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Published Feb 28, 2010


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This is my new story and it is still in progress, but i just wanted to give you a taste of it. Also if you want to, you can tell me if you liked it or not. You opinions always matter =D

I have been real busy wuth my homework and school, so i'll probably have it up pretty soon. I'll work more on it during the weekends. I'll keep you updated on how it's coming so check back =D enjoy!

This is my new story and it is still in progress, but i just wanted to give you a taste of it. Also if you want to, you can tell me if you liked it or not. You opinions always matter =D

I have been real busy wuth my homework and school, so i'll probably have it up pretty soon. I'll work more on it during the weekends. I'll keep you updated on how it's coming so check back =D enjoy!
I'm Arius Sylers and this is my story....

My past all started when i was just three years old. My mom had died and i was left with my father. He was never home and i was always left with a nanny that he had hired.

He would be gone all hours of the night. I never once got to see my dad atleast for an hour. He was always busy with work and never had time for me.
My Nanny was Mrs. Polly. She was a great nanny to me through out the years she was with us. I thought of her as my mother figure in my life.

She was always there for me when my dad or anyone else wasn't. She would be by my side when i was scared if the unde rbed monsters and the closet monsters.

I was always so terrified by those things, and i never had my dad there to confort me.
This is my dad Frank Sylers. He has always wanted to be the CEO of the company he has been working for for years.

Being the CEO was his dream. He had good money coming in, but was never enough to actually take care of me.

He would blow his money else where, while i was here with Nanny Polly. As i was growing up, i would never want to talk to him when he was home. My life was rough the whole ride through.

Now that I am a teenager i have nothing to do with him at all. He would try buying me expensive things, but that never did change the way i felt.

He hasn't been there for me and that would never happen.
While father was out i was having parties and hanging out with friends that were older than me.

Nanny Polly would be out for some late night errands when i had these parties. Nothing bad ever happened, but i knew i wasn't suppose to have them.

And that's why i did have them. I never liked obeying the rules i had.
Tonight i had decided to just chill and go for a walk in the park near the house. I was tired of being stuck in the house doing nothing.

Yes i had a computer, tv, and games, but i was tired of those too. I had gotten to the park and saw a woman standing there staring at me. She was glowing with beauty.

I had the urge to go up and talk to her. As i was walking up to her she was smiling. I was a little weirded out but it didn't bother me much.
I had came up to her and stopped. She kept smiling at me. She started to speak , but stopped.

She started again and said, " So you are the one he has chosen." I was puzzled at what she mean't by that. "Excuse me." I said as I looked at her.

"You are the one that is getting this curse......I mean gift." She was smiling at me.
She started speaking in a different language that I didn't understand. I felt this shock go through my body as though i was being shocked by something.

After a minute of small pain, she stopped speaking and the pain had stopped as well. I didn't feel any different then i had before.

She spoke again. This time in actual english. "My young one, you have a gift that will change who you are for the good." She had said to me. "The Love you must seek, the gift you may break."

She stopped and smiled one last time and started to walk away.
I looked at her as she started to walk away. I was confused at what she meant by what she had said. Was this a dream that i was having or was I going crazy?

I ran towards her. "Wait!" I yelled to her. She stopped and turned around. "What did you mean by all of that?" I asked her. She looked at me. "You must find this out for yourself young one." She told me.

"Listen to what i had said and you will figure it out." I stood there frozen in place. I still didn't know what she was talking about. All i knew was that i was going crazy if this wasn't a dream........(End of preview)
Okay so this is just a preview of part 1. I am still working on it and i think i have part 1 finished so far...I am working hard on getting everything put together. So just leave a comment and share on what you think about it so far. Just let me know. I will be posting part one maybe soon which ill just submit the rest of it and put it as preview 2 last part. so look forward to that! Ty for reading and i hope you enjoyed it =D

nkotb16
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#2muggelx1Mar 1, 2010

wonderful..\:\)

#3EleCrisMar 1, 2010

Great story..i really enjoy it \:wub\: can't wait \:\)

#4Golden97Mar 1, 2010

This looks like it's going to be really good \:D I cant wait \:\)

#5isarpgistaMar 1, 2010

Sounds good. Looking forward to part 1. [2] \:D

#6artsysimaddictMar 3, 2010

Ooh...mysterious! I like the boy, and your use of colour is great! Black and white really adds something. Waiting for Part 1! I wonder what the `gift` is...

#7NenehunniMar 3, 2010

If you do this right it could be pretty amazing !! ^_^ I know what you mean by bombarded with schoolwork, * a - levels urgh* lol, nice first part, screenies were ok, didnt ramble <3 Looking for part 1 xx

#8BlufixMar 6, 2010

Lookin' good. \:D

#9SerinValMar 7, 2010

Ooh, looks good! Can't wat for it to come out. \:\)

#10GlamuritaMar 8, 2010

Great story..

#11MangioMar 12, 2010

interesting preview \:rah\: what a cruel father, i wonder about this mysterious gift \:wub\: cant wait for more

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