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i'll be disappearing in TSR for a while for my review classes. Wish me luck that I can pass the dreaded CPA board exam, whe I do I'll be back to start other stories as well.
Thank you so much for all the creators whose CC I used in this story. For those who want to know where I got my CC just ask me in my guestbook or PM me, I'll be glad to tell you. Thank you as well to the friends that I made here in TSR. LAslty for my avid readers, thank you for inspiring me to continue writing this. Rest assured I'll be back here in TSR and write some more.
Anyway here it is, enjoy!
What will happen to the siblings when they face Lucretia, would it be too late?
Thank you so much for all the creators whose CC I used in this story. For those who want to know where I got my CC just ask me in my guestbook or PM me, I'll be glad to tell you. Thank you as well to the friends that I made here in TSR. LAslty for my avid readers, thank you for inspiring me to continue writing this. Rest assured I'll be back here in TSR and write some more.
Anyway here it is, enjoy!
What will happen to the siblings when they face Lucretia, would it be too late? Henry looked at the magician's hat that was on the counter.
"10 minutes is up. I got dressed as fast as I could. Emma helped me scry for the location of Lucretia's lair that we saw in our dreams. I just need to concentrate on the water and try to teleport us there."said Lizzie.
Henry placed the hat in his head.
"All right, let's go.."he said. Lizzie turned to Henry.
"You-you look so much like dad..he used to dress that to me when he'd tell me stories.."whispered Lizzie.
"Excpet for the red hair.."mumbled Jane.
The 3 siblings turned to the water.
"You're mom wen to downtown. Riven is still under the sleeping spell. I'll make sure he's safe before your mom returns."noted Emma as Lizze noded her head and turned to the waters. A faint image of a familiar scene soon appeared.
"I think I got it."she said as she held her siblings hands.
"Ready?"she said to them.
Jane and Henry noded their head as yes. Blue light then enveloped the siblings. The next thing they knew was they were in a graveyard.
"I feel tired..This is as far as I can take you guys sorry."whispered Lizzie who was exhausted. Lucretia and Alexis stood on top of a roof of the Mausoleum. Lucretia had retracted her wings but her gown still displayed her beauty as a siren.
"Alexis, we have visitors. PLease welcome them as I continue firguring out this medallion."spoke Lucretia.
"Hurry, what's taking you so long anyway."mumbled Alexis. Alexis mumbled a chant as zombies rose from their graves to welcome them.
'Uh oh.."piped Lizzie. "Can you teleport us on top of the mausoleum?"asked Henry.
"No..maybe if we get a closer to it. Teleporting us all the way here drained me."whispered Lizzie.
"All right then we'll get a little closer. Jane, can you take care of our welcoming committee?"asked Henry. "Of course!"said Jane as she raised her hand and flung several fireballs at the zombies. The zombies soon found themselves surrounded in flames as the siblings dashed passed them. "Hmm..pathetic! Let's see, sha ll we fight fire with fire?"asked Lucretia as she used the medallion.
Thunder roared then fireballs started raining down at the siblings. "Stick close to me."said Henry as he formed a shield of energy to protect them.
"How'd you--"stammered Lizzie in amazement.
"The light I use for healing can protect us too."noted Henry. "Jane, can you control the fireballs and send it back to them?"asked Hnery.
Jane giggled. "Of course!"
Jane raised ehr arms then gestured and the flames came flying back to Lucretia and Alexis. Alexis leaped backwards as Lucretia stood undaunted as she used the medallion to put the flames out.
Lizzie smiled at her elder sister. It seems that Jane has finally erased of her fears and controlled her flames. "Buy me a little more time Alexis..i think i've finally figured it out.the youngest seems to be the most powerful."said Lucretia as Alexis noded her head. "More zombies.."grumbled Jane."I'll take care of them. You two just get the medllaion back."she told them
"be careful ok?"noted Lizzie as Jane noded her head.
"Come on Liz."said Henry. "Okay we're here, can you teleport us now?"asked Henry as Lizzie noded her head. Lizzie was about to teleport them up when purpel smoke smoke crept behind them. Then the smoke formed into a person. It was Alexis. "Sorry to bother you."said Alexis "But I dont want you to mess with our plans."said Alexis as she created an energy ball and threw it at Lizzie.
Lizzie was too startled to move. The next thing she knew was HEnry pushing him out of the way and she fell into the ground.
"Henry!"called Lizzie as she got up and saw Henry was got hit in the shoulder. Henry was in the ground as well as Alexis shook her head and prepared another energy ball when the angry Lizzie beat her to it.
"Leave my brother alone!"screamed Lizzie as she threw it at Alexis.
Alexis screamed as the energyball hit her as Lizzie turned to Henry.
"Are you--"trembled Lizzie as Henry surrounded himself in white light.
"I'm okay, I'm healing myself right now."he said as he struggled to get up. "They cant take me down that easily."he assured his sister. 'Finally!"declared Lucretia as a portal seemed to open.
"Come on!'said Henry. The two then teleproted themselves on top of the Mausoleum. Lucretia was irked. She didn't want anyone to stop her plans so she quickly chanted and pointed at the siblings. The next thing they knew was a lightning had hit Henry. Lizzie turned to her brother. It was th esame lightning that had hit dad ten years ago.
"Freeze everyhting now! I'm okay I can heal myslef."commanded Henry as Lizzie noded her head. With all that's left of her strenght she raised her arms.
'Please work..please work..'she said to herself.
"What?NO!"uttered Lucretia when everything and everyone except for the siblings froze in time. Lizzie then headed towards the frozen Lucretia to remove the medallion.
"Thank you for the power Odessa."whispered Lizzie to herself as she wore the medallion.
As if on cue, the time freeze stopped then Lucretia was in motion again. Gaining new strength from wearing the medallion Lizzie raised her arms and said to Lucretia.
"Hi!" Then she lifted Lucretia up and threw her in front of Henry. Henry was sitting there as he wastched Lucretia begn thrown in front of him.
"Hello Alice.."he rasped as he tried to steady his breath.
'So after all these years huh?"he said as Lucretia stood up and chanted a spell.
Henry shook his head as he countered Lucretia'
s spell.
Lucretia was suddenly lifted off her feet.
"What the-"she gasped.
"After all these years you thought you're the master of deception, did you?"asked HEnry as he stood up. Henry raised his arms as a portal formed below Lucretia. "That portal! That can't be! You don't have the medallion!''screamed Lucretia.
"Magic can sometimes be all about illusions, deceptions, while you deceived me by beaing Alice, I deceived you ghouls by letting you believe that the medallion was what had sealed Vittorio."said Henry as Lizzie watched in fascination. Then the portal started to swallow Lucretia.
"What do you mean?No!"screamed Lucretia.
'' I just wanteds to taek back the medallion before I would seal you too. NOw, You may join your beloved Vittorio. It's time to end this."said Henry. Lizzie watched as henry sealed Lucretia to a portal.
''If..it wasnt't the medallion what was it?"asked Lizzie.
Henry breathed "Mom and I decided to write in dad's diary and tell the others as the medallion to confuse the ghouls and the rest of the magical community. But the real itme dad used to seal Vittorio was the magician's hat!"said Henry as he winked at his little sister. Lizzie ran to embrace her brother.
"Wow!What a neat trick you pulled.Wished you could have told JAne and I sooner we were so worried!"said Lizzie.
"It's your fault you kept me out of this until recently."laughed Henry as he embraced his sister even tighter then gazed at Lizzie's emerald eyes. They were like his dad's eyes.
'But Lizzie , thank you for having the courage to face those ghouls even when we tried to abandoned that duty years ago."whispered Henry.
"I'm amage plus i wont let dad's effort go to waste."replued Lizzie.
"You guys through there? Can we go home now?called Jane from below. Henry and Lizzie couldn't agree even moer. "They're here!''exclaimed Emma as the 3 siblings returnedto the basement. ''Jane! I'm so sorry!"said Riven as Jane ran to embrace her beloved.
"Lizzie told me everything, thank you Riven..or should I call you Raphael?"asked Jane.
"Riven..i'm still your Riven."stated Riven as the couple laughed. 'I envy those two.."mumbled Henry as Laura smiled.
TOld you i could easily find my dad in downtown. Now who's up for some snacks. We weren't able to eat eversince from camp."said Laura as the rest raised their hands. Lizzie playfully put on the magician's hat as they started to head upstairs. As they were to head upstairs, Henry felt a jolt that shook his body. IT was the after effects from using that sealing spell.
His family members gathered around him and panicked.
"Henry heal yourself!"exclaimed Laura.
"I'm to weak to heal myself!"rasped Henry.
"Emma do you have a healing potion?"inquired Riven.
'Come on HEnry, we lots dad this way, we don't want to lose you too.."sobbed Jane as Emma was scrambling to find a potion.
The Lizzie placed her hands on top of HEnry. White lights suddenly surrounded him.
"Liz.."uttered Henry.
'Come on HEnry..I can't do this alone. I'll help you give a bit of your stregnth back, now let's heal yourself togehter."said Lizzie.
Henry realized Lizzie must have absorbed his powers while they were at the graveyard as well. He noded his head and they started to heal him together. Henry then breathed in relief as he felt strong enought to stand up again. The rest in the room breahted in relief as well. THey rejoiced and started to crowd Henry.
''That was close.."sobbed LAura as the crying Emma agreed.
'Thank you."whispered Henry to Lizzie as Lizzie noded her head.
"I'm just glad everyone's safe."she whispered. *************************************************************
Two days after that fateful incident, Daniella Croft, the sibling's grandma (Richard's mother and a mage herself) arrived in Pleasentview to visit them. She was supposed to be there for Henry's wedding but as they were settling outside the Croft residence she found out other news instead.
"So you're telling me that I came all the way to Pleasentview only to find out that Henry's wedding is cancelled because youo guys found out Alice turned out to be Lucretia,a pyscho ghoul that wanted to free Vittorio and bring havoc to the magical community?Hm..makes sense!"grumbled Daniella. 'Why didn't you just call me to tell me it's been cancelled?"asked Daniella as Lizzie giggled.
"But anyway, You it isn't over yet Liz, you guys still need to re unite the magical community just as our ancestor, Lorynne did."stated Daniella.
'I know, that's why I was hoping you could stay here and guide the 3 of us. You were once an excellent mage gramps, maybe you could help us."suggested Lizzie. "Bah-I'm retired!"grumbled Daniella as she watched the boys play football. Emma and Jane were each rooting for Henry and Riven while Laura remained neutral.
"But then again, nothing exciting has been happening to me lately so all right I'll stay, only to guide you."asid Daniella. Lizzie beamed.
"So what about the cake?THe dinner rehearsal for tonight?"inquired Daniella. "Actually, there will still be a wedding, it'll be Jane's wedding!"exclaimed Lizzie as Jane stood to talk to her gramps. "Riven proposed to me two days ago and I accepted. Instead of Henry, we'll be the ones to walk the aisle. The guests that will come tonight and tomorrow will be so surprused."giggled JAne.
"Jane?!"exclaimed Daniella as she stood to congratulate her granddaughter.
'I guess you didn't want to waste the cake eh?"teased Daniella. ''As a gift, Mr. Malcolm Landgraab IV decided to give us Livingston Lake. I decided to stay here in Pleasentview and live with Riven."confirmed Jane.
Daniella smiled. She was happy but she wasnt as surprised as Lizzie thought she would be. As a mage, Daniella's abilities are to see the future and to fly.
"I'm just glad that you took care of my medallion."she smiled at them. The football toss then stopped, Henry then introduced Daniella to Riven then to Emma.
"THis is the gypsy that we've been telling you about gramps. She'll be staying here with us in PLeasentview. She's going to be using JAne's room."said HEnry.
''I know her grandma, she was a friend of mine."said Daniella as they shook hands. "My Henry you sure love blondes dont you?'teased Daniella as she gazed at Emma's eyes.
"uh..huh?"gasped Emma as both she and Henry blushed. Jane and Lizzie exchanged playful glances. "Come on mom, it's getting hot. Let's get some snakcs then prepare ourselves for the rehearsal dinner."called Laura as she stood up in their porch.
"I'd love too."smiled Daniella as she turned to her raven haired grand daughter.
"Shall we race to the kitchen?"she teased since despited her age she could still fly with ease. "Just Try to catch up!"said Lizzie as she winked at her grandma.She enveloped herself in blue lights then teleported away.
The end
I enjoyed making this story, hope you guys were entertained. This story is a tribute to the much missed Makin magic expansion pack and to all those in TSr who's been reading and supporting me in the story. Thank you so much guys!
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On Apr 30, 2008 wrote:
...simply great, but...I'M SO SAD IT'S FINISHED!!!! Anyway, CORGRATULATIONS
!!!! IT'S THE MOST AMAZING STORY I'VE EVER READ!!!
I really hope you'll come back soon and write more stories!!! We'll miss you!!!
On Apr 30, 2008 mrmrsopey65 wrote:
Its over, i think im gonna cry
another great chapter as always though!
On Apr 30, 2008 artrui wrote:
I don't know how did you make the shots. It's fantastic!
Great work!
On Apr 30, 2008 iluvhorses13 wrote:
Great job again! Kudos to you for sticking with it until the end.
On Apr 30, 2008 wrote:
Aw, can't believe it's ending. But it was a lovely story.
On Apr 30, 2008 plyangel456 wrote:
Beautiful story! I wish that it wasn't the ending though. Anyways, it was a very nice story! -plyangel456-
On Apr 30, 2008 indibabs wrote:
wow what an awesome story. i love your photos very much too. so colorful and i love your sims as well.
keep up the great work!
barbara
On Apr 30, 2008 Nenehunni wrote:
awww - fankoo for a very brilliant set of storys - were gonna miss em loads - you better come back with more or else :P
gd luck wiht all ur exams, hope you pass em wiht flying colours
im gonna miss loooking out for these
On Apr 30, 2008 arc1801 wrote:
On Apr 30, 2008 allens wrote:
wow wow wow!!!Super magik story ^_^
On Apr 30, 2008 arc1801 wrote:
On Apr 30, 2008 Dirtdevill wrote:
Wow, what a beautiful pictures! I really loved the amazing screenies in this story. It's super magical! You did a wonderful job!!!
Thanks for sharing. All the time I'm really missing a Sims2 MakingMagic expansion. Besides SimsSuperstar it was one of my most favorite expansions. I'm stil hoping that EA wil create a new Sims2 MakingMagic before Sims3 wil come up. Anyaway, your story was marvellous and I wish you good luck on the dreaded CPA board exam!!
On Apr 30, 2008 Dirtdevill wrote:
I'm sory, It's me again. I did forget to vote.
Rated a 5*, it's wel deserved!!
On Apr 30, 2008 wrote:
On Apr 30, 2008 Veriline wrote:
Great work!!!
On Apr 30, 2008 Katriona! wrote:
Another great chapter as always though!
On Apr 30, 2008 droople wrote:
WOOOOOOOOOOOW! COOL!!!!!!!!!!! HOW'D YA GET THE ZOMBIES TO COME OUT OF THE GROUND LIKE THAT?!
On Apr 30, 2008 emmalou21 wrote:
That is some really nice stuff you got going there! Im well jealous!
Nice work (Y)
On Apr 30, 2008 Carina94 wrote:
love it
On Apr 30, 2008 qasert wrote:
On Apr 30, 2008 drewsoltesz wrote:
An astounding piece of work, the writing, the shots, really well done!
On Apr 30, 2008 captainlicious wrote:
Cool
Love this story to bits, but will there be a sequel or something like that? 
On Apr 30, 2008 mangooo1 wrote:
Congrats! Awesome and happy ending! I love happy ends
Thanks a lot for sahring this story with us, and write a lot more please! I will read them all in the future as well! 
On Apr 30, 2008 gizmo31 wrote:
An excellent masterpiece from you , i loved the magic pictures , really , really good
On Apr 30, 2008 leifofdel wrote:
Another Awesome installment. I truly enjoyed this story and will look for your work in the future. I agree about the makin magic. Who knows maybe they will make that one for the Sims2. We can keep hoping. You did a great job creating the magical illusions. Just fantastic. Loved it!
On Apr 30, 2008 charliefell wrote:
such a great story
On Apr 30, 2008 qvisn wrote:
Perfect finish, what a clever writer you are.
You will be greatly missed, let us know when you are back. Good luck with the CPA board, go show em girl.
On Apr 30, 2008 Limefwooper wrote:
Good job
On Apr 30, 2008 aaaaaaac wrote:
GOOD JOB!
On Apr 30, 2008 BriannaSun24 wrote:
Great job! I love your wrap at the end. Good luck on your exam. By the way, your story was a great study break for me as I finish my last two finals. Can't wait to graduate with my college degree! Again good luck!
On May 1, 2008 wrote:
great
On May 1, 2008 LillyKP wrote:
Congrats~! You did a fantastic job on each part of this story.
On May 1, 2008 johndenver wrote:
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On May 1, 2008 Elena. wrote:
Ooohh noo, the end? I wasn't ready for the end! Oh well, I guess all good things do come to and end!
I enjoyed every minute of it and I am glad things turned out ok for everyone! 
Fantastic work! 
On May 1, 2008 OpheliaNival wrote:
Great ending! It has been a most enjoyable adventure to read your story, it was a wonderful chapter well worthy of the story! Best of luck with the CPA board exam (not that I have any clue what it is...
) Look forward to seeing more of your stories when you return again. 
Thank you for a job well done!
On May 1, 2008 sweetcharming wrote:
Awesome ending!
I don't know what I could say what isn't already said
You improved so much! I'm waiting for your next story... 
On May 1, 2008 iron mum wrote:
Wonderful ending, sad it's finished though, i'll miss it.
WELL DONE
On May 2, 2008 halfasian751 wrote:
On May 2, 2008 spacemouse wrote:
Very nice, well done!
On May 4, 2008 Elisa G wrote:
I read the first part 2 days ago. And tonight I read all 11 parts that were left! I just simply couldn't let go... Now it's 4.56 am and I definitely need to get some sleep. Excellent story!!! I can hardly wait for the next story. I wish you the best of luck with school and everything! You are truly amazing. Now, take care! /Malin (again as all the former stories: 5.0)
On May 10, 2008 Luvpuppies wrote:
This story is amazing.
On May 18, 2008 civetinja wrote:
Great story ! Thanks for sharing !
On May 30, 2008 lyndsyy wrote:
magical.
On Jul 3, 2008 wickedgoddess_athena711 wrote:
This sotry and we all finally got our request! there will be magic in the next expansion pack! I'm glad EA listened to us.
On Jul 13, 2008 AndrijaPet wrote:
Great story!
On Oct 7, 2008 wwechick38 wrote:
i'm sad i didn't find this story a long time ago, it's soo good
On Oct 29, 2008 Warrayfinson wrote:
Okay everyone stand up now *Everyone in audiounce stands up* Everyone give this talented writier a huge round of applause! *Everyone screams, cheers and claps* You have to the most talented writer I have ever seen on here. I wish I knew about this story earlier, I would have gone extact. I hail you *Bows down and starts worshiping. Then stands uup and pretended that didn't happen* Anyway, awesome beginning anf EPIC ending. You are so awesome!
5.0, which should be 100+, I swear it should.
I really hope to se more soon. You really do ROCK!
Keep Creating!!
On Nov 2, 2008 zucchinideen wrote:
I just read every single chapter you have written of this story and i am in love. You are brilliant!
On Nov 5, 2008 wrote:
your best story yet! good job!
On Nov 7, 2008 wrote:
forgot 2 r8...5.0 4 u!
