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The Life of a Tom-boy part 3
Published Feb 18, 2010


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the names....omg! i didn't realize that how stupid am i..i am truley sorry...but i hope you will enjoy this and after i publish this i will be writing my 2 other stories "The Curse" and "The diary of______" not sure about the name just yet. i'll have a summary for them both.....

oh and i hope no one elses is like this oooo if there is let me kno so ill think of somethine else..if you have any suggestions for a name for the diary of____i'd love to look at them..i have some of my own, but totally not sure.

I can put them up somewhere and you can tell me which ones you like better....let me know which you want to do(hint i like unique names).....( I could however made this a bit different it.) TY for reading and understanding =]

the names....omg! i didn't realize that how stupid am i..i am truley sorry...but i hope you will enjoy this and after i publish this i will be writing my 2 other stories "The Curse" and "The diary of______" not sure about the name just yet. i'll have a summary for them both.....

oh and i hope no one elses is like this oooo if there is let me kno so ill think of somethine else..if you have any suggestions for a name for the diary of____i'd love to look at them..i have some of my own, but totally not sure.

I can put them up somewhere and you can tell me which ones you like better....let me know which you want to do(hint i like unique names).....( I could however made this a bit different it.) TY for reading and understanding =]
I had asked her who she was. When she turned around and took her jacket off and sunglasses i was shocked to see who this was.

It was Mickey Mark's ex. I guess she was jealous and mad that i had Mark and she didn't.

Note*( I know i should of maybe made it someone else and made it a better story, but i didnt think to much into the process, but i hope you still enjoy it=])
She looked at me hateful. She told me that i stole her boyfriend and that i was going to pay. She wasn't the mean type. Atleast i didn't think so. She wouldn't do anything to hurt me, she wasn't that low of a person.

I didn't like the fact that she was doing this. It didn't seem like her. She wouldn't do this. Would she? I was confused about this whole thing.
(Mark's point of view) It had been two hours and no call from sam. I was getting worried. I was worried somehting had happened. like she got hurt or got lost or something.

They only thing i knew to do was to call her and if she didn't answer i'd go looking for her.
I grabbed my phone out and dialed her number. It rang and rang and rang and there was no answer to the other end. I hung up and tryed again.

But again there was no answer. I had decided that i was going to go around town and look for her.
I got in my car and started to drive down to town. I was determined to find someone that knew where she was. I was going crazy thinking something had happened to her.

I finally found some people that i could talk to to find information about this girl that has been sneaking around our house.
I found Fred Johnson standing outside infront of the book store. I pulled over and got out to talk to him about this situation.

I was hoping he knew something about this girl. He was the town's number one gossiper. If he didn't know anything then i had to find things out for myself.

"Fred!" I yelled to him. He stood up and smiled. "Hey Mark, hows it going, you gonna get you some new books for that big head of yours?" He asked me smiling.

"Not now Fred, I am needing you to give me information about someone." I told him in a serious tone.

"Sure, sure what do you need." I looked at him for a moment. I was hoping he knew something. I wasn't a good tracker at looking for someone. "I need to know about a woman that has been sneaking around town, but mostly at our house." I told him.
He looked on both sides of him. "Ok here it is, some have said that this woman has been looking for someone that she really dislikes and has for some time now, and she is wanting revenge!"

When he said this he moved his hands around all funky. I looked at him weird. I didn't know what he was doing but he looked funny.

That was the only thing he had for me, but he just kept going on and on about other gossip around town.I had to shut him up so i could go home and look for more information.

"Fred i don't need to know about the whole town, i only needed this informatin." I told him putting my hand on his shoulder. "Thanks" I walked off leaving him there to find someone else to talk to.
Fred was like a super spy of some sort. He always had something about somebody. He was one crazy man at times.

I headed back home to look up some information about what he said. I didn't find anything but a picture of the back of her head. I printed it off and decided that i needed to go out again for one last time and look.
I got to the theatre and waited a minute to see who was going to show up. All of a sudden this woman walks up and stops.

She looked familiar, so i took the picture out and looked at it. It was her, that woman. She turned around and looked at me.
After she did that she took off running to her car. I go in mine and followed her to her place. I didn't think she noticed because we stopped at a weird looking shack far from town.

This place seemed abandoned. it looked real old like on one had used it in so many years. I got out of my car and followed her to the shack.
I stopped when i got there. I could hear talking in the little room. I was trying to hear what they were saying but i couldn't hear.

I moved a bit closer to the door. I was a little scared to find out what i found in this shack, but i was also curious to what i would find awaiting for me. I was hoping this was the spot where i'd find Sam.
I grabbed ahold of the handle and twisted it a little. I pushed the door open and saw Sam, but i also saw that woman.

She was shocked to see me. She took off running. I didn't go after her because i could only think about Sam being okay. Sam smiled and ran up to me.
She hugged me really tight and told me thank you for coming for her.
She told me that it was Mickey who had done this. That she was jealous of her for me being with Sam.

I asked her if she was hurt or if she tried to hurt her. Sam told me she never intended to do anything but try to keep her in here so she could win me back. I didn't like that to much, but i was glad she was okay.

After i knew she was okay we headed home to get a long night s reat, but i had a question that i wanted to ask her first.
We had gotten home and i took her upstairs. I had told her how much i had fallen for her and how i wanted to be with her for the rest of my life.

That she was the one for me. She always had been and always will be.
I got down on one knee and reached in my back pocket. I could see that she was a little curious to know what was behind my back.

I pulled out a little black box and opened it up. There was a big shiny diamond rock and would fit perfectly on her fingure.
I think we were both shocked. For me i was shocked because she had said yes and her, i was guessing she was shocked because i wanted to marry her.

She was the one for me and i intended to keep it that way.....
I also wrote this fast so sorry if it's confusing or the words are spelled wrong, look for my 2 new stories.

My first half i went back and added something, but i know it has to be approved again lol i didn't know that till i did it. so i am sorry about that i messed up .
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#1MangioFeb 19, 2010

great ending \:wub\: glad Mickey didnt hurt Sam \:\) what a surprise Mark really intends on keeping her, nice end to the story ^^

#2Golden97Feb 19, 2010

Fantastic End \:rah\: Im glad Mark found Sam in the end \:\) I will be looking out for those new stories!!

#3martoeleFeb 19, 2010

Well, we may expect that they will be happy ever after. They know each other so well. Congratulations!\:\)

#4fredbrennyFeb 20, 2010

 

#5fredbrennyFeb 20, 2010

Loved screen 15!  Don't write your stories too fast! Stick with one at a time, I can tell you are already thinking about a next story... GREAT...but one at a time...not too fast! Done a good job! It's a bit aqward that Mark didn't recognize his ex though... I did enjoy this story!

#6methura1Feb 20, 2010

nice \:\) and i read the finally read the first part of ur story. great job \:rah\:

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