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A Sister's Bond: Chapter 4
Published Mar 29, 2011


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Chapter 4 :D

Thanks for reading my other chapters, and thanks for the comments and ratings :) I really like knowing what you think of the story.. so let me know :D

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Chapter 4 :D

Thanks for reading my other chapters, and thanks for the comments and ratings :) I really like knowing what you think of the story.. so let me know :D

Enjoy...
Neil woke up and logged onto his cpmputer and read the email from Whitney that she was on her way to his house... Neil felt nervous, he'd told a pack of lies to Whitney, making Louise out to be the bad guy when in reality he had pushed Louise away with his controlling ways and also cheating... Neil cleaned up the whole house. He was looking forward to seeing his ex girlfriend for the first time in years and wanted to impress her. Whitney arrived on the outskirts of Bluewater Village on what looked like a caravan park.. "oh Louise" Whitney thought, thinking of how little money Neil and Louise must have... it made her feel sad because she earned good money and was comfortably off, while her sister was struggling to make ends meet.. She looked around wondering which trailer Neil was living in... She knocked on one of the trailer's to ask which one Neil lived in, and a man with a husky voice shouted her over... "Hi did you want me, seeing as you was knocking on my door, im Nery by the way"
"Nice to meet you Nery, Im Whitney, im looking for Neil.. Im not sure which trailer he lives in..." asked Whitney
"Oooh Neil, the unsociable guy who kept us all awake shouting at his wife at all hours.. poor girl, im glad she saw sense and moved away... she was very quiet Louise.. seemed anxious all the time" Whitney listened, confused...
"Louise.. quiet, anxious.. thats not my sister! She's the loudest person you could ever meet, flirts with any man in pants" Whitney laughed... "and im sure they were arguing over nothing" Whitney added feeling uneasy about Nery's revelations... "Whitney, your sister was anything but loud, she never really spoke to any of us, Neil would always shout at her to get in the house if she spoke to someone for longer then two minutes... they argued all the time, Louise would end up in tears.. there were rumours he attacked her aswell. One day she was just gone" Nery said with a sigh... Whitney didn't know what to say... "Oh, erm, Im gonna have to speak to Neil... Which trailer is his please." asked Whitney with a lump in her throat, she felt like crying... the girl Nery had described was a different person to Louise. But she knew he was right, this was where Louise was living after all. Was Neil lying to her about Louise running away with another man, Whitney thought. Whitney found Neil at last, and he greeted her with a warm hug telling her how beautiful she looked and how she'd gone blonde and it suited her very well... Whitney decided that she had to be direct with Neil and told him everything Nery had said...
"You come into my house.. and within five mintutes your accusing me of being aggressive to Louise! Listen to me Whitney, Louise cheated on me all the time and then left with a man!"
"Okay.. Well Im sorry but I don't believe you" Whitney said abrubtly... She had a really bad feeling about Neil and knew when he was lying... She was with him for a year after all... and she also had faith in her sister.
Neil shot up out of his seat and turned on Whitney...
"YOU KNEW THAT LOUISE WAS A CHEATER, LOOK WHAT SHE DID TO YOU, SHE HAD AN AFFAIR WITH ME BEHIND YOUR BACK, SHE'S A TART AND ALWAYS WILL BE... AND YOUR A BLONDE SCUMBAG WHITNEY TO THINK I WOULD CHEAT, WHO DO YOU THINK YOU ARE, YOU LITTLE SNOB!" After that, Whitney knew that Neil was lying about everything he said.
"I HAD AN AFFAIR OKAY!" Neil finally admitted... "She left me because I had an affair" "You'll never change Neil, ever! You cheated on her. You attacked her, you insulted her every night... I know Neil, your neighbour told me. Your a bully and you've pushed my sister away and your little boy and you know what.. There both better off without you.." Whitney said in a calm but confronting voice... Whitney turned to walk out of the trailer, but was shocked when Neil pushed her... "Don't walk away from me Whitney!" Spat Neil
"Your a scum bag Neil! Im going to find my sister! You keep away from me, and her!" Whitney pleaded.
Neil jumped onto Whitney's back.. .... "YOU LITTLE BLONDE BIMBO! YOUR NOTHING" Shouted Neil... "Im nothing am I... Well atleast I don't live alone, atleast I have friends who care for me.. A lovely daughter and a nice life!"
"Yeah but you don't have your sister... she hates you, she always said she hated you, you think your above everyone Whitney... you think your Whitney Houston to be honest! Look at you, your dirt on the bottom of my shoe" Neil spat...
"AND YOUR A BIG BULLY, NOTHING BUT A BIG SCUMBAG OF A BULLY!" Screamed Whitney... .... Whitney stood up to Neil! Whitney went outside to find the neighbours watching... they had heard the whole thing... "I'VE CALLED THE POLICE YOUR GOING DOWN THIS TIME NEIL!" The police came and arrested Neil... The next morning Whitney sat in her nephews room and felt really emotional... She really missed Louise more than ever now, especially after what she'd been through the day before with Neil... She was really worried about Louise and had no idea where to start looking for her. She stood up... and stared at the computer "hmmm" she thought. Maybe Louise had been looking at places on the internet.. Whitney decided to search the computer to see if she could find anything... anything which would lead her to the whereabouts of her sister... it was worth a try Whitney looked at the internet history, and "Forest Green" was searched on many occassions, days before Louise left Neil. Whitney found that Forest Green was a little town miles away... Maybe Louise was living there... She then went into Louise and Neil's bedroom and could smell the sweet scent of Louise's favourite perfume.. it brought a tear to her eye, all the little things made Whitney really miss her sister.

She then remembered how Louise always kept a diary hidden under her mattress, and was shocked to find she still kept one... Whitney read the diary to search for clues to her sister's whereabouts. She found a page in the diary called "A Sister's Bond" and Louise had wrote all about Whitney and how terrible she felt about betraying her, tears rolled down Whitney's cheeks as she read

"My sister holds the other half of my heart, without her I feel incomplete... A Sister's Bond broken, all because of me. How I wish she was still in my life" It was exactly how Whitney felt.. it was time to repair the bond!
Whitney found what she needed, her sister was planning on running away to Forest Green... she hadn't confirmed it in the diary where she was going, but it was all Whitney had... She had to have faith that her sister was living in Forest Green! Whitney left straight away for Forest Green.. she wasn't sure if her sister would even be living there. She didn't even know how she was going to find her when she got there. But what she did know was that she loved her sister and needed her back in her life... Meanwhile, Tiffanny had packed a suitcase and was boarding a taxi with Layla in tow... Where is she taking her? ...

Find out in Chapter 5! Which will follow shortly :D

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#1-kalisa-Mar 30, 2011

LOL at picture 23 \:D I bet Neil had a horrible headache after that fight... I hope Whitney finds Louise...But I don't even what to think about what happens when she gets back home and discovers that Tiffanny has left and taken Layla with her!\:eek\:

#2-kalisa-Mar 30, 2011

*Oops...Don't even WANT to think, not what to think...\:o

#3jasminehellokitty121994Apr 2, 2011

god i luv these stories! i hope they dont stop to chapter 100000000000000000000000000000000000000000000 lol , keep em coming \:D Ps.. luv the picture 23 \;\) \:rah\:

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