Yay! Another chapter. Hope you guys will like this as well and hopefully it would answer some of the questions left unanswered from the previous chapter.
I like thi s pic, Lizzie seems to be so confused and lost in the middle of a dark forest.Enjoy reading.
The sibling finally managed to get out of the spooky manor and return to their camp. The siblings have no idea what Lucretia has in store for them there.
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On Apr 25, 2008 mrmrsopey65 wrote:
First to comment whoot! love the story cant wait for more!
On Apr 25, 2008 iluvhorses13 wrote:
Great part!
On Apr 25, 2008 iron mum wrote:
What's up with Lizzie? Can't wait for the next part.
On Apr 25, 2008 mangooo1 wrote:
I'm very curious now! Just "10 minutes" and everything will be very dangerous and they have to fight a lot but I hope that at the end Lizzie and her sibling will be victorious and the others will get what they deserve!
On Apr 25, 2008 candy820 wrote:
Awesome story once again 5.0
On Apr 26, 2008 qasert wrote:
On Apr 26, 2008 captainlicious wrote:
Cool!
On Apr 26, 2008 Nenehunni wrote:
oooooo, this part had my head in a muddle but i got it all figured out in the end
cant wait for the nex part which im sure will be out in no time - hehe i love these stories there rockin
On Apr 26, 2008 OpheliaNival wrote:
Wow! Never saw that one coming in a million years, really well crafted and this chapter helped giving the old ones a whole new meaning... Can't wait for the next chapter; it will be the ultimate battle! Quite a cliffhanger to leave us with, I pressed forward four times until I had to give up in disappointment that there were no more in this chapter... Keep it up!
On Apr 26, 2008 wrote:
Cool, a new chapter.
On Apr 26, 2008 leifofdel wrote:
Such an exciting installment. Can hardly wait for the next one. Beautiful images as well. Love it!
On Apr 26, 2008 wrote:
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On Apr 27, 2008 LillyKP wrote:
I like how this part unfolded, good good work.
On Apr 27, 2008 wrote:
That was awesome!!!!! hehehe i liked the part when she did the superman and flew away... lol!!!
5.0!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! sadly, there is no higher number otherwise, i'd choose it. i can't wait for the next one!!!!!!! Riven's shirt is awesome... You will totally be a writer or a director for a movie!
this series!!! keep up the beautiful work!!!! ROCK ON!!!!!!
On Apr 28, 2008 tey711 wrote:
I like how you are able to clue the reader in effortlessly on what is taking place in this storyline and how the past, present, and future seem to be culminating into a climatic confrontation and an ending that has apparently been building for 10 years! Great suspense! I can't wait for the next chapter!
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On May 9, 2008 civetinja wrote:
Great chapter! Thanks for sharing !
On Jun 7, 2008 doraboots wrote:
Very cool, nice story, great writer
On Jul 18, 2008 Herzen & Blasen wrote:
On Oct 29, 2008 Warrayfinson wrote:
Ooohhh, now it's getting better then great and greater then great. I'm on to the next the next chapter! 5.0!