Lorelei - XIII
Published Apr 5, 2010

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yeah, I know I miss you guys too *hugs* ^_^ Please Read & Review!


yeah, I know I miss you guys too *hugs* ^_^ Please Read & Review!
GOOD MORNING, Monte Carlo! Time to rise and shine! We have partially sunny, partially cloudy, partially windy an overall perfect day. So get up and start your

Stupid, noisy radio, why did I set it up to turn on this early? Its my day off and I dont have any close friends in this new town either, so why bother? A part of me wished to go back to sleep but, Im already awake. Why did I even fly to Monaco anyway?

Too bad Scott, I murmured as I sat up my bed and rubbed my eyes. Guess you have to get up and go.
I dragged my feet to the kitchen, half asleep half awake half turning on voicemail. I used to be a morning person, jumping up and down the bed trying to wake up my older sister Zinnia. But things change when you get old, now I just hate mornings; especially Monday ones. Sorry to intrude my lady, says an old man from the playback. My employer requested to meet you, there's an important matter to discuss, today at the Hotel de Paris 10:00 am sharp. A car will be dispatched to fetch you by nine.

And I thought phone scams only exist in poor countries I rolled my eyes as I rummaged the fridge.
Its aboutyour inheritance

Hearing that, I stopped dead at my tracks and my mind triggered. What, who is this guy and why now? I pondered. It had been three years since the incident. Even if I was too young to handle the corporation my father left why wait for three years? I was already legal after one.
Before I could think deeper the smell of strawberry waffles danced into my senses telling me that my breakfast was done. I took it out and set it to cool on the table while I took a shower. At the mirror I gazed at myself. I wasnt the same person from before. I stopped dyeing my hair blonde, and let it grow to my back and my skin had become lighter. But my eyes stayed the same blue-green color; mirroring my mothers European origin. As for my choice of clothing well, still the same old tomboy we knew and loved. Too bad Scott, said my mirror clone. Cant eat those waffles now. Your rides here. Pulling a sweater over my ragged clothes, I paced to the gate and stopped. Miss Katrina? An old man inquired. Thats me. He scanned me from top to bottom with a discerning eye; I suppose Im not properly dressed as an heir. I apologize if this offends you Miss, but your clothes wont do. I scanned myself and shrugged, Were just going to discuss my inheritance. Do I need a ball gown for that? He gave a slight chuckle and shook his head. You are your mothers daughter alright. Well then, lets go.

He then opened the car door and motioned me to go inside. And by the way, Miss, I am your late mothers butler Sebastian. He then firmly closed the door. Paced quickly to the drivers seat and started the engine.
An hour later we arrived at Hotel de Paris, where M.A.I. Miyazama Artificial Intelligence, was supposedly having a meeting. Its specialty was creating A.I. interfaces for small machines, security devices, cars and one day, humanoid robots.

Then it hit me! Of course; they mustve heard about it about my completion of Lorelei.

That's all I could do for now, I hope I did justice to the original Lorelei =_= durp~ biggest laptop crash in the century destroyed all of my game files.

ahh well~ I hope you like it ^^

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#5MangioApr 6, 2010

im glad your continuing \:wub\: interesting, cant wait for more, as always \:wub\: and thank you for your comment. i will try to work on it... but i'm too lazy \:D

#6shaml_sim Apr 6, 2010

Yay, I'm so glad to see Lorelei back! \:D And you did such a great job, especially since you had a laptop crash and still decided to continue the story. I agree with Fred, Scott's new look is great and I loved it when she told Sebastian that she didn't need to wear a ball gown for a discussion about her inheritance \;\) Fantastic and I look forward to more!!

#7stephyslayerApr 8, 2010

you are amazing for continuing this after the crash you suffered, i love story this very much and can't wait to see where you take it \:\)

#8drewsolteszApr 8, 2010

Well done, great emotion, look forward to more!

#9kanzenApr 9, 2010

we experience...yet again, another crash. please bear the lateness of the next chapter. thanks!

#10timamaApr 10, 2010

im quite confused.but i find your story great, the characters, the CCs, i think all of it \:D

#11nikki_19612Jul 20, 2010

Great chapter!

#12kanzenJul 31, 2010

why do I feel like I hate myself for not continuing this?! XD

#13nessabeeOct 7, 2011

IS THIS THE LAST CHAPTER?!? if it is ill be sad.... \:confused\:\:\(

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