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Only in Your Dreams
Published Feb 17, 2010


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Yay my first story!! Whooo! Haha well I hope you guys like my story! Give me some feedback and rate! And if you guys have any tips for me that would be great, what being this my first story...read on and enjoy(no cc by me) =]

Yay my first story!! Whooo! Haha well I hope you guys like my story! Give me some feedback and rate! And if you guys have any tips for me that would be great, what being this my first story...read on and enjoy(no cc by me) =] He was just lying there in the sand with the cold harsh waves laping up against his skin. I couldn't tell whether he was just sleeping or something else... I had no intention of finding out. I had to try to wake up from this dream, but couldn't pull myself out of this one, it would have taken everything and I wasn't up to a day's full of exhaustion. So I went along for the ride even as disturbing as it was. Then in a flash he was awake and standing up and looking at me. "Help me!" he yelled. Though his lips did not move when I heard his urgent voice. I tryed to talk back, but as always it was point less, he couldn't hear me. He kept staring off to the wide blue ocean, it was dark out, but I could still see the two scars on his left cheek, right below his blue eyes that matched the color of the sea. It made him see more human, vulnerable almost. I woke up with a jolt and the sound of the waves crashing outside of my window, just like my dream, cold sweat briming my forehead. It was noon and my summer was winding down to one week left before I start my senior year at a new high school, where I had no friends what so ever. It will be ok, I kept telling myself...yeah right. I went to the bathroom, but instead of taking my planned shower I just threw my hair back into a couple of sloppy pigtails leaving my PJ's on. I gave myself a good hard look in the mirror, "Well this is as good as its gunna get". What ever, like I really cared what people thought of me anyways. I went back to my bedroom and stared out the window at the never ending sea, thinking maybe I'll get a little tan before I start school next week, or at least a little less pale. I went down the stairs and out the side door to where I find a boy working on my soon to be car, I was a bit confused. Then I saw his face. I had hundreds of thoughts running through my head at once, who knows what my face even looked like, but who cares! It was him! Touching my car, well heap of junk actually, BUT WHO CARES!! (sorry about the skills purple tube thing, any tips on getting rid of it?) I quickly ran upstairs to find my grandmother. The more reasonable person would have called the police, but this is me we're talking about after all. "Grams?!" I found her in her room working on her potter's wheel.

"Yes sweet cheeks? Whats wrong?" She didn't seem as alarmed as I was.

"Umm there is a boy in the driveway doing...stuff to my car! Do you know him?!" I was frantic, needing answers.
"Ohh, yes yes yes, that's Martha's grandson, he's living with her now, poor thing his parents are going through a nasty divorce, didn't want to be with either of them. You remember Martha right, from poker night?"

"Yeah I do, she was the one with the blue hair right?" My Grams was a a total hippe, still living in the sixties and seventies, along with her all of friends whom I met over the summer. Very strange, but I loved her for it, she was always upbeat and doing something strange with her cooky friends.

"Yes that was her, except it's hot pink now, crazy woman, just can't age like the rest of us. Which reminds me, me and the girls are going to that hot new club downtown this Friday. It's girls night and we get in for free! And I plan on partying till dawn!"

Yeah too bad everyone can't age like my Grams. I smile at the thought. "Grams whos the boy?"

"Ahh yes, his name slips my mind, but I told him if he can fix your car then you can give him a ride to school, that you said you were going to fix at the begining of the summer when you first got here. And since school starts up soon and what with you having no intention on fixing it yourself, I got someone else to do it. Plus I am not driving you to school at seven in the morning."

"WHAT?! I don't even know the kid! How can you-"

"Oh hush now your driving him, end of dicusion. Now if you don't want a stranger in your car every morning I suggest you go introduce yourself."
I went back out to the driveway to see a the boy again, hopefully I'll remain some what composed this time. "Um hi. I'm really sorry about before you just looked liked someone I knew." I was laughing at my own nervousness(i think thats a word??)."I'm Anna by the way...and I live here too..." there was that weird awkward silence that I hate. He started to laugh and I laughed along just so that I wouldn't look stupid. He flashed an amazing smile that made my legs go numb and my knees buckle. I could see the same two scars on his cheek and those two beautiful blue eyes, my dream flashed inside my head and I was smacked back into reality. He stopped laughing "Yeah I know, I meet your grandmother a week ago and she offered me a job to work on your car, how long have you've been here?"

"Since the begining of the summer, I'm going to be attending the public high school nearby for my senior year."


"Cool, I've been here for about a year, this is going to be my senior year too, don't worry the kids are not as bad as you think, plus you'll have me with you so nobody will pick on you." The weak feeling in my legs are back.

"Well at least I'll have one friend when I get there." I looked down at my shoes, too nervous to look at him because my face was probably as red as a chile pepper.

"Hey so I have to get going, and your car is almost done, I can finish it tomorrow if you'd like?"

The words came out before I could actually think about what I was doing. "Why don't you come on Friday, I can help you that is if I can help, somehow. Our grandmothers are going out anyway and I could cook some frozen pizza or boil some water for us." Oh my god, what did I just do??

"Sounds great, I love boiled water, but not too much salt." He laughs his sweet laugh and all I can do is stare, no doubt drool dripping down my chin. "So I'll see you then. Bye!"
"Wait I didn't even get your name!" I yelled after him as he walked away.

"Cade, Cade Walker." he shouted back.

I smiled and started thinking about Friday as he dissapeared down the street. The dream about him still worried me but that was the last thing I was thinking about. I looked down and my smile turned into complete embarassment, I was still wearing my pajamas...great.



Soooo I hoped you guys liked my story, leave a comment! and any tips are well apperciated...sorry for spelling mistakes and keep siming! =]
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#1martoeleFeb 18, 2010

Nice start. Keep on going... \:D

#2IllandryaFeb 18, 2010

This is shaping up to be a good little story! I will be keeping an eye out for the next part \:\)

#3Golden97Feb 18, 2010

Great start \:\) I cant wait for the next part \:D

#4MangioFeb 19, 2010

interesting \:wub\: one minute Cade's in her dream, the next fixing a car. thats a scary thing. cant wait to read more though \:\)

#5ninageorgeeFeb 19, 2010

i can't wait to read more! omg it rocks!

#6nataliestonardFeb 19, 2010

Good start to your first story! It gets easier from here on...Very unusual this story, looking forward to chapter 2

#7xxheartlessxx12Feb 20, 2010

Great start! I'm really eager to see how it all turns out! Cant wait for the next part!

#8JBRR4Feb 20, 2010

Wow! your good Damn I hate u-why!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!-oh-well can u help me

#9marzikatFeb 21, 2010

Fantastic start! 5 out of 5!\:D

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