Cinderella 2009 - written by a girl
Published Aug 19, 2009

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Cinderella 2009
Written by: Oriana S.M. (8 years old)

Cinderella 2009
Written by: Oriana S.M. (8 years old)
Once upon a time, there was a girl called Cinderella. She lives with her step-mother and two step-sisters. She sleeps by the chimney, because of this, she is called Cinderella.
She is in charge of all home labor.
She cookes, sew, cleans .... during the time her "family" is relaxing.
Some day, they are invited to the Royal Ball.
Step-sisters begin selecting her dresses and arranging her make-up for that important night.
Meanwhile, Cinderella is sewing her dress.
Maybe it is not the most wonderful dress, but at least Cinderella has a nice dress for the Royal Ball.
Her step-sisters, jealous of Cinderella´s beauty, get angry and destroy her unique dress. Then, Cinderella could not go to the Ball. Cinderella runs out with tears in her eyes.
But she has never imagine that she would meet her Fairy Godmother, who consoles her and ...
... with magic, gives to Cinderella the most beautiful dress she has never dreamed.
"Now you can go to the Royal Ball, but you must come back before midnight", Godmother says.
All unmarried ladies of the Kingdom come to the Ball. One by one, they salute Prince Edward.
But, he only has eyes for an unknown and misterious lady he could saw between people.
As soon as music begins, Prince meets her and they dance.
Cinderella looks divine. Her step-sisters do not recognize her.
They dance, dance, talk, and talk... and love starts growing between them.
At midnight, Cinderella must go running without mentioning her name to Prince Edward.
She looses one of her shoes.
Fortunately, Prince finds it.: "This shoe will allow me to find this beautyful and misterious lady", Prince says.
He visit each home of the Kingdom, but the shoe does not fit to any lady´s foot.
Finally, he reaches Cinderella home.
As previously happened, the shoe does not fit to Step-sisters´foot... But obviously, it does fit to Cinderella.
Prince Edward proposes marriage to Cinderella.
The young lovers get married inmediately and ...
... they live Happy for ever.

*** THE END ***

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#8mojoAug 20, 2009

Yoy were right Sandra, you are going to have a writer in your house, i read this to my 5 year old daughter and she loved it too, praise your daughter for me, thanks \:rah\:

#9urm0mAug 21, 2009

How cute!!!

#10SandraRAug 21, 2009


#11ParisleafAug 21, 2009

Great Story! \:\)

#12grasyaSep 1, 2009


#13SimfanaticSep 24, 2009

did u name the prince edward because of twilight?\:confused\:

#14this_is_meNov 13, 2009

REALLY cute screenshots. I wish I could take them that well.

#15twin2162May 19, 2010

Very Cute! Love Cinderella's dress!! \:\)

#16kolapantsAug 12, 2010


#17pierreandreply4Oct 16, 2010

Wow great story thank you very much for sharing such a great story and great pictures as well

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