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Broken Strings: Chapter 2
Published Mar 16, 2011


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Thello29

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Broken Strings
by Thello29

Chapter 2

"Oh, the truth hurts and lies worse
How can I give anymore"

Broken Strings
by Thello29

Chapter 2

"Oh, the truth hurts and lies worse
How can I give anymore"
Broken Strings
by Thello29
Andrew Avram is now the Manager of InterBank. He built it with his brother in law, Dean, who unfortunately died.
Now, Dean's wife, Raluca owned a good share of the bank and a lot of venues in town.
Married to the beautyful Madeline, a prolific writer, Dean knew what he valued most in life.
He had an urge for financial power. All he could think of was how to make the bank stronger, extend its reach.
Irina, his personal assistant entered the office. "Hello Irina!" Andrew said noticing her.
"Andrew, here are the papers you asked for" the woman said making her way to his desk.
"And Raluca whishes to talk to you, should I send her in?" "Yes, of course!" "Anything else for today?" Andrew asked as the blond woman passed though the office.
"Don't forget about Madeline's book lunching, at the library, at 6:00!"
Andrew gazed for a few seconds
"Thank you for reminding me!"
"He's in a good mood right now." Irina said while looking in her friend's eyes. "I'll go in then." Raluca said smiling. "Hello Andrew, how are you today?" "I'm fine! Have a seat!" "Is there something you wanted to talk to me about?" He had asked that as Raluca sat down on the confortable chair. Raluca hesitated for a second.
"I'm willing to sell my share of the InterHotel. I just wanted to let you know."
"You are selling? Now? Can't you wait for a few weeks?" "I'm afraid not! I've thought about it lately, and I know it's the best decision I can afford right now" "I've told you once that you shouldn't sell that hotel to anyone else but me, still you do not listen!"
Andrew screamed.
Raluca was furious.
"I don't need you to tell me what to do! I don't want your money, and I'm sick of your orders!"
"I'll be going now!" the woman replied. "Goodbye, Andrew!" Andrew did not say a word. He was furios and afraid that he'd lose his temper. The Library was buzzing with people that night. "Foster Hearts", Madeline Avram's new roamnce novel was a sensation.
As she stood on the scene, talking about her book, Andrew could not listen. He had too many things to think about.
"She looks gorgeous!" Raluca told Irina.
"She deserves succes." Irina replied.
Andrew's attention was caught by one man. He had never met him before, but still he seemed strangely familliar with Madeline. "Who is he?" Andrew asked himself.
The unknown man had a strange way of looking at Madeline, a way that Andrew disliked.
Andrew stared at the stranger for a few minutes,
"Look at him! He's just staring at her!" Andrew though.
As Madeline and her husband were walking back home, she turned to him and asked:
"What did you think of the book?"
"It was good..."
"You haven't even read it."
"Who was that man?"
"Which one?"
"The one next to the scene, brown hair, with a hoodie?"
"Just some friend of Sandra's."
"I hate the way he ws looking at you!" Andrew shrieked in the night.
"You shouldn't be jelous!" Madeline said.
"I know, I should never doubt you. I'm sorry" Andrew said, calming his voice.
Madeline was in pain. Her hear was beating fast.
"If you go on acting this way, you will lose me forever."
Andrew watched, speechless as his wife got into a cab and went away on the dark streets of the town.
He stood there, under the streetlight, alone and heartbroken. Madeline had betrayed him, and he knew it for sure.

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#1JoeG53Mar 17, 2011

where can i get the stuff on page 4? \:\) great stroy XD

#2Thello29Mar 17, 2011

The objects on page 4 are from High-End Loft Stuff!
Stick to the story because it will be great!\:\)

#3martoeleMar 17, 2011

Hey... congratulations on having reached the frontpage.... \:\)

#4Mar 17, 2011

great story

#5spitzmagicMar 17, 2011

congrats on it's feature \:rah\: I missed the first one. I must go find it and read it. \:rah\:

#6emilymarie0201Mar 18, 2011

oohhh! things are getting intense now! loving the story\:wub\:

#7Thello29Mar 18, 2011

wow! I'm shocked of the nice comments you've been sending me! I myself love this story verry much, and I'm glad I'm able o bring it to you!
The only bad thing is that you'll have to wait a while to see what's going to happen next!\:\)

#8anura32Mar 20, 2011

How sad... What will happen to him now...

#9anura32Mar 21, 2011

Okay now I finally got the relations of the characters.

#10maxi kingMar 27, 2011

\;\)I thing you got the wrong name on page 4!Never mind!It is a bit confusing at the moment!\;\)

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