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The Life of a Tom-boy Part 1 (One half)
Published Feb 16, 2010


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nkotb16

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NOTE* sorry that i didn't put this credit on here before. J_Girl87 did inspire me to write about myself...hint her story one of the boys. I was at one point writing a different story and saw hers while looking at others and yes you can say its about the same....if you need more info check my page =]

This is my first story for this site. I have been working on this story on thesims3.com and decided to move it here as well. I would greatly apperciate it if you would give me feedback on my stories to helpe me know i'm doing good. =]

I will be posting two more parts if it goes well. For this story i have to make 2 parts for part 1. I was done and it erased everything so i'll post both parts. So i hope none of the pics and story is messed up. if it is i am sooo sorry and ill get busy working on it if it is!

anyway i hope you will enjoy reading them. I've worked hard on them so they would sound and look good, so hopefully they'll be good to you. ;)

NOTE* sorry that i didn't put this credit on here before. J_Girl87 did inspire me to write about myself...hint her story one of the boys. I was at one point writing a different story and saw hers while looking at others and yes you can say its about the same....if you need more info check my page =]

This is my first story for this site. I have been working on this story on thesims3.com and decided to move it here as well. I would greatly apperciate it if you would give me feedback on my stories to helpe me know i'm doing good. =]

I will be posting two more parts if it goes well. For this story i have to make 2 parts for part 1. I was done and it erased everything so i'll post both parts. So i hope none of the pics and story is messed up. if it is i am sooo sorry and ill get busy working on it if it is!

anyway i hope you will enjoy reading them. I've worked hard on them so they would sound and look good, so hopefully they'll be good to you. ;)
Samantha was the tom-boy at school and always had been. All the guys thought her more as a friend than a girlfriend.

She felt as though she didn't belong in this group of people, and she didn't like this feeling. She had a lot of friends, but only one best friend.
His name was Mark. He just moved here from Riverview. They are both sophomores this year and hope their friendship will stay strong through out the years. They are always hanging out and having fun. They loved to throw the football to each other. It was both of their favorite sport. They were with each other everyday and she loved that they were. She has never had a best friend before and was glad it was Mark that was. At school they would be together and everyone thought they were dating. She also loved that idea, but it also felt a little weird. Being best friends and people are thinking you are dating each other, just wasn't her choice of feeling. Senior year had come and they were still real closer. Closer than ever if you should say. The only thing was that Mark had become real close with the most popular girl in town....Mickey.

They started dating not to long after they met each other. She hated to see them together everyday. It just hurt her more than he knew. They would still hang out, but not so much because of Mickey.
She called Mark over so they could talk. She was so tired of being the tom-boy that no one would date. It has been this way for as long as she could remember.

She wanted to have a boyfriend not just a friend that was a guy.
She decided to make herself more girly like Mickey, hoping he would notice her. She had the biggest crush on him. She has never told him this because she thought he would turn her down.

It felt a little overwhelming at times, but she knew she had to do it. She just had to beat Mickey at her own game.
The only thing she knew to do was put make up on and new clothes. Maybe looking better than Mickey would help her win him over. She has liked him since the first time they saw each other, but never actually knew it for a fact till now. She was ready to step up and be a woman, the woman that every guy wanted. She was sure she would be. The doorbell rang and she ran downstairs to get the door. Only to find Mark and Mickey at the door. She was shocked and knew for sure she didn't ask him to bring her with him......

(switching to first person) "I hope it was okay that I brought Mickey with me." He said looking at me. Oh how much I hated her right now. I was furious with him now cause he brought her.

"Yeah, sure thats ok.....I guess." I answered him. That was a total lie. Of course i mind her being here. Oh I was so mad!

NOTE*( I have to post the other half of this part, it messed up and erased the whole part so i'm having to split it up...so don't miss the second part of part 1! =])
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#1MangioFeb 16, 2010

great start \:rah\: off to read the next one \:\) im getting very interested

#2martoeleFeb 16, 2010

Before commenting, I would like to read the second first part of the story.... \:\)

#3charrayFeb 16, 2010

Very good start \:rah\:

#4fredbrennyFeb 19, 2010

GREAT!!!\:rah\:

#5GlamuritaMar 11, 2010

great start

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