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After Life Ch1
Published Apr 9, 2013


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My name is Francis Carvel.

My name is Francis Carvel. 26 Years of age, Citizen of Starlight Shores for several years now. I work as cashier at a near by grocery store. Average looks, average life. And the only thing extra ordinary about me is her.

"Hey! You're up?" She asks.

"Yeah, just got up, welcome home hun." I greeted back.
Alison Berry, the reason for my existence.

"So I bought a few stuff for the house, I hope you like pancakes." she says.

"Anything you make is good love." I reply.
Someday, one day... I'll make this woman my wife. And when that day comes.. I'll be the happiest in After Life. It was poker night when we heard the news. "Hey guys, listen to this."

He turned up the radio.
"Citizens of Starlight Shore, we interrupt this program with breaking news.

We are at war and...---"

We couldnt even bare listening to the news, this only meant one thing and one thing alone.
When I told Ally the news, her beautiful face turned down, she gave me a hug without saying a word. The following week, we were summoned to report in camp.

"Write to me everyday." Ally requests.
"I will write to you every second of the day if I could, I would miss you so..." I say.
Not a second went by without you on my mind. "Dear Ally,

I got a tattoo today. I wanted your name inside a heart, but the Tattoo guy messed it up so bad that i punched him, I got punished. "
Every day was hell.

"Get up Carvel, now is not the time to sit down, UP!" the officer said.

I had pretty rough falls.
"Dear Ally,

Why are you not saying anything? It's been months now since I've went to train, why are you not writing back? I miss you, I love you even more than I had, if that's even possible.

Please respond.

We've been pushed to our limits to the point of breaking.

"Are you crying now?! No one cries in the ARMY boy! Wipe that away!!"
But everyday, I got stronger...

With only you keeping me going, the thought of you, the memory of you, the way you smell, your eyes, your lips, the way your hair fell down your face, the sound of your laugh.

Only you kept me going...
I got hit pretty hard for one to many times to remember...

But it hurt like nothing compared to the news I received that day.

"Sir, a letter for Officer France Carvel Sir."

"What is it?" I asked.

"It's about your wife."
Thanks for all the featured CC and comments, glad I was able to update this hehe, this is the first time I've ever written anything like this, so yeah.

Thanks for reading!


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#3CherryBerrySimApr 10, 2013

Love this! \:D \:wub\:

#4elio10Apr 10, 2013

Awesome story! Can't wait for the next chapter

#5tuhfaApr 10, 2013

Awesome story when will chapter 2 come out??\:rah\:\:wub\:

#6applecakesApr 10, 2013

I like the story it's nice to see something different, other then teens with crushes and who will they chose. I was a little confused about her being his wife I take it they were married before he was sent away?

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#8luckyme1Apr 11, 2013

What happened to his wife? O.o Great cliff hanger but really I NEED to know!!! \:D

#9kazukazu28Apr 11, 2013

great chapter!!
what happened to his wife?
hope you submit next chapter soon.

#10AlessaFayeApr 11, 2013

Wow. Amazing chapter! I can't wait to read what's coming up next! \:rah\:

#11Ayeez(Spam) Apr 12, 2013

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#12fruitopiaVIPApr 14, 2013

I am really liking this

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