WITCHES (Last Chapter)
Published Aug 21, 2009

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A brief story written for an 8-year-old girl



A brief story written for an 8-year-old girl

Months later, there was a family party.
Obviously, Oriana and Nadia were. Although they doubted that Lucy would go
Relatives had invited her by obligation, and they were not in accordance with the black magic she was practicing.
During the party, Nadia met Samuel, a friend from the University.
They were so changed!
They could not stop talking and remembering old stories...
They danced. Nadia was always “flashed” by Samuel, and it seems he was the same...
That night, full moon would not happen without something arise between them...
Samuel could not contain... He hugged Nadia and kissed her, as he came wishing it from the time of University student...

No magic or scroll in this, only the magic of the full moon, the Midsummer night's, and love that always was between them
Oriana, was also influenced by the full moon...Yes,. she found her ex- husband, Ivo.
Life had taken them different roads by labour issues, etc, but love ever had left join them.
Life has many surprises...
It seems that night would be special for all.
And Yes, it was special.

Lucy came to the party, when nobody already expected..
Maybe ... changed?
Lucy left no observe all in family party. Not missing nobody, until his father was present.

- But why I feel so bad?- Lucy asked herself - I've moved away from all... for so long that I cannot see MOM and Nadia...
She hesitated a few moments, until finally she drew forces and approached her mother.
She was fearful of a rejection by her.
She saied “Hello” to her mother, and asked forgiveness by the terrible discussion which had had a few months ago, and by have been gone so suddenly.
-MOM, I am so sorry...
- You daughter!, no. talk more... I know that your heart is good, if not you not be here beside me, talking to me. - And they embraced with such force as if they wanted to recover the lost months.
It was truth, the Sun had already appeared, but the full moon left them all his magic that night.
Hugs also joined the sisters.
They would leave the differences in hand, because the heart and the affection joined them.

In life all we must learn to forgive and accept.
Lucy returned to the mother house.
She began to be aware that the affection of her family was more important than all the nonsense Salvadora had told. If her heart was good and healthy, why fill it of evil? . She threw the book Salvadora had given her, and she understood that the path of light was the healthier for all, even for her.

And life surprised her again. She knew Brad, a friend of Nadia.
She was impressed by his green eyes and his charisma.
Brad could not fail to notice the beauty of Lucy and light radiated by her eyes. They engaged in a warm relationship, met and fell in love.
- He is so sweet - Lucy thought – He makes me feel so well. Already I am not alone.
The relationship between Nadia and Samuel increasingly was better.
They shared many moments outdoor, walks, excursions.
Every day that passed their love was more large.

By surprise, Samuel, during one of the walks, took one Nadia´s hands, and kissed it with delicacy...
... Then he was kneeling and, romantically, he proposed marriage to Nadia. He could not live without her!
- You do accept, beautiful? – he wonder.
Nadia jumped and fell into Samuel´s arms and while she embraced, said:- Yessssss, of course than YES!!! I love you with all my soul! Nadia was happy.

And Lucy it was not less... She, together with Brad, spent the best moments that months ago she might have imagined.
He comforted her, and picked the best of her.
Who knows... Maybe Brad´s love remove the rebelliousness Lucy has against the world, and it made she enjoy every good thing that life gives us.

Life brings bad and good experiences, but the good times are the most important.
Do not let them pass. Enjoy each of them, really.

** THE END **

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#1fredbrennyAug 21, 2009

End good All good! What a lovely story Oriana! I hope you will do another one!!!! Thanks Sandra, I enjoyed that!\:D

#2damnanoirAug 22, 2009

Great story! i've to admit it again: ur daughter is really good as writer.. maybe this will be her profession in future life XD

#3urm0mAug 22, 2009

Great ending and story \:D

#4spitzmagicAug 22, 2009

Bravo *standing up clapping* Happy for all. Very happy for Lucy....\:wub\:  Sunch a wonderful story. I enjoyed very much.\:wub\:

#5MangioAug 22, 2009

great ending. i loved it \:wub\: great moral to the story.

#6MJxoAug 22, 2009

Lovely ending and screenshots\:wub\: *Cheers* woo\:rah\: Well done

#7madkitty13Aug 25, 2009

I loved that this story has a moral. I've not seen many stories with a moral so good!

#8ThabillNov 2, 2009

I don't like the bad english..

#9SandraRNov 3, 2009

THABILL : Related to your comment on my story, I am sorry if you don´t like my english. It is not my mother language and I try to my best in translations. Sometimes my ideas or spanish phrases are very dificult to translate, but I try. If you don´t like my way, then you don´t need to read my stories. Have a nice day! Sandra

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