Bring Me To Life - Chapt. 1
Published Jun 29, 2010

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Julia Osbourne speaks...

Julia Osbourne speaks... My name is Julia Osbourne and I'm a writer. I'm going to tell you a very strange, weird history. No, no, I didn't make it up. It really happened. But let me put an order to the facts...I have a younger sister called Alice. She is a sweet girl. Very brave and independent too. Like our father, she loves to invent things.... At that time I'd been hired by a very wealthy man to write his memories. I needed that money or else I would had turned it down. His name was Charles Babington, Lord Western. He invited me to his house...well...not a house properly, a manor, in fact.... He was a very polite and nice man... " I do hope you feel comfortable, my dear. It's a fine house and not very big. When do you intend to move in and start off our interviews and your writing?"
"Actually, Lord Western, I do need your permission to bring my little sister along with me. I'm all the family she has and I dare not leave her at a boarding school anymore..."
"But of course, my dear! Your sister will be very much welcome here. I love the company of young people"

That's the answer I needed to hear. After that, Lord Western showed my little apartment. It was charming!
"This is the Brocade apartment, Miss Osbourne. I arranged it to you because it is more modern. All the west wing was recently restored. Oh, and it's not haunted."

"Haunted?" I could not beilieve my ears. He had a sense of humour and I like that in a person.

"Ah, yes! All manors must be haunted or else it 's not funny."
Three day later...

"...and you have to promise me, Alice Mary Osbourne, you will absolutely NOT explode anything in that house. And the house is included!"

"Alright, alright...I know it will be very boring, then..."
"Grow up, Alice. You are 19 years old! So behave like a 19 year old "
"Okay, Jules, I've promised already!"
"And that means you too, tin lady!!"
*metalic voice* "Do not worry about Alice II. She behaves and she will do the chores. Promises"
"I think we are ready, then. Let's go inside. Please, behave!"
"Oh, Lord Westren, meet my sister, Alice."
"Welcome, young Alice. I do hope you ladies feel at home here."

Julia was afraid of what Alice could reply that moment.

"Thank you. Your house is very beautiful."

Julia felt a relieve down her spine....Alice had been polite!

"And you are a very pretty girl, my dear." said Lord Western.
"I'm an inventor, milord. I made Alice II." Alice went on
"Very impressive work, Alice. I'm a bit of an invetor myself. Perhaps you can use my lab to work. If you are careful."
"I am, I am!!!Please!" Alice was beginning to behave like a brat..
"Alice, remember what we talked about..." Julia warned her with a sweet smile.
Later that same night, Julia sent out some emails and wrote some notes about the first interview with Lord Western Alice was sleeping peacefully. Alice II, as she promised, was doing the chores... Everyting seemed to be so well..but then... ...Alice II went back to the Brocade apartment and was
*metalic voice* "Who are you? What are you doing here? HELP!"

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#20Onion_peeler99Jul 8, 2010

I'm already loving this story! Beautiful pictures as well. \:D

#21artsysimaddictJul 8, 2010

Great! I really liked it! Too bad it was so short....

#22tyty103Jul 12, 2010

by any chanse is this going to be a alice in wonderland sorta thing?...but it would be more like alice in ghost land or something. its really good though

#23fabrizioammolloJul 20, 2010

It's such a beautiful story.

#24Simlight16Aug 10, 2010

I'm goign to read Ch. 2! I hate cliffhangers!

#25SimplySarahDec 8, 2010

That was very good. I loved the house and story line.

#26emilymarie0201Feb 22, 2011

I love that robot!

#27meu.pai.usa.calcinhaApr 24, 2011

Essa é a primeira história que eu leio no TSR
4meeii \:wub\:

#28NenaAbdullahOct 13, 2011

I really like the story line can't wait to see the next episode..btw i love how u created Alice..She is super adorable!

#29xhaiiOct 17, 2011

you deserved the feature Annie ^___^
you have a great story..i do hope you'll continue this and will not leave me hanging \;\)
two thumbs up for the screenshots \:D
5 stars rating for the story \:D

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