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What goes around, comes around... Part 1
Published Apr 5, 2010


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JapaneaseAngel

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Welcome to my new story! Please enjoy. :]

Welcome to my new story! Please enjoy. :] "I had only meant to drive by, but when I saw that flash of silvery-white hair, I immediately slammed on the breaks..." "When I saw her, I was absolutely speechless! Yet, little did I know, the day I met her... my life was going to change..."

Reina stared at the body laying in front of her with wide eyes. She was... she was a mermaid!? "But those aren't real... " she murmured quietly. Yet, here it was, real proof right in front of her. Reina wringed her hands out. Why was she on land? Who was she? What would she do with her? What if she left her here? So many questions, it was making her head spin!
She kneeled down beside the strange mermaid, her mind still swarming with different questions,
"The first thing I should do..." she murmured thoughtfully, "... Is to see if she's still alive." Reina put a hand on her shoulder, and nearly gasped aloud, "She's dry. She's so dry..." She quickly turned the mermaid over, only to see something quite perplexing.
"Now, where did you get that necklace..." Reina whispered curiously, raising an eyebrow. There was no way she could have it. That wasn't possible! It was the necklace that she had given him... her special person... how did this girl have it?! "I can ask questions later," Reina stated, quickly scanning the area around her for onlookers, "I've got to get you back to my place..." After much planning, and then difficulty actually GETTING the mermaid to her car, let alone sit her down in the front seat, Reina sat still and reshuffled her thoughts, "When I get home, I'll fill the bathtub with water, and place you in there." Reina stole a glance at the mermaid in her passenger seat, "Then when you regain consciousness, you're going to tell me where you got that necklace..." Reina pressed her foot down on the gas pedal, and began the drive home. After even MORE difficulty of getting this mermaid upstairs to the top floor, and placing her on the guest bed, Reina began to fill the bathtub with warm water. Yet she still couldn't get her mind off of that necklace. It was exactly the same as the one she gave him when they where teenagers. When they first began going out. How did she get it? Reina shook the thought from her head, and turned the water off. After getting her into the bathtub, Reina retreated back to the first floor. She took a seat on the sofa, and entered a pondering mood, "I got her back to my place, got her in the tub... but what am I supposed to do with her after she awakens? Take her back to the ocean?..." Reina quickly shook her head, "No way, I really want to know about that necklace!" Before she knew what had happened, or when she fell asleep, Reina was waking up from a nap, "What the..." She murmured sleepily, "When did I fall asleep?" She sat up and rubbed her eyes, "I feel as though I'm forgetting something..." Reina searched through her foggy mind, and gasped, "MERMAID!" Reina raced upstairs, only to be stopped dead in her tracks. She eyed the blonde haired lady clad in only under garments sifting through her clothes, "Who... who are you... ?!" Reina breathed, her head spinning, "How did you get in here?? Where's the mermaid?!" The strange lady spun around, gasping in shock. Obviously not expecting the company. Reina's eyes fell on the golden necklace draped around her neck. No way... it wasn't possible?! "You.. you ARE the mermaid... ?" Without warning, the strange lady stepped forward and wrapped her arms around Reina's shoulders, "You are the one who helped me, yes?" Her voice was light and feathery, it was soothing in a way, "Uhm... yes, that's right..." Reina stammered, quite confused with the turn of events. "Uhm... l-let me get you some clothes..." Reina slipped past the girl, and retrieved a dress from the clothing rack, "I'll be downstairs when you're done..." She laid the dress down on the bed and slipped downstairs, her head still swarming with a thousand questions.

(( Sorry, I kinda caught the reaction box in this pic. >_< ))
"It looks good on you." Reina commented, as the lady entered the living room, "Can you... take a seat? There's a few things I want to ask you about." She cocked her head to the side slightly, but sat down anyways, "What is it you would like to know?" She asked curiously, in that feathery voice of hers. "Well, for starts, who are you? What's your name?" Reina blurted out, unable to contain her curiosity any longer. "My name... ? Ciera." She replied simply, with a smile. "Ciera? I see, it's nice to meet you, Ciera, I'm Reina." After exchanging their quick greetings, and names, Reina continued with the questions, "How did you get to South Beach?"
"I don't know..." Ciera murmured, knitting her eyebrows together, as though thinking hard, "I don't remember a thing, except waking up in your bath tub."
"Well... then what happened to your tail? I mean... where did you... ah..." Reina frowned at the fact that she couldn't seem to ask the question. Ciera simply laughed, "It's just a small mermaid thing that we can do when we're out of water." Reina laughed uneasily. She was saying it so matter-of-factly... suddenly, Reina's face got serious. "That necklace... where did you get it from... ?" There. She had said it, and she felt better for it.
Ciera blinked, almost shocked, "This necklace..." She put her hand over it, and smiled softly, "Somebody... somebody very special gave it to me. I have not seen him since... but I will never forget his face. His voice... the way he spoke to me, so gently..." Ciera laughed uneasily, "Iforgive me, I am rambling on."
Suddenly, before Reina could ask any more questions, or reply to the last one, the sound of the door opening and the rustling of plastic bags could be heard in the kitchen, "Reina, I'm back!" Reina whipped her head around to the doorway into the living room, where a brown-haired, handsome man entered, "I picked up the brown eggs, because the white ones where more expensive and..." His voice trailed off as he caught sight of Ciera. Reina exchanged a glance between the two, who both held the same look as surprise as the other. It was just as she had feared. As soon as she saw the necklace, she knew who it belonged to... "Chad..." Ciera murmured quietly, her face lightening up like a light bulb. "Chad! Oh, Chad!" Ciera cried happily, jumping up from the sofa and leaping into his arms, "C-Ciera... ?!" Chad stammered, confused over the whole ordeal. Reina watched from the sofa. She could feel her jealousy starting to rise, and she fought to keep it down...


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#11MangioApr 6, 2010

interesting \:rah\: cant wait for more. omg, both the girls liking the same guy - what could go wrong \:P \:D

#12IllandryaApr 6, 2010

Intriguing! I will definitely be looking out for the next chapter ... so many questions I want answered, not least of which is how is Chad going to talk himself out of this one!

#13anura32Apr 6, 2010

Hmmmmmmmm that was kewl. Cant wait to read on.

#14xxheartlessxx12Apr 6, 2010

Unique! Can't wait for more!

#15drewsolteszApr 8, 2010

Well done, great job, and great emotion!

#16stephyslayerApr 12, 2010

i really liked this first part, looking forward for more to come \:\) it's quite a different story!

#17koolkatherine4Apr 14, 2010

\:\) This is a amazing start to the story. Please post when the next part is out !!!!!!!!!!!!!!

#18Minxy01Apr 14, 2010

I like it! Keep up the good work \:D

#19!simsrocks!May 15, 2010

LOVE IT!!! \:D

#20converse02Jun 4, 2010

Slightly confiused with dialouge but overall it was quite intriguing. I kept clicking for the next part but nothing happened! Cliff-hangers, they slay me!! \:D

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