She loves you...She loves you not: Pt5
Published Jul 16, 2009

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This is part 5, thanks for all the support and comments. I appreciate it!

This is part 5, thanks for all the support and comments. I appreciate it! Katie and Alex had had their first every big argument and you could have cut the tension with a knife. They'd practically avoided one another as much as possible. Katie was fuming and Alex was desperate to win her back over. He sat down next to her the next day and said,

"You can't not speak to me forever..."

"I can," Katie replied stubbornly.

" am sorry," Alex pleaded.

"I am still mad at you," Katie said through gritted teeth.
"You're cute when mad," Alex smiled, catching Katie offguard in her angry mode. He pulled himself close to her and wrapped an arm around her.

"Alex!" Katie snapped but couldn't help but smile.

"I was thinking...let's get married," Alex said.

"We already are!" Katie laughed.

"No let's married soon, as in next few weeks, we can have it here, I know some amazing caterers, it will be perfect and private, what you think?" Alex babbled.

"It'd be perfect," Katie replied.
"I wanna make you officially mine as soon as possible!" Alex told her as he cuddled her. He really did mean it. He was worried she might see sense and leave him for Jacob. Deep down he knew she loved him a lot, but he was too selfish to give her up. "I am going to break a million girls' hearts you know, by marrying you..." Katie smiled as she kissed him. Meanwhile Jenna was spending more and more time at Jake's. She used the time to catch up on reading- "How to look after a baby." The upcoming baby frightened and excited her at the same time. She also realised how much Jake loved Katie. He moped all the time and wore his kimono all the time. She tried to cheer him up and loved him as a friend too much to not try and help him. So she made her choice, she was going to be a better person. Starting now. "It will be ok Jake," she told him tenderly. She was going to make it all ok. Katie didn't just miss Jake, she missed Spot too. She came to visit later that day and was playing with Spot.

"Man I've missed you my Spotty," she smiled and Spot barked happily.
"Hey Spot, cut it out, you'll wake up the..." Jacob started to tell Spot off but stopped when he realised it was Katie.

"Oh sorry Jake, I didn't mean..." Katie apologised.

"Don't worry, it's good to see you, Spot has missed you," Jake said cuddling her.

"I'm getting married in 3 weeks Jake, will you come?" Katie blurted out nervously.

"Of course I will," Jake replied, "You're my best friend."

"Good...look I better go, Alex will be...never mind, bye Jake, bye Spot," Katie hurried her goodbyes and disappeared into the darkness.
Alex spent the next two weeks or so planning everything, the wedding themes, the cake, even the dress. Of course he consulted Katie but she often felt he controlled her a bit too much. But he was paying for it after all and she didn't want another fight.
Katie didn't even argue when he was displeased with her new hairstyle. She went back to her normal colour and he wasn't pleased. He said he preferred her a red head. Katie was too upset to be angry, all she wanted was to please him. Jake was over quite a lot and it tore Katie into two. He spent most of the time with Jenna or around the house.

"Nice hair," he told her when she passed him, "Wow." Katie smiled, Jake liked her hair.
A week before the wedding, Katie got around to trying out her new dress. The one Alex liked. It was a nice enough dress but Katie preferred the secret one she'd bought. She was having second thoughts, cold feet...but surely this was normal? She was shocked when Jenna knocked at her room and came in.

"Can we talk?" Jenna asked.

"Sure," Katie said confused and questioning Jenna's motives.
"Look I know you dislike me and I don't deserve your time but there's something I need to say," Jenna begged, from the heart.

"Ok," Katie said gesturing for her to carry on.

"Jake and I weren't having an affair, I came onto him and he rejected me so I forced myself on him. I wanted to get back at Alex and you, but he wouldn't have anything of," Jenna started, "Look he's a great guy he loves you too much to cheat."
Katie walked to the mirror and looked at her shocked reflection saying,

"Why tell me this?"

"I am trying to make up for what I did, I am just telling you to consider Jake before you marry Alex," Jenna told her, "I aren't doing this so I can get Alex, I am past that because he adores you. I want to be a better person."
"I am glad you told me," Katie admitted, "I appreciate it. You're a good person."

"What's up with your dress?" Jenna asked, "Is that the one Alex picked?"

"Yeh," Katie said sadly.

"I prefer the other," Jenna admitted, "I saw you bring it in before, it's gorgeous."
Katie changed for Jenna and they both agreed the dress was better.

"You'll be perfect," Jenna smiled and Katie blushed, "Think about it though..."

"I will," Katie replied.

"Good," Jenna said, "Jake's a great guy."

"I know," Katie said sadly.
"I hope things are better for you," Katie told Jenna.

"Me too," Jenna smiled weakly, "I deserve all this though. You don't."

Then Katie hugged Jenna, she wanted to be her friend and she believed Jenna felt the same. It was a moment she never expected and a moment that would challenge everything. The day of the wedding Katie glanced at the wedding scene, still unsure of what she should do. When she was ready, she made her decision and she ran to the man she wanted to spend forever with.

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#1candy820Jul 17, 2009

Great part.\:D  5.0 here

#2omik79Jul 17, 2009

\:wub\:  OMG!  I sooo hope she picks Jake!  I dont like bossy MEN :P  I LOVE IT tho!  Wheres the next one hmm???  \:wub\:

#3MangioJul 17, 2009

Why did you stop? I hope its Jake....\:wub\: Jenna's so nice now. \:\) I wonder what her baby will be like...

#4smiley00girlJul 17, 2009

Another great part! Can't wait for more! \:D

#5kanzenJul 17, 2009

I place my lunch money on Jake

#6JillebethVIPJul 17, 2009

Great part.  Hope it is Jake.  More please.

#7tykijonesJul 17, 2009

I want jake! Jenna is soooooooooooo Nice now. I can't wait to see the baby.

#8urm0mJul 17, 2009

I am sorta beginning to write the next part, felt a cliffhanger would make it more interesting \:D

#9Sweetie224playerJul 18, 2009

5.0, I love the end\:wub\:

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