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The Little Mermaid (I)
Published Jun 16, 2012

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Thank you for watching this. Rate this story and comment please ;) Deep under the sea, colourful fishes glide among strange plants which wave gently to and fro in the crystal-clear water. In the deepest part which no human has ever visited, the mer-people live. The mer-king had four beautiful daughters but the youngest mermaid was the loveliest of all.
The mermaid loved hearing about the world above the sea which her grandmother described to her.

"When you are fifteen," her grandmother said, "you may swim to the top of the ocean and see these wonderful things for yourself."

How impatiently she waited for her fifteenth birthday. At last the clay arrived. She combed her long golden hair, she polished the scales on her tail, then waving to her sisters she put her arms together and glided, up, up through the waves. When she lifted her head above the water, she saw a big sailing ship with a large anchor and chain holding it firmly in place. There were many sailors but the finest of all was a prince. He was celebrating his birthday. She had never seen anyone like him before. She could not keep her eyes away from him. Suddenly the sky darkened and the ship started to roll. Thunder rolled around and the ship was tossed up and then plunged clown into the stormy seas.Then the ship rolled right over and started to sink. At first the mermaid felt happy for now the prince would sink to her father's palace. "But humans can't live under the sea," she remembered. "I must save his life somehow." And she swam through the wreckage until she spied the prince, just as he was slipping beneath the waves.

His eyes were closed for he had no strength left. He was drowning. Quickly, the mermaid seized his head and held it above water. Then she rested on a huge wave and let it carry her and the prince safely away from the wrecked ship. Now she could see dry land ahead and, still clutching the prince, she swam into a pretty bay with calm clear water.
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#1keishafellerJun 17, 2012

Hello1 I wish I could read your story but there are no words next to the screenshots!

#2wasabichiJun 18, 2012

great screenshots!

#3narroJun 18, 2012

Hey, I've written the story next the Screenshots... Thank you for seeing my screenshots \;\)

#4KatherineLady09Jun 19, 2012

I liked it, the pictures were so pretty!

#5narroJun 19, 2012

Thank you very much!!! It's great to read this!!! I'm uploading the rest of the images to complete the story. Take a look please \;\)

#6are-himeJun 19, 2012

Hey, Silvia! Great Story! I am writing Cinderella in Man Version XD...

Nice!

#7narroJun 19, 2012

XD Thanks for watching my story. I will watch your Cinderella in man version when you publish it XD \;\)

#8xMirandaJun 20, 2012

Woaaah! How did you do this?! \:o. Awesome screenshots! And how did you make toshe mermaids?? xoxo

#9narroJun 20, 2012

Thank you!!! If you want the Mermaid outfit it's here:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hnVLk0LPnxQ
You've to read the video's description and you'll find a link with the download \;\)

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