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Prom Night; Three
Published Jun 10, 2010


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Chapter Three. !

Chapter Three. ! "Alright, I've got some good news and some bad news. I'll start with the bad, I can not fix the car. But the good news is that I called for a repair guy and he said he can not only tow my car to the auto shop but he can give us all a ride to prom. He should be here in 30 minutes tops." "Whoa whoa whoa, 30 minutes tops? We are supposed to hang out here for 30 minutes?? We are in the middle of nowhere in front of some house that honestly creeps me out and now we have to wait? This is a disaster! The Prom Queen can not be late to her own prom. It would be like a princess being late to her own ball, it doesn't work that way." "Leah this is partly your fault too! You just had to bring him along, you couldnt have dated someone other than the screw up of the senior class?!" "Dude, Taylor. Calm down. 30 minutes will go quickly alright. Don't worry your pretty little face, we will be to prom before they do the crowning. You can make something up about how you wanted to make a grand entrance. They'll believe you, your dramatic enough. Stop yelling at me though. I know Ryan isn't exactly the sharpest tool in the shed but it wasn't his fault the car broke down." "Well thank you Leah, I'm glad you realize I did not break my car down on purpose just to creep all you ladies out here. But hey, why don't we make the best of it. Let's go inside and check the place out. Itll help pass time. It beats hanging out here in the cold. What do ya say?" Leah and Taylor did not have much in common with each other but they both shot Ryan a nasty look at his mentioning of going inside the abandoned home.

"Ryan, are you crazy? Me go in that place? With you? I'd rather lose my Prom Quee crown to Aubrey. You can find someone else."

"Yeah, I'm with Taylor on this one. Normally I'd be totally with you when it comes to adventures but not this time. I believe in ghosts and this place gives me a bad feeling. Why don't you ask the others. I'll chill out here."
"Hey Angel my main mannnn, I've got some bad news. I can't do anything to the car but I did call up some car guy, he's a buddy of my dads. He's going to two my car and take us to prom. It should be no more than a half hour, so I as thinking about checking out the inside of this place to wast time. What do ya say?" "I apologize my friend, but I heard you talking to the ladies over there and if Taylor, my love, isn't going than I musn't either. It is cold out here and I must warm her like I plan on doing with her heart."

"Whatever man, your lame."
After rejection from three of the members of the group, Ryan decided to ask the lovely couple if they wouldn't mind joining him on his touring of the household.

"Carter, my buddy-oo-"

"What do you want? Any luck on the car?"

"Well, about that. There was nothing I could do to it. It's weird man, I can't find anything wrong with it. It just won't start. It has never done that to me before. Well anyway I called up a buddy of my dads and hes on his way to tow it and take us to prom. But until he gets here I was planning on taking a look inside this place, you want to come with? Kimberly can come too if shed like, or she can stay with the other wusses out here."
"No it's okay. I think I'll just hang out here with Kim until the guy gets here, I've heard too many stories about this house but feel free to go in on your own. I can call you when the guy gets here." "Really? Your gonna wuss out on me like Angel did? For a girl? You guys disappoint me. Its senior year, night of our senior prom! Where's your sense of adventure? You know it would be a great story to tell yours and Kim's kids one day, ya know? Since you two are so getting married some day."

"Hey Ryan, you'll understand one day. Having someone to love and who loves you back ain't such a bad thing. You should try it, maybe itll teach you to grow up a bit."

"I enjoy the non-love life better cause man if Leah wanted looove then I'd be a gonner in a second, but thanks for the advice. I'll forget it by tomorrow. I'll search this place on my own. You two have fun out here, behave yourselves- hah who am I kidding. You two wouldn't trouble if it slapped you in the face."

and Ryan left the two alone.
"I don't know what Leah sees in him, he's doesn't even treat her well. I doubt he is going to college like her. I hope they don't try to stay together. He will only cheat on her."

"Well it's Leah's choice to date whoever she wants, but I agree that she could do better."

Carter put his arm around Kimberly's shoulder.
"Carter.."

"Yeah?"

"What stories have you heard about this place?"

"Oh, don't worry about it. We will be out of here soon."
Meanwhile Ryan tried to convince one more person to investigate the house with him.

"Aubrey, you shouldn't believe everythin you hear. This place obviously isn't haunted, otherwise I'm the ghost would have already come after us. We are fine, I really think you should come inside with me. Please?"

"No thanks, there is no way I am going in there. I will just stand out here away from the house and wait for the two truck guy. I would much rather freeze out here than go in there. You have fun, Ryan." After 6 failed attempts to get someone to enter the house with him, Ryan decided to just go in himself. He did not want to go the rest of the night regretting not seeing what was inside. Meanwhile, Aubrey began to move to the other side of the house. She was beginning to get tired of all the bickering going on between Leah and Taylor, and all the mushy talk going on between Carter and Kimberly.

While she was walking around the back of the house she felt a presence behind her, and heard a raspy voice yell to her:

"IF I DON'T GET MY PROM, NONE OF YOU SHALL RECEIVE YOURS!"
And then all went black. . .

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#1martoeleJun 11, 2010

It couldn't be otherwise... destiny made them stop at this creepy house! \:eek\:  It's getting better all the time and the shots are great! \:rah\:

#2martoeleJun 11, 2010

And congratulations for having it featured! \:cool\:

#3MangioJun 11, 2010

omg... i hope they're all right. whose the ghostly women? is that who made the car stop. oh know... \:wub\: cant wait for more. hope they all get to prom in the end. Ryan must be so brave to just venture in like that, i would've stayed outside like the rest of them

#4nataliestonardJun 11, 2010

Wow great Chapter! 5/5

#5muggelx1Jun 11, 2010

very nice story...\:rah\:

#6plyangel456Jun 12, 2010

Creepy but interesting story! I wonder what happened?! I can't wait to read the next part! \:\)

#7boredgirl5492Jun 14, 2010

Wow.! Great Story.. I cant wait to find out what happens next.!\:D

#8AmateurGamerJul 27, 2010

Awww @ 5     Cute @ 7     oooooooo @ 19    

#9Dec 6, 2010

creepy house

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