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1ayotola1Dec 29, 2007

I think you should add more characters probrably like a popular girl who likes Derek too. Or maybe add some drama like Marlie secretly like Derek too so there would be a twist and a whole lot more drama! $\:D$

seelindarunDec 27, 2007

I don't want to tell you how to write your story, but as I was reading, I thought of some questions. Maybe in answering them for yourself, you'll think of how the rest of the story should go? It seems like Marlie is the most clued in. She knows that Fawn likes Derek, and probably has picked up that Mac likes Fawn. So, what is she going to do next? Does she leave a hint for Mac, or Fawn, or do something else? Will Fawn catch a clue on her own, that Mac likes her from the things he says, or does? If she does, what will she do about it? I feel bad for Mac, 'cause he still seems sort of clueless after his own sister tells him that Fawn has a crush on Derek. Does he keep putting his foot in his mouth? How will he try to get over Fawn? What about Derek? Who does he really like? Is it Fawn, or some other out of the many girls who like him? I could go on and on, but you could tell a pretty good story I bet, from answering just two or three of those questions. Good luck, and I can't wait to see what you come up with! $\:rah\:$

kissme87Dec 27, 2007

i think u should make something friendly , add more friends of best friends ?

EnthroxDec 26, 2007

Well, I dunno, add more characters and add more friendship between those dudes.

kitfu11Dec 26, 2007

Hi there! Thanks for reading and commenting on my story! $\:D$ Merry Christmas!!!! $\:rah\:$

BBKZDec 25, 2007

Hello! Thank you so much for taking time and leaving so sweet comment on my fashion set. This is very important to me and I really appreciate any feedback $\:D$ I also want to wish you a very Merry Christmas $\:D$ Happy Holidays! Barbara

cariadbachDec 24, 2007

$\:\)$ Thanks for taking a look at my Happy Birthday screen shot. I'm glad that you liked it $\:D$

MMs_Fan_01Dec 22, 2007

Thanks so much for commenting on the Iris legacy chapter one! Happy holidays!

IvahecDec 22, 2007

Hi, thanks for the comment in my screenshot $\:\)$ HAPPY CHRISTMAS

frogger1617Dec 18, 2007

$\:D$ Thank you for your comments, Hoppy Holidays $\:wub\:$ Frogger

pretty_babyDec 17, 2007

Hello hello!! thanks again for leaving me nice comments on my creations $\:\)$ merry christmas and happy simming!! $\:rah\:$

skystars5Dec 16, 2007

Thank you for the lovely comments! $\:wub\:$

janellevqDec 16, 2007

Thanks for commenting on the second chapter of 'The Way I Feel'. Glad you liked it. $\:\)$

sweetcharmingDec 16, 2007

Hi! $\:\)$ Thanks for taking time to read and comment on the 3. part of "NOIR"! I really appreciate your positiv comment and I'm glad that you liked it $\:\)$ Have a great day and Merry Christmas!

Foxychik925Dec 9, 2007

thanx for the comment on my story What a Life part 4 $\:\)$ the next part will be out next week so keep you eyes pealed! $\:rah\:$ $\:D$

janellevqDec 3, 2007

Thanks for commenting on "The Way I Feel". I'm happy to see that some people actually take the time to stop and comment. It certainly is an encouragment. $\:D$