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this is the first story i have ever posted, and i'm a little nervous, my spelling isn't so good,not to mention i tried to make it sound kind of southern when you read lol. hope you enjoy though.

this is the first story i have ever posted, and i'm a little nervous, my spelling isn't so good,not to mention i tried to make it sound kind of southern when you read lol. hope you enjoy though. Ah come from a family of 4 annoying brothers, named, Luke, Lucis, Jacob, and Henry and a loving father and mother named David and Shelly. We don't have much,just this land of mah grandfather and each other.
every morning daddy wakes up the boys, gets a cup of coffee and starts the day before the rooster can even let out a crow Daddy and mah two older brothers are farmers, they grow what they can to sell, and for the family to have food on the dinner table while momma takes care of our livestock, collecting the eggs of the hens, milking the cows and feeding the pigs. as for me and mah two younger brothers,we stay out of the way. reading our books and going fishing,
ah have been working alittle bit on mah baking skills though. daddy build me a small kitchen just like mommas we were so happy, it was like our own little slice of heaven...

until... Daddy became ill...and nevah got any better...

Daddy passed away that night.. leaving his 5 children and his wife behind, what made it worse was that momma was with child Henry the oldest silbling knew from that momment on, he had to work TREE TIMES as hard as before, to support this family...and keeping us from falling apart...

Trail of Broken Hearts

Oct 10, 2011 by LaNellyxD
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    #6 On Oct 10, 2011 isarpgista wrote:

    Awesome start! Can't wait to read more! \:\)

    #7 On Oct 11, 2011 Dita_M wrote:

    I am curious about the continuing.

    #8 On Oct 12, 2011 fredbrenny wrote:

    What a lovely start! \:wub\:  I am going to read part two now! Really good for a first story and I love your screens and the details you put in them \:\)

    #9 On Oct 12, 2011 martoele wrote:

    Very good start. Very sad now and I'm anxious to see how it will continue. \:\) Good screenies! \:rah\:

    #10 On Oct 12, 2011 fabrizioammollo wrote:

    Great set up!

    #11 On Oct 15, 2011 Shokky wrote:

    It starts very interesting!

    #12 On Oct 15, 2011 -kalisa- wrote:

    Oh no, poor family \:\( I loved the screenshots!

    #13 On Oct 16, 2011 damnanoir wrote:

    I love the screenie and teh story too!

    #14 On Oct 16, 2011 RaeBow wrote:

    I read it in a southern accent \:\) and it was really good, i loved it!

    #15 On Oct 31, 2011 Etnik13 wrote:

    The fifth screenshot is fantastic! The lightning is great!

     
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