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Hi everyone! Here is the 3rd chapter of "The legend of Arash". I hope you all enjoy it! :)
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On Apr 13, 2007 Salt n pepa wrote:
good story
On Apr 13, 2007 eshuff wrote:
wait while I catch my breath...Ok. You've got all of my favorites in one place! Stargate for crying out loud! And, although ST isn't your fave, the episode where they find the place where everyone gets what they always want (or get the illusion of it anyway). I love this! Plus, Captain Phoenix is a hotty! You've got my top vote!
On Apr 13, 2007 md198 wrote:
Cool.I'm really into his story! Part 4 please
On Apr 13, 2007 sunaire wrote:
Cool- did u get the portal off of Stargate SG-1?
On Apr 14, 2007 monmel wrote:
Great chapter
Can`t wait for next part
On Apr 14, 2007 german84 wrote:
Estatica: you already know my comments. Good Luck!!
On Apr 14, 2007 MoriaG wrote:
»(¯`v´¯)--» «:A:»«:+:» «: P: »«:E:»«:R:»«:F:»«:E:»«:C:» «:T:»«:!:» »(¯`v´¯)--» i love this story, great job again. i love your durgas, so cool. great setting great picutures 5/5 again from me
On Apr 14, 2007 Alyosha wrote:
Great! Love the portal and the blue glow, and the greenhouse like building,... i love everything!!!
On Apr 14, 2007 kaisa47 wrote:
Very nice story.
On Apr 14, 2007 wrote:
*takes breath*
wow, that was rawkin'!
i loe your stories!
On Apr 14, 2007 blueclarity25 wrote:
Great installment and visually powerful! Beautiful work as always. I really enjoy your stories! I'm looking forward to the final chapter!
On Apr 15, 2007 Lily Fairy2 wrote:
Wow, you took off the Stargate idea! You got it all right! I can't wait for the next chapter!! Please Please PLEASE hurry up and get the next chapter out! 100/100 from me!
On Apr 15, 2007 Jubilant wrote:
That was a great chapter. I really like Crystal. I don't know why but I do. Will you explain how the Durgas were once human?
On Apr 15, 2007 drewsoltesz wrote:
Yea! Lord Baal! Such a cutie, love his violet eyes! Another great installment! Sets are amazingly done!
On Apr 15, 2007 ragemacsika wrote:
Nice story
On Apr 15, 2007 greeksim wrote:
Great story!...
On Apr 15, 2007 fizz bomb wrote:
This just gets better & better eagerly anticipating part 4
On Apr 15, 2007 Mistress Useless wrote:
Cool story!
On Apr 16, 2007 tephielea wrote:
Ok get the next chapter out please. Wow again!!
On Apr 16, 2007 Azora wrote:
The Gate of Arash reminds me of Stargate, haha. Good sci-fi movie. I really liked all the vegetation surrounding the gate too; it gave it a paradise-esque feel. I look forward to the next chapter!
On Apr 16, 2007 shes_a_libra wrote:
Ok, I'm not usually a sci-fi fan, but your stories have me hooked! Good job!
On Apr 16, 2007 Nyell wrote:
On Apr 17, 2007 rchris_ness wrote:
Great story! Can't wait for the last chapter and I hope you write more.
On Apr 18, 2007 cariadbach wrote:
Amazing screen shots, perfect work as usual
On Apr 20, 2007 natwang wrote:
awesomeeee!!! Really nice things you got there...
On Apr 23, 2007 TheaDidia wrote:
Woohoo! The stargate! You've got a good taste in Sci Fi!
Once again, brilliant!
On Apr 24, 2007 jaundyce61 wrote:
I am so enjoying this series! Absolutely stunning sets!
On Apr 25, 2007 RIDance wrote:
Love the sets and character poses! Amazing!
On Apr 27, 2007 scarlet_white wrote:
Love it, you have a perfect sense of when to end a story and leave it very intriguing, the plot itself is very good to boot, love what you done with the series.
On May 10, 2007 wrote:
Brilliant! Your sets are awesome and you chose very nice outfits for all the characters
On Jun 24, 2007 dianova wrote:
On Jan 12, 2008 OpheliaNival wrote:
Well, to quote Gunnar: "Wow, now that was intense..." and you have me speachless. BTW: in the fifth last picture the text: 'After they left, Lord Theseus sighed.' had me a bit baffeled... Is he really Lord Theseus or was it a typo??! For now I wrote it off as a typo... Great story though, great job!!
On Jan 28, 2008 qvisn wrote:
Awesome story, im really enjoying this.
On Apr 1, 2008 hlspoet wrote:
Cheers on using a Stargate prop like this, it worked out great! Of course, the story is only getting better which I didn't think was possible...
Thanks.
On Jul 17, 2008 Ultra-Violet wrote:
WOW you did a great job in making everything look realistic. 5.0
On Mar 7, 2009 fabrizioammollo wrote:
Great set and amazing plot! It's perfect, just perfect.