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Autumn with You - 8
Published May 7, 2013


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I got you,
from now on i will never ever let you go
you're all mine
no one will be able
to take you
away from me

I got you,
from now on i will never ever let you go
you're all mine
no one will be able
to take you
away from me
this was my first beach camp. i don't believe i was surrounded by a group of men.
not even a single girls they invited , its just me .

Danny : so ho....
*danny just want to say something. but rick directly scream out of nowhere*

Rick : HEY GUYS! i bought somebody's today!
Len face's was directly change into a panic ,when he heard rick bring somebody's there, i don't know who's that was. i think he's one of this group .

*len & danny turned around, and walks towards ken*
Len : what the heck are you doing in here ??

Danny : take it easy len.

Rick : now len has changed into a bad guy .
Ken : what?? why are you so mad at me ?? am i doing something wrong?

Len : nn no .. how did you get here?

Ken : rick calls me yesterday, i heard there's beach camp going on, we do this every year right? first time you didn't even invited me . i have not mistaken .. rick said that it's just not US .. there's a girl coming around?
i was just stood up from my chair .. but suddenly i have an eye contact with that strange guy .

Ken : well well well , i think we're not just us . we had a new member .. i see a girl huh?

Len : .. problem with that ?

i don't know what those guys talks about. its better i took a sit around the fireplace.
while i was looking at the fire, suddenly that strange guy sit beside me .
that guy was looking at me for a long time , what in his mind ? why does he look at me for that long? i have a strange feeling about this.
anyway, i just roast some marshmallows.
Len : Sally!

Sally : ouch. i just swallowed that large marshmallow .

Len : don't sit beside that guy .

Sally : what's wrong? he didn't do to me
anything bad to me

Len : just listen to me.

Ken : what len ? are you jealous ?

Len : mind your own business
Danny : alright! so we are all gather here at once .

Rick : i cant wait for tomorrow! gonna have swim on the ocean!

Len : ...

Ken : why just kept silent len ? is there someone bother you here?
Ken : forget about it . by the way , who invited you here cute girl ?

Sally : it was len , please don't add cute stuff.

Ken : sweet! so len invited you! this is getting interesting ..


Sally : what do you mean?
Ken : you know what ? this is the first time len bring a girl to this place .

Sally : i don't know about that..

Danny : umm...

Ken : so you're someone special huh?
Sally : i don't really understand what do you mean by that ..

Rick : len ?? .....

Len : .......

Danny : Ahhumm!
Danny : Sal , can you give us a moment to talk ? i promise it will not take to long.

Sally : don't worry, please ..

i stood up from my chair*

Ken : Wait!

Sally : what now?
Ken : I must have to introduce myself to you . my name is Ken Daniel . so you are ?

Rick : ........
Sally : I'm Sally Marttle

Len & danny : .......

this is getting strange, why they look at me and ken like that, especially len
Sally : i guess i need to go, have your time.

i was running , i think i'm a burden for them , so i was hiding

Danny : don't get to far sal! its dangerous at this hour!
Danny : so rick .. i think you have something to tell to us, the way your face look like , it's really important

Len : what?
Rick : its okay if i told ken about what we plan to do to sally at the first time ? how about that len ? you mind ?

Len : ... i guess there's nothing to kept now , just say to him.

Ken : hahaha so you did plan something

Len : it's not now , it's past already
Rick : you still remember right danny ? when i was talking at your house ?

Danny : yeah

Rick : that day, i was jogging with len . but i stopped and buy ice cream, while i'm still enjoying my ice cream len called me . bla bla bla stalker ? bla bla bla . so now i continue jog to len place, then that time i saw sally . i thought she was a stalker or playgirl.
later , i was making a plan with len

Ken : what is this plan about?

Rick : that time i don't know her who she was . so i thought len to sleep with her , and playing with her. and after that we gave her to you ken .

Ken : crazy man.. i don't believe you plan something sin?

Len : you're more sinner than us
Danny : ha ah . i was so curious that night too . you came into my house and talks about this girl named sally . you told me not to say anything about this girl to ken? i don't really understand you dude . so what are you really plan to do ?

Rick : he told you that? oohh , so that's why that night len called me, i thought he's insane, i guess that's not true.

Danny : so what are you really planning now len ? it makes me confuse .. really
Len : im not planning anything stupid now . it was that time, i don't even know who she was so i just agree with rick's plan . but i think i'm really wrong , i invite her to somewhere but she reject me, that time too she said something that really touched my heart, i realize something, from now on i'm not doing that to her, she not a kind of girls, so i changed my mind i even talked to mom to show me the way. Danny : ouch.. You fall in love man

Rick : aw aw aw aw! he had a feelings now guys !

Len : you're same like danny , thought me that i don't have any feelings
Ken : so you had found your true love now? Len : i guess you guys ready my mind huh? i can say you guys are correct . i have fall for her , first time a girl ever did that to me , she moves my heart . she's kind, friendly , funny , good , not flirtatious, sure does love nature too.

Rick : wow! congrats to you len! i support you! just date with her ..

Danny : i guess i agree with rick , start your move or else somebody's will take her.

Ken : .... a true lover huh ?

Len : what ken ? jealous?
Rick : stop it! don't you realize that sally is missing ? i thought she will be back ?

Len : oh mam .. she's lost! We have to split up

Danny : argh! i thought her not to go any further .

Ken : i think i'm the one who will find her first

Len : don't do anything to her , if there's something bad happen . i'll kill you
Sally???!! where are you?? sally?? here kitty kitty kitty ..
come to me...
Saaaaaa...!!
llllyyyyy....!!
Salll!!! answer me sall ...

salll???
Len : what are you doing here sally ? they thought you're lost .. now they're searcing for you .. come on..
get up sall..

Sally : i heard..

Len : what??
i heard everything .. i heard everything you guys are talking about .. so you did plan something bad to me .. Len : it was that day ..
but now i get to know you, every night i look into the sky , i just can't count those stars .
i ask somebody there to show me the way , she did show me . now i realize how much i love you , i don't know how to express those words and my feelings how much i loved you but you can count those stars if you wanted, that's how much my feelings for you, those stars always there , and always be there its show how much i loved you , everytime, anywhere , everywhere , until now i still loved you.
come on.. its time to take a rest.

Sally : Kiss me ...

Len : .... what did you say just now ?

Sally : i told you to kiss me

len suddenly sit by my side , he grab my arm , and turned me, his gentle kiss touch my lips.
Len : i love you so much sally..

He grabbed my hand , its like he will never let me go , even at this moment. first time i kissed a guy like this , his gentle kiss, and warm lips , express his true feelings to me. i'm glad i have found my true lover. it was not a legend, it was real
Sally : i love you more len ..

This time ..
Len : i love you most sally ..

at this moment..
I tried to count those stars ..
there is tiny and there is big , there's also close there is also far but most of all i can't count all of them.
i can tell what he really meant by that but i can't express his feelings.
he really are accepting me for who i am , he loves me forever , no one will change my position . there's only me in his heart, he always try to restrain his passion . the thing is
There are variety of stars in the sky and various kinds of love he had to say, its why he could not express his feelings , because there's too many to tell .
i don't know how to tell to , i think i felt the same .
Len : hey .. your lips are so warm, is it always been like that? Sally : no .. its sensitive . when my lips touch a guy that really i loved to , it's keep in warm, that's say that its good its should stay like that, be with you will keep ourself warm and tight . that our bond will never break . Len : i can feel your heart pounding so fast .

Sally : i could hear you heart pounding so fast .

Len : so now you're my girl right?

Sally : yes you are ..

Len : WOOOO!!!!

Sally : shhh... you will wake them..

Len : ah sorry ... i'm so happy ..

Sally : i'm more than happy

So Today my Love Begins
see you guys on the next chapter !
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#1twihard233VIPMay 7, 2013

I just ADORE this series!\:rah\: You're writing flows and the pictures are beautiful- especially in this chapter! Their kiss was just beautiful, under the stars!\:wub\: Cannot wait for more Len and Sally moments! They are such a perfect couple! \:wub\:

#2enid30May 8, 2013

i really LOVE this story!! \:D \:wub\:

#3KyaryaMay 8, 2013

Such an AMAZING part, The words are beautiful the scenery are awesome! i hope to see more from this !! i ship Sally and Len!! \:wub\:

#4demonangel26May 8, 2013

Great chapter as always! Alas the kiss weve all been waiting for is finally here. Cant wait for the next!!

#5elio10May 8, 2013

LOVED IT! I was waiting for them to kiss already! Well keep writing!\:\)

#6tadahpoohMay 8, 2013

best story ever

#7ErcMay 9, 2013

I couldn't expect that you made them a very astounding KISSES! Such a Wonderful Starry Night, with a Beautiful words! they're such a romantic couple!!! \:wub\: Looking for more romantic chapters \:rah\: \:wub\:

#8RoxxaneMay 27, 2013

Love is Basking in the Air!!! \:D \:wub\:

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