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Looking for Love: Part 7
Published Feb 26, 2011


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Part 7

Part 7 Over the next few weeks, Sebastian spent a bit more time with his brother and Lucy at her place. Dominic was living there whilst they looked for a new place together. Lucy would cook the food and the three of them, including Kate would sit down in front of the TV and eat or play games. Things between Dominic and Sebastian were good, Sebastian was happy that Dominic and Lucy were settling down. Sebastian however, was keeping his distance from Lucy this week, he was finding each moment they spent together increasingly hard. He wanted to kiss her so much and tell her he loved her. He adored her and it had become obvious to him now. As they sat down together, he wanted to take her in his arms and kiss her. But he knew he couldn’t with Dominic there. Lucy was speaking to him about her day at work and he couldn’t keep focused at all. She was mesmerising. When Lucy went to the kitchen to make the food, she breathed a sigh of relief. Things were weird between Sebastian and herself and she was worried about her feelings for him. She loved Dominic but for some reason she was deeply attracted to Sebastian. When Dominic came into the kitchen he looked irritated. “What’s wrong?” Lucy asked worriedly.

“I saw the way my brother looked at you,” Dominic frowned.
“How did he look at me?” Lucy asked puzzled. “Is there something going on between the two of you?” Dominic asked annoyed. “No nothing at all,” Lucy replied shocked, “How could you even suggest that?” “You just seem a bit off with me, and the two of you seem to be getting along...” Dominic said angrily. “I thought you wanted us to get along?” Lucy snapped.

“I do, look, I am overreacting,” Dominic sighed.

“Yes you are!” Lucy almost shouted, “And it’s not fair at all!”




“I am sorry Luce,” Dominic replied. He leaned forward to kiss Lucy but she moved away.

“Not now, I am too mad with you,” she replied.
A few minutes after Dominic left the kitchen, Kate came in to say Sebastian had to rush to work.

“Oh that’s fine, you and Dominic are welcome to watch a film upstairs if you want, I have a few things to do first,” Lucy suggested.
“Are you sure? Thanks Lucy!” Kate said hugging Lucy before going upstairs. Lucy wanted some time alone and she began to clean her kitchen until it sparkled. Dominic had really annoyed her. How dare he suggest Sebastian and her had something going on?! Whilst Lucy cleaned, more sparks were flying upstairs. Kate and Dominic were alone together and both were feeling neglected by their partners. Whilst Lucy was on the phone...

They kissed on the sofa for a few minutes. It was wrong, it was unfair but it felt so good. Kate really liked Dominic, he was smart, sexy and kind. He also flirted with her, which made her feel appreciated.

But Dominic snapped back to reality, “This is wrong...we can’t! I love Lucy. I want to marry her!”

He moved away and was angry at himself for what he had done. Ashamed and mortified. Moments later Kate left the house quickly.

Dominic took a shower and came down to apologise to Lucy.

“I’m sorry for earlier Lucy,” Dominic said.


“I know,” Lucy replied, “I forgive you.” He took her hand in his and kissed her softly. “Can I ask you something?” Dominic said softly, “Now you can say no if you want to.... but I love you and I want to marry you...” “Are you asking me to marry you?” Lucy said shocked. Dominic placed his hands on both sides of her face and touched her face fondly.

“Yes I am, will you marry me?” Dominic smiled.
“Yes I will,” Lucy found herself replying.

“Then I am the happiest man in the world,” Dominic smiled.
They then kissed and Lucy found herself happy again. She was getting married. She picked up her phone and called the Carmichaels. She couldn’t wait for everyone to hear the news. She was becoming Mrs Dominic Carmichael!

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#1spitzmagicFeb 27, 2011

Congrats on the feature....boy..I sure hope they know what they are doing...me oh my....\:rah\:

#2martoeleFeb 27, 2011

Something tells me that these sims are making a mistake by getting married.... but of course.... I could be wrong...! \:ph34r\: Congratulations for having your story on the index page! \:cool\:

#3MangioFeb 27, 2011

How could Dominic and Kate just do that... and then a marriage... Off to read more \;\) \:wub\:

#4MangioFeb 27, 2011

Congrats on the feature, too \:rah\: Didn't realise it was chapter 7 already \:D \:o

#5fredbrennyFeb 27, 2011

Irrational kids... they haven't got the foggiest what they are doing. I'd say just swap partners and it will be fine. Why in heavens name is there a marriage proposal at a time when all of them are confused about their feelings? Marriage is not a bandaid... LOL I KNEW this was DRAMA when I saw it. \:D Congrats on the feature \:rah\:

#6methura1Feb 27, 2011

Lol 'Wife Swap' comes to mind (though I know they're not all married yet but they are engaged). Really good \:\)

#7fabrizioammolloFeb 28, 2011

The more their certainties are falling, the more they should stop and think, the more they are going further... I'm sure this is going to be a mistake!

#8daphney1230Mar 8, 2011

Wow, how can he kiss his brother's fiance and then go down stairs and ask to marry Lucy? SMH good chapter

#9Mar 12, 2011

great story

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