Potter is also one of them. I'm amazed over your work, and I really think you should consider becoming a professional writer. I have a book in progress, but it's not even close to half way! I seem to lose interest in writing on it... But if you do have the interest and inspiration, go for it!