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So, we're back at this sad story about one girl called Caramel who has to confront a new battle.
She fell in love at the first sight with a man who live so far away then she. What will gonna happen?
In this chapter, you will see first discussion between them, first kiss and so on. If until now, the story had been boring, now the action is going to begin.
She fell in love at the first sight with a man who live so far away then she. What will gonna happen?
In this chapter, you will see first discussion between them, first kiss and so on. If until now, the story had been boring, now the action is going to begin. Ok Caramel, stay calm. Do you think that it is time to goofing around? It's just a quy (hot one), wake up ! Ok breathe, breathe. It is all I can do now.
Caramel : " Hey- I said because I couldn't say nothing. Maybe he was thinking that i`m dumb , cuz deaf i couldn`t be because it was clear that i reacted strangely when he said hi to me
Him: " Ok, I begin. What brings you here? "ask him and takes a sip. "Or, are you in vacation ?"
Caramel: "Well, first of all I could name this vacation with obligations.
Him: "Interesting, I've never heard anything like this."
Caramel: "With school." I finished the sentence. He was staying there and smiling . How not to fall in love with him? He has a charming smile. Eventually, I'm not sorry that I came. Otherwise, what I do now ?
Austin: " I'm Austin Sawyer, but you can call me big R ."
Caramel: "Big R ? It is a nickname or what ? " I'm looking at him surprised.
Austin: " From Raver. My friends call me like that. "
Caramel : " Interesting." I saw that he is humorous man, athletic. God, I would love to see him in swimwear. Austin: " And your name is..?"
Caramel: "Caramel Tawny. Nice to meet you ."
Austin: " So.. Caramel. Cam shortly. Your name seem foreign."
Caramel:" Not actually. I'm coming from Sunset Vallet. There I was born but I moved in Bridgeport for to begin a new life."
Austin: " Sunset Valley ! God, I love there. I was staying very much at the beach when I was there in visit. But Bridgeport! It is far away. I didn't go there but I heard about the legendary clubs."
Correct. About awayness, I agreed too.
Austin: "And, how did you come with school here? Are you student ? 're so small?"
Caramel: "I'm not shorty. I'm a teacher. My school has a project and i was need to honor.
Austin: "Oh..ok, shorty."
Caramel: "Don't call me in that way !"
Austin:" Ok, ok. Look Cam, I need to leave.I hope that we'll meet, if you don't get lost."
Caramel:" I don't get lost. I try not to make to you this pleasure." But, Instead of answering to irony, he was smiling so nice like ever.Mm, I would love to get lost and he could find me.Maybe in mountains. Isn't a bad ideea.
In the meantime,although we talked I forgot about Penny and she was no longer here.
I left quickly from the local and I saw her away. I'm beginning to shout her.
Caramel: " Penny ! Hey Penny !"
She turned back and I ran to her.
Penny: "Interesting, now you are remember me!" she said upset.
Caramel:" Look Penny , I'm sorry. Seriosly. I was distracted from atention .I've met.."
Penny:" Austin. Yes. I saw."
Caramel: " Do you know him?" I asked her shocked.
But after that, the question seems silly. Normally, she knows. They stay in same town.
Penny: "I know Austin. It's a 4 celebrity star.
Caramel:" What do you say about he?"
Penny: " It's a normal guy. We worked at same summer job at camping. We are just friend. Sometimes he is quiet but you can't say that the loner is his trait . I don't know him very well because we never talked so much but everytime was correct.
Caramel: "Aha, I understand." Penny:" Why? Do you like him?" she asked curious.
Ok, she blocked me, I can't answer, never!
Caramel: O, no. Barely know him.I remained shocked a little because he looks like a friend." I lied.
Penny:" A, ok. Anyway I don't think he has a girlfriend. I mean, he had a girlfriend named Mandy but I haven't seen them together anymore."
That I could call sensational news.
Caramel:"Ok, can I call you tomorrow to go out to show me the city ?"
Penny: "Yes. Here my number. I think we are going to have fun tomorrow."
Caramel: "Well, I hope."
Ok. Enough for this day. I decided to keep a journal in which I note this days. It will help me for project.
I'll write it on laptop because it's easier.
Oh God, I still think of him. What is going with me ? I can't get him out my mind. Is there a cure for this? Please, I really need this one. NOW. Penny: "Look Caramel, I can't make it. Something is occured. Sorry!"
Caramel: " It's ok. I understand."
Penny:" I hope that you find somebody."
Caramel: " I hope so."
Ok, ok. Calm, don't panic Caramel. It must be a person who can help you.
I see a man. Oh it's my lucky day.
Caramel:"Excuse me! Have you a minute?
I mean a day?! A week ?!
Man:" Sorry, I don't have time for this."
Ok, this is awkward. What is about this people ??
Oh no oh no no no. You can't be serious. He can't be! No! He is home now.It's getting worst now. My unlucky day. Austin:" Miss, have you get lost?" ask Austin sarcastic.
Caramel: " Oh , no! I'm definitely fine, thanks."
Austin:"It was a question."
Caramel:" I know. Just.. my friends couldn't arrive and I don't know any person in this city.
Austin:" You know me."
Caramel:" But I need a person capable to stau with me for a day. Or two. You can't stay."
Austin: "No? Try me."
Caramel:" It's for project. I need information about the city, places, persons, all those stuffs. Austin:" Oh really ? Hmm, it's your lucky day. You see, I'm architect and.."
Caramel: " Wait, are you architect ?You didn't tell me.."
Austin:" Have you asked?"
Caramel: "No, but it's a huge difference."
Austin: "Yeah. What do you need to know?"
Caramel:" Erm, let's see. How about places?"
Austin:"What kind places?"
Caramel:"You choose."
Austin:" I can show you.Let's go." Caramel:"A pool? Are you nuts ?"
Austin:" Oh come on. It's a place, right? What are you waiting you?"
Caramel:" I am waitin you to be serious."
Austin: "Come on, let's have fun.We have one life" he said and he took off his clothes. He remained in swimwear.
Oh, mmm. It's good. I mean, look at his abs.
He's right. If he dare, I'm too. Austin:" That's what I've tought."
Caramel:"Ok, you got me."
We jumped together. It was so terrifying in good way. He swims so fast , I can't keep up. I feel so great being in pool, especially beside him. It's like a dream came true.. I wonder to stay all my life with him. Stop, don't dream Caramel. Live for the moment.
Austin: "I'll tell you what . We had fun here. Now, we're getting serious. So I'll tell you everything you want to know about this city... at a dinner."
Caramel:"It is another joke?" asked but my heart was beating so fast that I could scream 'I'm soooo happy !'
Austin: " Isn't a joke, Cam. I'll pick you up at eight o'clock.
Caramel:"It's ok" I said shocked.
Unbelievable. He's taking me on a date ! Calm, don't panic . You are the most beautiful girl in the world.
Look at me ! I just love the dress. It's simple but I love it.
He's actually asked me for a date. I can't believe. All I ever wanted and now I have it.
Ok, little make up . Gloss cheked, blush checked, liner, all checked.
And i'ts eight o'clock and it means.....
RIIIIING!
He's here. OMG it is happening. Austin:"Caramel! You are looking so beautiful! I dare to say, you're so sexy."
Caramel:" You look handsome too."
Ok you are looking sooo sexy .. hm.. I want you ?!
Austin: "Shall we leave?"
Caramel:" Yes" and he took my hand.
Caramel:" This car it's yours? It is fantastic"
Austin:"Yes, it is mine.It was a surprise for you."
Caramel:" Definitely it was a big surprise and he smiled. Austin:"And that was the story."
Caramel:" I like the city."
I like you.
Caramel:"Sure, it couldn't be compared with Bridgeport, but I can say the atmosphere is great, the history is `bushy`. I met nice guys and the places..i'll visit them next days. At first moment, I thought the town was, let's say not on my type, but now I learnt the lesson about do not judge a book but it's cover."
Austin: "Nice quote, girl!"
Caramel: "Mmm, I like my frogs legs."
Austin: " Frog legs? I didn't see you have frog legs but I can say that you have beautiful legs."
Caramel: " Oh shut up !" Austin: "Caramel, you are a beautiful woman. I love spending time with you. I must say, I really enjoyed this evening with you . You are amazing and your dress is fantastic. I can say that I am happy because I've met you."
Caramel:" Austin, I think exactly the same. I..." but I couldn't finish my monologue because he kissed me. Oh, he's a great kisser. Hm,.. I wold love to have this moment for ever.
Austin:"Do you want to take a ride at my home?"
Caramel:" Oh.. if you want.."
I want! We have arrived at his house. Not joking, a big house. A mansion. He has a own pool, a garden and a big garage.
Austin:"Come, I want to show you something."
We went upstairs and we entered in a room with many things like an easle, like drafting table, like a sculpting station..
Caramel:"What are these?" I showed at some metals.
Austin: "There are my babies. I'm not joking. These are woohooium ingots. I don't want lose them ever."
Caramel:" Oh kinky name. And what is it ?"
Austin:" My favorite egg cut gem named fluorite. All, this ingots and this gem , I've found them so hard.You see, I'm sculptor and painter too. Austin:"Caramel, I want to sculpt you in ice."
Caramel:"You what ? Could you do that ? "
Austin:"Yes I can if you let me."
Caramel:"It will be so weird for me. Me in ICE."
Austin:"Let me try. I really want this."
Caramel:"I don't know if it is a good ideea."
Austin:"If I don't sculpt you like you want, I'll break it, I swear."
Caramel:"Oh.. ok.."
Austin:"Now, stay there please" and he started.
I must say. I'm impressed. If he wanted this, he succeded.I see myself in ice. I'ts incredible. Look at me!
Austin:"Ok. I finished. Do you like it ?"
Caramel:"Wow, it's so weird but I like it so much."
Austin:"I would keep it for ever."
Caramel:"Thank you so much Austin. You did a great surprise for me."
Austin:" Do you want to go upstairs?"
Caramel:" Level three?"
Austin:"Yes." I want this forever. After few days...
Caramel:" I'm leaving Austin!" I said this with tears in the eyes.
He got surprised. He doesn't know what he could say.I'm so sorry..
Austin:"When?"
Caramel:"Tomorrow."
I would want to burst into tears but something does not let me.I mean, I would like to complain but not in front of him. God, horrific moment. Caramel:" But I would love to have a distance relationship with you."
Austin:" WHAT ? What did you say ? Caramel, don't say this, please. We enjoyed all this perfect moments. We couldn't have a distance relationship. I wouldn't work.
Caramel:"Why are you so sure?"
Austin:"Because I tried once. I finished 'wrinkled', both of us."
Caramel:"We could try!"
Austin:"No Cam, listen me! Promise this! Let's have a rule.We won't fall in love each other and we could meet again togheter but without obligations."
Caremel:"Austin, I would like rather to have a relationship.. Move in Bridgeport."
Austin:"No, how could I move ? Please don't aggravate the things harder than it is.I like you but that's all.You can do that."
Caramel:" No, I can't!"
Austin:"It is for our benefit.We won't suffer."
if he would know that I already suffer. He's words are hurting me. What can I do ? I love him, I'm sure. You broke me, you broke my heart, you broke everything. You turned my world upside down and inside out. I hate you for not letting me have you.But, I'll return.
To be continued..
Again, sorry for mistaked and Hope you like it. I remember you that the story is real and that person felt the same like Caramel. And she'll return too.
Thanks for reading. It will be chapter three.
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#1 On Jan 21, 2011 fredbrenny wrote:
I really like your screenies. The story is a little hard to follow, but that might be the constant dialogue. I'll check out chapter 3 when it comes out!