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Before the Storm- Part 4
Published Oct 6, 2009


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Hi guys here is part 4. Sorry I haven't got around to thank you all personally for your support. I am just uber busy but know I appreciate it! There is a poll to follow this part on my profile page...

Hi guys here is part 4. Sorry I haven't got around to thank you all personally for your support. I am just uber busy but know I appreciate it! There is a poll to follow this part on my profile page... There was no doubt about it, I was miserable. I had lost a great guy and I had had no choice. Elliott came first and Jackson was his father, so of course he was the best one to be with? Wasn't he? Jackson came for dinner every night and we spent time together. I tried to keep a smile on my face at all times but it all felt forced. I stayed strong for Elliott and pretended I was happy. When I was alone I cracked. I had a moment to myself and cried. Jackson was still amazingly affectionate and it took my mind off things. The morning after Jackson dropped me a proposal. He asked if Elliott and I wanted to move to Simville with him. It was a big decision and I said I would think about it. I pondered the move in my mind- what did I have keeping me here? Then the word Jasper crossed my brain. But he hated me... Jasper arrived after Jackson left. He saw him leave and was devastated. Despite his pride being in shreds he cared more about me than his own reputation. I saw him standing on the drive, trying to pick up the courage to knock on my door. He looked so perfect and vulnerable. I still worried he was coming to shout at me again. I picked up the strength to greet him.

"Hello," I smiled.

"Hi G," Jasper smiled back and my heart broke in two.

"What are you doing here?" I asked confused.
"I couldn't stay away, I am sorry," Jasper replied sadly.

"I am glad," I replied sadly too, "I need you around."
I melted into his arms and my knees felt weak.

"Gee," Jasper replied, "I can't do this."

"Sorry," I said pulling away.

"I will see you around," Jasper said sadly.
He walked away then came back and hugged me again before taking a sad, long look and disappearing. I bottled my chance to tell him about Jackson's proposal. I called Jackson later that night and asked him to babysit Elliott for the night. I had to see if I could have one more chance. I arrived at his house and Jasper was putting out the trash.

"G?" he asked confused.

"I need to talk to you," I said nervously.

"What's wrong?" Jasper asked worried, "Did he...did he hurt you?"
"No," I said sadly.

"Then what is it?" Jasper pressed.

"Jackson asked me to move in with him, to Simville," I admitted.

"And? Jasper said snappily, "Did you come for my approval?"

"No of course not..." I replied.

"Then what? To brag? Rub my nose in it?" Jasper said angrily.
"Damn it G!" Jasper snapped, "Just go with him."

"I wanted to see if we had a chance," I asked

"You must be joking!" Jasper sneered.

"I'm here wanting to know if it's really over," I said sadly.

"It is, for one of us," Jasper replied annoyed.
Then was the answer I needed.

"I'm sorry, I will leave you alone," I sobbed and ran away. I knew what I was going to do.
That day I went to see Jackson to tell him my reply. What I saw I didn't expect to see. Jackson's maid and another woman saw us kissing and confronted Jackson, accusing him of having an affair. I was confused but livid at the same time. Jackson had played me. I sobbed and knew what I had to do.

"It's over," I told him, "You aren't ready for a relationship. You never were!"

"No please, don't be silly," Jackson replied, "It's you I love." He started to cry.
"No Jackson, the only person you love is yourself," I replied, "One day you will realise how great I am."
"But thank you though," I told him, "Our relationship gave me the best gift ever, Elliott." I smiled leaving him crying. It hurt but I couldn't be hurt by him anymore. The next few days I hardly left the house and moped a lot. I ate junk food and felt sorry for myself. Even Bailey failed to cheer me up. Daytime TV only depressed me even more. Then I got a phone call that would change everything. I was extremely happy for the first time in ages. Elliott and I were so happy and got ready to pack. When the taxi arrived we packed our things and ran to the shuttle. Little did I know Elliott had a plan up his sleeve....

End of part 4 :D

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#2MangioOct 7, 2009

what's Elliot going to do? \:wub\: im glad she got rid of Jackson. cant wait to read more

#3fredbrennyOct 7, 2009

Now...It was not very nice of her to ask Jackson to babysit while she ran of to see if she had another chance with Jason. I hope she will start to love herself first and get some more self confidence here before she starts anything with any other guy... *sigh*  ... great part! Jackson is a player ...good riddance!

#4Golden97Oct 7, 2009

Brill Chapter!! I cant wait to see what Elliot does!!  \:D

#5elziOct 7, 2009

Wow! Sweet! I wonder where they're going! \:D

#6omik79Oct 8, 2009

hahah nice! \;\) wonder what he has up his sleeve! \:D

#7Daxxi11Oct 8, 2009

 

#8Daxxi11Oct 8, 2009

WOW this is a really good story. \:\) i wonder what trick Elliot has up his sleeve \;\)

#9TUTULAOct 9, 2009

It's a very good  and interesting chapter\:wub\: I can't wait to see what Elliot does\:rah\:

#10spicyloveOct 10, 2009

\:rah\:nice chp

#11xOxJESSICAxOxOct 15, 2009

Your stories are really good! can't wait to see what happens next!\:\) \:rah\:

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