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The Nanny: Part 6
Published Jul 14, 2010


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Here is part 6 guys. Thanks for all your support and comments. I read them and smile. I try my best to at least thank you all individually but if I forget you it's not out of rudeness and was on accident. Thank you again x

Here is part 6 guys. Thanks for all your support and comments. I read them and smile. I try my best to at least thank you all individually but if I forget you it's not out of rudeness and was on accident. Thank you again x 3 months into her around the world trip and Eleanor was starting to feel herself again. She'd been everywhere, to London to see Big Ben, Rome to see the Vatican, Brazil to see the Amazon Rainforest and her she was sunning it up on the beach in Hawaii. It was beautiful and she decided to treat herself to a stay in a 5 star hotel. Afterall she had worked hard for the money she'd earnt looking after Molly. The locals were so friendly and it allowed her time to soak up the atmosphere. She also learnt the local dance moves and sunbathed on the clear beaches. With each day that passed she still missed Molly and sometimes Matthew. That night she promised to send Molly a postcard. Eleanor kept true to her word and wrote Molly a postcard. She spoke of the fun she was having but of how much she missed Molly and would see her soon. Deep down she wasn't sure of how soon, as time hadn't healed all her wounds. She posted it later that day, hoping Molly got it. Molly got the postcard a few days later. Matthew had sat down to read it with her. When Molly read it to him he smiled and wondered how Eleanor was and he longed to see her again. In the past few months a lot had changed for him too. It all began when Molly caught Emma in the arms of another man. She was hysterical when she told her Dad about it. Matthew believed his daughter instantly and wanted to catch the two of them together. It turned out Emma had another love, a childhood sweetheart. They'd be in the plot of her marrying Matthew and taking his money in a divorce. They had been quite discreet about it. However, when Matthew started to fall for Eleanor they'd plotted to lie and pretend Emma was pregnant. Of course she wasn't but they'd sort that out somehow. Matthew was angry and called in his lawyers as soon as he confronted her. It was all coming out.

"You lied to me, you pretended you were pregnant so I would marry you. You disgust me," he shouted.
"I hope you have a good lawyer!" Matthew told them both, "Now get out my house and leave!" Emma pleaded a little, knowing her chance at his money was no doubt gone. But Matthew was adamant. "Now, expect the divorce papers," Matthew snarled. After that Matthew made a promise to himself. To spend more time with Molly and he did this by taking time off work. Being with Molly made him realise how much he adored her and was proud of her. She was everything he'd hoped she'd be and he knew that was partly due to Eleanor. Sure he was man enough to admit he'd made a mistake, been stupid and gave Eleanor up to easy. But if he saw her again he'd beg her forgiveness and hope that they could at least be friends. "Wheeeeeeeeee!" Molly smiled as they played together. Matthew realised it was moments like these that outweighed all the bad things. Infact he'd never been happier. Molly seemed to be happy too and this pleased him. She hadn't smiled much since Eleanor had left. That day he held his daughter and told her he loved her. She said she loved him too and he believed it. So that day Molly had received the postcard Matthew missed Eleanor more than ever. The words on the postcard made her feel closer to him instead of a distant happy memory. Plus Molly smiled as she re-read it to him a thousand times, talking about Eleanor's adventures. Then he knew what he needed to do.

"Fancy an adventure of our own?" he asked Molly, "To bring back Eleanor?"

Molly beamed and hugged her Dad happily.
Less than a day later, they there where. In Hawaii. Armed with the postcard and a suitcase hoping to find Eleanor on this island. The postcard had a postmark that suggested the area they were in. But there was no guarantee they would find Eleanor but it was an adventure they were willing to take and a risk worth taking...

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#1Malrose828Jul 15, 2010

That Emma, she always seemed like a snobby, mischevious one! \:\) Hope Matthew and Molly find Eleanor! 5/5!
~Malrose828

#2IllandryaJul 15, 2010

Oh, what a little schemer Emma was! I wondered about the convenient pregnancy but never imagined the rest of the plot! Great little twist there. I hope Matthew and Molly find Eleanor, but I also hope Ellie makes Matthew squirm a bit before she accepts his apology \;\)

#3martoeleJul 15, 2010

Oh, this part is really beautiful! I hoped already that something like that would happen. \:\)  I really hope that they find Eleanor! \:wub\: 5.0 ~ Margo

#4sparklewandJul 15, 2010

Awwww!!!!
I absolutely LOVE this story, it's sooooo amazing, well done \:\)

#5MangioJul 15, 2010

Oh no wonder.. i always hated that Emma girl. I hope Mathew and Molly can find Eleanor, hope its not too late \:wub\: And i'm glad Mathew is spending more time with his daughter. Cant wait for more \:\)

#6Jul 15, 2010

Hmm...maybe Matthew IS worthy of Eleanor....can't wait for the next part \:\)

#7DVSVJul 16, 2010

nice part 6 \;\)

#8melaniecoxVIPJul 18, 2010

Go get her back Matthew!  If you can, will Eleanor allow it.
Off to the finale

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