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Welcome to the final chapter in the tortuous day Alex has endured. Let's see what happens to her this evening, shall we?
~~~~The End~~~~
I thought of adding one more pic of Alex waking from the full nightmare, but it just didn't seem right somehow. The spooky ending was just too apt. If I have confused or disturbed you with this story, I apologize. Dreams are often like that. Dwell upon this, instead:
Once upon a time, I dreamt I was a butterfly
Suddenly I awoke
Now, I do not know whether I was then
a man dreaming I was a butterfly,
or whether I am now a butterfly
dreaming that I am a man
~Chuang-Tzu
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#26 On Dec 17, 2009 firecarrier77 wrote:
kinda scary. still puzzled as to how u did the mirror thing with the other person in the mirror
good job though. really
#27 On Feb 17, 2010 isarpgista wrote:
Fantastic!!! You're a great storyteller!!!
#28 On Mar 7, 2010 artsysimaddict wrote:
Very creepy indeed- but I LOVED it. Write some more horror stories, please?
#29 On Aug 18, 2010 spladoum wrote:
That was serious. GREAT ending.
#30 On Oct 7, 2010 sam.blenafel wrote:
cool
#31 On Oct 7, 2010 sam.blenafel wrote:
cooool
#32 On Oct 7, 2010 sam.blenafel wrote:
thanks
#33 On Dec 8, 2010 fabrizioammollo wrote:
Very creepy!
#34 On Dec 27, 2010 wrote:
great story thank you
#35 On Aug 8, 2012 4everluved wrote:
omg this is one of the best horror stories i have read, the ending was great good job!