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Hi everyone! I hope you enjoy reading "The legend of Arash". For those of you who don't know, English is not my native language, so I apologise for any grammar mistake you might find.
Credits: Custom content can be found in TSR, Modthesims, Parsimonious, Reflexsims and Insimenator.

Hi everyone! I hope you enjoy reading "The legend of Arash". For those of you who don't know, English is not my native language, so I apologise for any grammar mistake you might find.
Credits: Custom content can be found in TSR, Modthesims, Parsimonious, Reflexsims and Insimenator. Our story begins many years ago, when a group of rebels settled on a small moon, far away from the centre of the Universe. Arash was made of rock and ice, so few Sims ever visited it. For this reason, our heroes had decided to take refuge there, hoping to escape the evil clutches of Lord Theseus, the supreme ruler of the galaxy. Lady Gaia, the leader of this group, was concerned about Captain Phoenix and his team, as she had not heard any news from them in several days now. They had gone to explore the mysterious planet of Chloris, and so far, no transmissions had been made. "My heart grows weary." Lady Gaia said. "Something tells me we're not safe anymore."

"Lady Gaia, I too shared your concern these past few days, but I have good news." Medea said happily. "You see, Captain Phoenix has just contacted us and he wishes to speak to you at once!" Medea said smiling.

"Oh, at last!" Lady Gaia said, feeling more relieved. "Put him through, please..." "Captain Phoenix, your silence was becoming unbearable." Lady Gaia said. "How was your mission?" "Lady Gaia, I'm pleased to announce the mission was successful." Captain Phoenix said. "As you predicted, planet of Chloris has the rare metal you were looking for. I brought a few samples so you can carry on with your research. We may now have a chance to defeat Lord Theseus once and for all!" "Well, that is indeed good news!" Lady Gaia said. "I'm hoping you and your team will join us later this evening. Should I ask Medea to make the necessary arrangements or will you be staying in your starship?" "Well, as much as we love this ship, the truth is we haven't got a decent meal in days. I hope it's no trouble for you, milady." "Not at all, Captain Phoenix." Lady Gaia replied "Medea and I will make sure you won't regret your stay. We miss you and your team and we can't wait to have you again with us!" "Did you hear that, team?" Captain Phoenix said excitedly. "We'll be eating real food today!"

"What do you mean real food?" Crystal asked, looking upset. "What's wrong with our cooking?" "You're right, we're being unfair..." Gunnar said, trying to keep a straight face. "I mean, it was only you that incinerated our supplies of food ...twice!"

"Well, I already told you I thought it was toxic waste!" She pouted, feeling a bit hurt. But Gunnar could not hold it any longer and was now roaring with laughter. Meanwhile, back at Arash, Lady Gaia and Medea were quite happy with the news. At last, they were going to be able to carry on with their research! "Do you know what this means, Medea?" Lady Gaia grinned. "Maybe there's a way to defeat Lord Theseus and his Durgas!"

"Oh milady, we've been waiting so long for this!" Medea said "I'll go prepare everything for Captain Phoenix and his team." Their conversation was interrupted by a familiar, but very disturbing sound.

"Wait, did you hear that?" Lady Gaia whispered. "I think someone is in the elevator. Did you give permission to anyone to access this floor?"

"No, I didn't..." Medea was pale now. And then, to their surprise they saw someone stepping out the elevator... Lady Gaia recnogised the intruder at once. It was one of the Durgas, the evil robots constructed by Lord Theseus. They were his soldiers and his ultimate weapons to control the galaxy.

"I am here to inform you that Lord Theseus wishes to see you." The Durga said with a cold, metallic voice as he entered the room. ?I hope you?re reasonable enough not to decline his invitation...? Captain Phoenix and his team arrived later that day. They did not suspect what had happened, as they not detected any signs of violence. "By Solaris, I'm starving..." Aella said rushing ahead of everyone. "I hope Medea prepared food for a whole fleet!"

Gunnar chuckled. "As long as isn't burn-"

"Shut up, Gunnar." Crystal spat, as she too was starving and not in the mood for his banter. When they arrived, they were quite puzzled to see Medea alone. Where was Lady Gaia?

"You had your comunications cut off" Medea said quietly, not willing to face them. "Why?"

"Did you try to contact us?" Crystal asked. "You know we couldn't afford the risk to be intercept-" "She was taken!" She suddenly burst out crying. "The Durgas took Lady Gaia and you didn't respond to my call! I couldn't do anything to save her!" Medea looked desperate now.

"Medea, calm down." Captain Phoenix stepped forward. "You need to tell us everything you can remember. We will rescue her, but we need your help."

The Captain's words seemed to convince her and she started explain what had happened in the past few hours... Meanwhile, Lady Gaia was being held captive in one of Lord Theseus dungeons. She wasn't afraid to die at his hands; but she dreaded the thought that he could find about her plan to destroy the Durgas. "Well, well, well..." Lord Theseus approached Lady Gaia's cell. "I'm so glad you accepted my invitation, milady. I hope you find my dungeon... comfy."
"Cut the sarcasm, Theseus. If you have not killed me yet, you must have something really twisted on your mind." Lady Gaia replied. "...and rest assure, I will not help you in any way. So, if you don't kill me now," She continued, feeling braver. "My friends will eventually rescue me and they will destr-"

"Oh, yes! So you do understand why I invited you here..." Lord Theseus smiled malevolently. "You see, I am hoping they stop by for a visit..." Lord Theseus smiled teasingly. "In fact, my plan would not be quite the same if they didn't."
Lady Gaia was speechless. She was being used as bait... Captain Phoenix and his team were going to fall into a trap!
 - to be continued -

Well this was the first chapter, I hope you enjoyed it! I appreciate constructive criticism, so please comment and help me become a better writer! :)

The legend of Arash

Apr 4, 2007 by estatica
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    70 Comment(s) posted so far

    On Apr 4, 2007 eshuff wrote:

    Wow! Star Trek with the sims! The sets are phenomenal! Can't wait for the next chapter -- 5 stars!\:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Apr 5, 2007 cariadbach wrote:

    \:\) Hey Sim Trek, brilliant, just love the costumes and sets. Wonderfull work.

    On Apr 5, 2007 sassysinks wrote:

    Great Idea for a story and well done as well! Keep up the good work, can't wait to read the next chapter! \:rah\:

    On Apr 5, 2007 Alyosha wrote:

    Do I even have to comment? It is very obvious that you did EXCEPTIONALLY BETTER this time around! hehehehe.. greaat job! Keep it up as always! \:rah\: \:D

    On Apr 5, 2007 blueclarity25 wrote:

    WOW! I'm blown away by the stunning sets and costumes in this story! My jaw fell open at the shot of Arash at night with the space ship flying over. Beautiful work!!\:rah\:

    On Apr 5, 2007 chardonnayonedge wrote:

    Oh Goody....A sci-fi story...Yea!!!!! Very good job! I love the CC you used! \:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Apr 5, 2007 ladyoscar1898 wrote:

    Oh good \:P i am glad of the next story part.

    On Apr 5, 2007 SimsBarbie wrote:

    Oohh I switched to the sci-fi channel! I love everything about this story already. \:D

    On Apr 5, 2007 Masquerade37 wrote:

    That was amazing! I can tell there was loving care in every picture! The details, your actors, the story, everything was carefully thought out and perfected! Your grammar is just fine, trust me, I speak English and I'm a terrible speller. I can't wait to see the rest, so please continue the story soon.

    On Apr 5, 2007 wrote:

    \:rah\: Loved it very different

    On Apr 5, 2007 Nyell wrote:

    I really liked it! It`s interesting! Cool story and pictures! \:D

    On Apr 5, 2007 fizz bomb wrote:

    Wow the costumes, the buildings, the sets, WOW and the story 10 stars I love this one and what a change of pace from your last one well done can't wait for the next installment \:rah\: \:wub\: \:wub\:

    On Apr 5, 2007 dogz wrote:

    very good!\:rah\: i \:wub\: it!

    On Apr 5, 2007 GFitz wrote:

    This is a very interesting story. Your writing was very good!

    On Apr 5, 2007 bingochao1 wrote:

    cool \:D 4.0

    On Apr 5, 2007 Lily Fairy2 wrote:

    Wow! It's not everyday you see something like this! Very good I can't wait to see what happens next!! Please post in my guestbook for when the next part comes out!\:D A+++++++++++!!!!!!!!!!!!! Or 5 *'s!!! \:D \:D \:D \:D \:D \:D \:D \:D \:D \:D \:D \:D!!!

    On Apr 5, 2007 Lady_Wilk wrote:

    I very much enjoyed, keep us up to date!!!

    On Apr 5, 2007 wrote:

    Great chapter, it was different to a lot of the 'sim meets sim and has babies' stories that are usually uploaded. Considering English is not your native language there were few mistakes. Also, the 'space station' type house was very convincing and looked excellent. 4.0!

    On Apr 6, 2007 S.Cains wrote:

    That was AWESOME! I loved everything, Arash oh my god I love it! And the costumes were very good. The characters were all convincing and gorgeous I'll look out for the next part. Thankyou for this take on the sims!

    On Apr 6, 2007 Jubilant wrote:

    From your last story to this story I would have never guessed that english wasn't your first language. I have no complaints or criticisms, your pictures are amazing, so much detail, the beginning development of the characters is good. I look forward to the next chapter! WOW.

    On Apr 6, 2007 Mistress Useless wrote:

    Very original and great costuming!

    On Apr 6, 2007 josh1092 wrote:

    Wow!\:rah\:

    On Apr 6, 2007 rchris_ness wrote:

    Great story, wonderful sets and costumes. Keep up the good work. I can't wait for the next chapter.\:rah\:

    On Apr 6, 2007 Azora wrote:

    Constructive criticism? How can I criticize anything! This is great! You must have taken a lot of time to download and construct your sets for this. The communications screen intrigues me too, how does it work? Do you just copy and paste an image on it, or something? I really like your storyline and the fact that you chose to do Science Fiction - one of my favorite genres. I look forward to the next chapter!

    Oh, and I love how he's doing the evil laugh at the end. It's great.

    On Apr 6, 2007 Azora wrote:

    \:D

    On Apr 6, 2007 JennEWren wrote:

    Absolutely fantastic! I am totally blown away by the quality of the screenshots. As well, the sets and outfits are gorgeous! You obviously spend a lot of time setting this story up and it well worth it. Can't wait for another chapter. Great job!

    On Apr 6, 2007 drewsoltesz wrote:

    I too, would love to know how you did the communication scene, very cool! Well written, love the Sci-Fi aspect, great sets and shots, wonderful, as always!\:wub\: PS: Gunnar is a cutie! \;\)

    On Apr 6, 2007 Devalyn wrote:

    WOW!!!! Fantastic screens!\:rah\:

    On Apr 7, 2007 estatica wrote:

    Thank you all for your wonderful comments! To make the communication scene I used Photoshop to copy paste the images. Both screens are square, so it was really quick and easy!

    p.s. I just uploaded the 2nd chapter, so it should be published soon! \:\)

    On Apr 7, 2007 susie222 wrote:

    very nice story\:rah\:

    On Apr 7, 2007 wrote:

    Rock on Star Wars\:rah\:

    On Apr 7, 2007 sweettoothlady wrote:

    Wow. I that was really good.

    On Apr 8, 2007 md198 wrote:

    Good story and great pictures, well done!\:rah\:

    On Apr 8, 2007 Svenv12 wrote:

    COOL\:rah\:

    On Apr 8, 2007 natwang wrote:

    Great!!! \:rah\:

    On Apr 9, 2007 greeksim wrote:

    Excellent!!!\:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Apr 9, 2007 german84 wrote:

    Now, my dreaded two cents: I like the story. Unlike the Enchanted garden, this one is properly located on a perhaps not-so-distant future. I like the way you mix ancient costumes with futuristic environments; plus, your characters are convincent. Good Luck again!!

    On Apr 10, 2007 Chrisim2 wrote:

    yay! another story \:D love it so far!

    On Apr 10, 2007 shes_a_libra wrote:

    This is the first sims story that caught my attention, so I decided to read. Lets just say... I CAN'T WAIT for the next chapter!!!

    On Apr 10, 2007 monmel wrote:

    Very good story again \:rah\: I love it \:wub\:

    On Apr 10, 2007 MoriaG wrote:

    i agree with eshuff !!The sets are phenomenal!!and the customes are great!! i love the whole conversation via starship and base camp with the screens. that was great!! and i love the futuristic look of everything. great job. 5/5 from me!! for sure

    On Apr 11, 2007 wrote:

    \:D

    On Apr 14, 2007 Simjunkie99 wrote:

    You really have a gift for capturing great screenshots! \:rah\: The story was great. Thanks for sharing with us!

    On Apr 16, 2007 Jasmine206 wrote:

    Very interesting set! Once again, you have stunned me with your creativity. I wish I could give you 1,000/5 \:\)

    On Apr 16, 2007 tephielea wrote:

    \:cool\: \:wub\: \:rah\: \:rah\: Great Story you have done another great job, big fan.

    On Apr 23, 2007 TheaDidia wrote:

    That was excellent! I am sorry I haven't been able to read them sooner. The settings are fantastic, it is very well written and the screenshots are wonderful! Very well done! \:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Apr 23, 2007 Opallise4 wrote:

    Cool story!\:wub\:

    On Apr 25, 2007 RIDance wrote:

    cool- going to read the next!

    On Apr 27, 2007 scarlet_white wrote:

    Yeah the setting is amazing, the characters and the storyline is pretty good too, I am sorry I didn't came here before

    On Apr 29, 2007 baconhead91 wrote:

    I love it all! great job!\:\)

    On Apr 29, 2007 emmy27 wrote:

    \:D really good story i enjoyed it \:rah\:

    On May 10, 2007 wrote:

    Awesome story! 5 stars!

    On Jun 24, 2007 dianova wrote:

    \:D Nice. I like the set and the storyline. This is great

    On Jun 24, 2007 Nina_lorien wrote:

    Wonderful story! The settings are incredible!!!! \:rah\: \:rah\:

    On Oct 5, 2007 agaumer wrote:

    Your spelling and grammar are better than many native English speakers \;\) The sets and characters are wonderfully done, fantastic job combining the screenshots and story seamlessly together.

    On Oct 6, 2007 daedreem wrote:

    Very good...
    I can't find part 2... and I wish you'd broken down where lots vs clothing, etc, came from like you did in the garden story.. but I really enjoyed this. \:\)

    On Nov 28, 2007 qvisn wrote:

    Good start, cant wait for the next one.\:rah\:

    On Dec 26, 2007 wrote:

    Great Job

    On Jan 12, 2008 OpheliaNival wrote:

    Wow, that's all I can say, WOW! \:eek\: And I don't even like Star Wars or Star Trek, but this for some reason when straight up my alley! Great work and the locations, just the right CC and I agree with the others that this is refreshing and different. Great job!

    On Feb 11, 2008 hlspoet wrote:

    Wow! Fantastic! I can't wait to read more.

    On Mar 1, 2008 jerif wrote:

    \:wub\: Love it, can't wait for the continuation

    On Mar 16, 2008 baseiber wrote:

    excellent!\:rah\:

    On May 4, 2008 arc1801 wrote:

    \:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\:

    On May 4, 2008 arc1801 wrote:

    \:wub\: \:wub\:

    On Jun 16, 2008 Pop Arina wrote:

    Great story!I love it!\:rah\:

    On Jul 4, 2008 Elisa G wrote:

    When does the rest of the story come? Can't wait to read the rest... \:rah\: Great story so far!

    On Jul 13, 2008 MotoD wrote:

    soo cool, loved the story\:D

    On Jul 17, 2008 Ultra-Violet wrote:

    I really enjoyed it, and can't wait to read what happens next.\:rah\: \:rah\: \:rah\: A definite 5.0

    On Feb 22, 2009 mad4u19 wrote:

    Good story

    On Mar 7, 2009 fabrizioammollo wrote:

    Both set and costumes are fantastic, you really did an excellent job. It had to require a lot of time to build scenaries and to take and to modify the pictures. You are absolutely talented, thanks for sharing your creativity.

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