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Weee an update! Sorry fo taking so long. Hope you'll like this part as well. By the way, who wants to watch Twilight with me? It's gonna hit theaters in the 26th of November (boo to the delay of the relaese since i'm in asia!) Just wanted to see if Rob can pull off as a hot vampire. Now on to the story!

The story so far:
A group of magical girls found out the dark secrets and curse of a certain mall. Even with their special abilities as half magical creatures would they be able to make it out of the mall alive and stop the serpent's curse?


Weee an update! Sorry fo taking so long. Hope you'll like this part as well. By the way, who wants to watch Twilight with me? It's gonna hit theaters in the 26th of November (boo to the delay of the relaese since i'm in asia!) Just wanted to see if Rob can pull off as a hot vampire. Now on to the story!

The story so far:
A group of magical girls found out the dark secrets and curse of a certain mall. Even with their special abilities as half magical creatures would they be able to make it out of the mall alive and stop the serpent's curse?


 "Is this the shop you've been talking to me about?" asked Lily as they got into the mall again safely.
lily scanned the shop. She wasnt quite familiar with all the stores in their mall. The girls told her that they'll be brewing what they need to save her nephew in here. Could they be right? "Yup..this Chinese herb shop..it has antiques, and lots of herb and spices mostly from the eat. Most here are alternative medicines and a few occult stuff..." said Fei as Lily scanned the shop.
" We buy some chinese herbs we need for common ailments and complicated spell here." added Emily. 'it also has some few western occult stuffs and other alternative medicines and lots of books."said Emily as Lily handed Chloe the scroll as Chloe called out the ingredients. Fei took a large cauldron from behind the counters. As Emily searched for some ingredients. "It seems that we have everything that we need here. Just hand me the ingredients and I'll mix it up for us."said Chloe as pulled out somethign from under the counters.
"While Tia's the spellscaster expert, Chloe's the potionsmistress in our group. Unlike most of us, Tia and Chloe were both raised to know and master their magical background." explained Emily. It wasnt long until they started to brew the ingredients needed from Lily's scroll. The potion was something that could strip Cho the serpent's magical powers.
while brewing, Chloe discovered something from the journals of that shop.
"i knew it! Cho herself has been buying in this shop as well! most of them are certain lotus herbs..if i'm right i bet she uses these to make her workers forget or in a sort of different plane so they'd have no idea what they're doing at night.." she whispered as she thought at the poor workers.
Chloe remembered how the lotus plant affected Odysseus men in the Odyssey, perhaps it did the same to the workers in this mall. Fei then quickly turned to a shelf full of spices.
"The i think we should brew something for us so that we wont be affected by Cho's potion as well. Do you know any potion to counter it?"she asked Chloe.
"I think so.." she whispered "but we need another cauldron for that."
"Found one!'' called out Emily. As Chloe was brewing one potion, Emily started with the other while Fei handed out the ingredients. Lily watched in amazement as she stand o n guard in the door. She felt relieved since she found the right people to save her nephew. As they were busy with their potions, they heard a scream upstairs in the second floor.
"That sounded like Tia!" chorused Fei, Chloe and Emily. The door shut tight as Joanne and Calla exchanged glances. A cold draft breezed by their napes.
'this isnt good.." whispered Joanne as she felt a shadow move behind her. the two slowly turned their backs. To their horror, the once still mannequin had moved.
"Be my friend!" the mannequin declared as an eerie smile formed in her face. "It cant be..they're moving?"asked Tia as the mannequin beside her moved.
"Join us!" the mannequin todl her as she reached out to touch Tia's arms. Tia pulled away but felt the mannequin touch one of her fingers. Her fingers then turned pale,stfif and cold.
Tia screamed. "Nooo get away!'screamed Tia as she pushed the mannequin away.
"Dont touch them..if they do, we'll turn like them!''warned Tia as she referred to her finger that seemd to have turned into plastic.
"Now would be a good time to use your telekinesis Joanne.." called out Tia as Joanne shook her head.
"I cant control my ability..." she stammered. "Allow me."said Calla as she closed her eyes.
As she opened them her blue-green eyes turned into emerald green and she released a strong wave of green energy at the mannequins.
The mannequins' eyes glowed as they were hit by the wave. The next thing the mannequins knew is that they were seeing the most horrid things they'd ever imagine.
They were screaming and panicking. Tia smirked as she knew that Calla had released a wave of illusion on the two mannequins. She knew that as a faerie, Calla could conjure up illusions.Tia quickly whipped up her wand and focused on the door.
"Let's get out of here." she told them as the y left the mannequins who were still under Calla's spell. Emily, Chloe and Fei rushed to the the escalator and hope they're not too late. Lily was trailing along with them.
"Girls what's that near the escalator?"asked Emily. A hairy creature then jumped from the escalator and towards them. he dropped not far from them and growled.
"that's Cho's guard dog..at night it turns into a werewolf and patrols the mall!"called out Lily. The werewolf was about to attack them when Emily blew a her breath into the floor. Frost came out from her breath and froze a portion of the floor. The werewolf stepped and slipped. Fei quickly took her chance and raised her arms. She ignited a fireball then released it at the werewolf.
The werewolf howled its last. Emily turned to the escalator.
"Come on, the others might be in trouble." she said as the dashed at the escalator.
They wasted no time and ran up to the next floor. As Emily headed to where she heard the screams when she bumped into Tia, Calla and Joanne who were rushing out the boutique.
Emily and Tia screamed in unison as they startled each other.
"You guys! You're okay!" exclaimed Emily.
"Nice to see you too, now let's get out of here. Weird things are goin on around here." noted Joanne "Tell me about it."said Chloe as Lily clapped her hands.
"So these are your friends? They're magical as well right?" she asked Emily.
"Who's she?"asked Calla.
" We'll tell you along the way. Now let's all finish this and get out of here." said Emily. "Is everyone accounted for?''asked Joanne as Tia did a head count.
"where's Fei?"asked Tia when Calla called for their attention.
"Girls..maybe they know..." Guards had sprung out all of a sudden. They surrounded
the girls.
"You're coming with us." smirked one of the guards. There were also guards in the escalator and blocked their path.
"Uh oh..."whispered Tia.

****to be continued*****


What will happen to the girls and where's Fei anyway?

Sorry for the delay, hope you liked this one. i've been busy this past week because I've finally got a new job! Weeee!! Who wants ice cream by the way? Just drop by my house since there's plenty left after my birthday last November 20. (i live in an asian archipelago called the philippines)hehehe.

Serpent's curse(3);surprises of the mall

Nov 27, 2008 by wickedgoddess_athena711
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    26 Comment(s) posted so far

    On Nov 27, 2008 wrote:

    THIS STORY WAS AWESOME!!! ^__^ I think that the guy who played 'Caleb' from a movie called 'The Covenant' would make an AWESOME EDWARD CULLEN! he's sooo hot... ^__^ YAY! 5.0 FOR THIS AWESOME STORY AND FOR GIVING ME AN EXCUSE TO THINK ABOUT CALEB! \:D

    On Nov 27, 2008 muggelx1 wrote:

    very good story\:rah\:

    On Nov 27, 2008 luckyoyo wrote:

    Great story where did you get those stairs.\:\)

    On Nov 27, 2008 jennnnnie02 wrote:

    Excellent story!

    On Nov 27, 2008 pixi449 wrote:

    Whoooo! Great story! You are SO lucky to get to go see Twilght! I'm in the UK and the film doesn't come out until the 19th of DECEMBER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!\:mad\:

    Great story!\:P

    On Nov 27, 2008 ProwlerTylo wrote:

    Wonderful story. \:\)

    On Nov 27, 2008 spicylove wrote:

    \:rah\: awsome story keep up the good work\:D

    On Nov 27, 2008 -kalisa- wrote:

    Great story!\:rah\: And I can go to see Twilight tomorrow \:D

    On Nov 27, 2008 stephanie1225 wrote:

    Great job!! Lol I saw twilight when it came out thuresday at midnight and then again yesterday \;\)I don't think you will be disapointed \:D

    On Nov 27, 2008 Thera_M wrote:

    Great part, indeed! I so much like the werewolf, wow!
    Keep the good job!

    On Nov 27, 2008 Hardyfan101 wrote:

    How do you make a werewolf?? I know that you can if you have the pets game, but every time I try to befriends them they hate me!!! Any you story is awesome, and conrats about the new job!!!\:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Nov 28, 2008 wwechick38 wrote:

    the only thing i can say is that i LOVED this! you earned a 5.0 from me \:\)

    On Nov 28, 2008 Livdude wrote:

    Very good\:D 5.0

    On Nov 28, 2008 skyblue7377 wrote:

    great story...love the screenshots

    On Nov 28, 2008 narniana wrote:

    Great part!!!!!!!!!!!\:wub\: \:D

    On Nov 28, 2008 wrote:

    \:D Cool!!

    On Nov 28, 2008 bosnombehar wrote:

    First of all congrats for your new job! \:P That's always good news hehe and then I wanted to say that your story was brilliant, I'm wondering what will happen to this girls, but I thought this guardian turned into a werewolf, why's he normal by now? \:confused\: Maybe that's another one, doesn't matter! \:D The story's awesome, can't wait for the next part. \;\)

    On Nov 29, 2008 mini me3393 wrote:

    Wow, this is a really great story. The pictures are all taken perfectly, and the story is easy to follow. I'm sure the next part will be just as great. And congrats on the new job! \:D

    On Nov 29, 2008 Downunder2006 wrote:

    I am really enjoying your story so far,and your snapshots are great\:D
    I will defiantly be looking forward to reading the next chapter\:wub\: 5.0 rating!Thank you

    On Nov 29, 2008 wrote:

    yay! glad to see your fanbase is growing! \;\) you've just left me hungry for more of the phoenix team! can't w8 to watch twilight with you guys tomorrow...i only wish the rest of the gang would be there... \:\( anywayz... 5.0 for this,like your other stories! hurrah!\:rah\:

    On Nov 29, 2008 wrote:

    oh, and there's a typo on the 3rd slide...i think the word eat should have been east...but the rest are great!keep it up!\:D

    On Nov 30, 2008 Little Cloud wrote:

    Great job \:D!!! Story was very easy to follow, and the pictures are great! So, have you seen Twilight yet. I did, and I think it was on the...well, can't remember the date, but it came out last Thursday in the USA, so I saw it on Friday. It was ok. I don't really like the books, but the movie was alright. Only Jasper looked REALLY ugly! It made me soooo mad \:mad\:!!! Anyway, great job with the story \:rah\:

    On Dec 2, 2008 wickedgoddess_athena711 wrote:

    my favorite in twilight is carlise! he's soo cute in the movie! plus i adore him since he has such self control, kindness, and he created the Cullens coven!anyway thanks for all those who read this chapter. sorry if things has been slow since i've been busy adjusting to a new job. comments like these always inspire me to finish writing a story.\:D

    On Dec 2, 2008 candy820 wrote:

    Awesome as always.\:D \:D

    On Dec 3, 2008 AnnieBoo wrote:

    WONDERFULLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL\:wub\:

    On Dec 13, 2008 sweet&girly wrote:

    awsome!!\:rah\:

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