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REVENGE: Part 2
Published Apr 23, 2011


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lukehather

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Welcome to Part 2 :)

Thanks for all the comments...

Enjoy Part 2.. Let me know what you think guys :D

Welcome to Part 2 :)

Thanks for all the comments...

Enjoy Part 2.. Let me know what you think guys :D
The morning after Nicole and Rhianna became friends, Rhianna was discussing an exercise plan with Nicole.. Rhianna has taken it upon herself to transform Nicole.. and they both noticed a sheepy looking Rachel stood watching them...
"Erm.. can we help you, cause if you've come here to have a go at my friend then I suggest you do one, Okay.. So anyway Nicole.."
"Wait.. I haven't come here to have a go at Nicole.. I've come here to make peace." Rachel declared.
"Really?!" Asked Nicole, feeling confused.
"Im so sorry for the way I have treated you... I've been a nasty girl and I am truly sorry Nicole. Your a really nice, kind hearted ginger girl and It was my fault that I got thrown out of sorority because of tripping you up... I..Im just.." Nicole began to cry.. "Im.. just so sorry Nicole.. ginger hair is nice" Rachel said through sniffles.
"Rachel.. Its okay, Im just happy that you've said sorry and that we can finally get on.." Nicole smiled. But Rhianna wasn't buying it...
"Oh please. Come off it Nicole... She's poison through and through." Rhianna said coldly.
"Im not buying your sad, peroxide cased apology. Your toxic. Simple as that." Rhianna stated.
"Give her a chance Rhi.. I want us all to get on" Nicole said.. studying Rachel.
"I admit that I've been a nasty cow to Nicole.. But I've changed and I want us all to be friends.. im a young vulnerable girl" Rachel replied.. with tears in her eyes.
"HA! Vulnerable.. a blonde, fake twig like you, don't make me laugh! Well if you could excuse us now.. because me and my friend are now going shopping.. so goodbye vulnerale Rachel." Rhianna laughed.. Rachel just stared at Nicole.. and felt angry. "this is going to be harder than I thought" she thought to herself. "You can come with us if you like Rachel.." Nicole smiled. Rhianna's face dropped. "why is she so naive" she thought to herself.
"Oh my god really? I'd love that Nicole. Vulnerable girls like me need to feel good about themselves" Rachel smiled. Rhianna studied Rachel, she was going to keep an eye on her.
At the clothes shop "Missy J" Nicole went to try some clothes on while Rhianna and Rachel waited for her...
"Ugh.. Rachel no offence but have you seen the state of your ends... and that tan.. it looks like you've been rolling around in dorito's while having your hair fried to within an ince of its plastic life" Rhianna laughed.
Rhianna burst into tears of laughter...
"Well look at you then.. black gothic hair with black lipstick what's all that about. And that eyeliner.. wait.. is that marker pen"
"HA HA! Sooo funny you barbie! You can't talk, look at your eyeliner.. atleast my hair's healthy and my skin's not like leather" Rhianna laughed.
"Look at your face.. so shiny, it looks like you've been attacked by botox itself. You make me sick Rachel.. Your a disgrace."
"I've had it with your nasty remarks you absoloute rain cloud! IM RACHEL STEVEN'S AND I KNOW WHAT I WANT IN LIFE AND ITS NOT TO BE TREATED LIKE THIS" Rachel shouted!
"Could two please be quiet... You haven't stopped bickering since we got here, your like a married couple. Anyway what do you think?" Nicole smiled
"Honestly... you look stunning Nicole." Rhianna replied, she knew her friend had beauty within her, and now she was showing it. Rachel just stared at Rhianna..
Back at the dorms and in Rhianna's room, Rhianna told Nicole she didn't trust Rachel..
"I just don't trust her... Yesterday she was being a nasty bleached barbie doll that she is, and now she's all butter wouldn't melt.. Its all a bit of out of the blue Nicole."
"I know.. Its got me confused but I want to give her a chance. I think she's alright.. Anyway lets get on with my makeover!" Nicole smiled.
Nicole looked at herself in the mirror.. Rhianna had bought her some contact lenses and it would be goodbye to the glasses and hello to the eyes which went un-noticed behind her glasses.
"Okay im all your's" Nicole said nervously.
"Don't worry, im gonna make you look gorgeous" Rhianna replied excited.
And after two hours of hair and makeup, Rhianna finished her magic on Nicole...
"I can't believe it.. I look so different.. and my eyes!" Nicole beamed.
"Your hair looks amazing. I'll kill you if you ever dye your hair. I love it so much" Rhianna said...
And then started to cry. She felt emotional seeing how happy and confident her best friend looked, she'd come out of her shell and she was really happy for her..
"Aww Rhianna... Your such a great friend"
Nicole hugged her friend tightly.. "Thank you for believing in me" She smiled. After arriving home from class, James walked into the dorms to see a beautiful red haired girl.. and he double checked "Nicole.. Oh my god" He thought to himself.. she looked amazing. "Hey James!" Nicole smiled.. looking out of the corner of her eyes and noticing his shocked expression.
"H..He..Hey Nicole.. You look good" he stammered.
She carried on walking without saying anything.. James turned around to look at her. "WOW" He couldn't believe it.. He had butterflies and his heart was beating so fast. "Oh.. my.. god" Hilary said "She looks amazing" She added.
"Gotta hand it to her.. she looks incredible"
".... right okay girls don't go over board.. I have blonde hair, tanned skin right yeah, Im a young girl who's young.. im a young vulnerable young girl and im tanned I have blonde hair" Rachel said..
Rachel just ran... she ran right past Nicole without saying anything, right up the stairs.. slammed the door open.. ran all the way upstairs and into the bathroom... And she bleached her hair five times... Her hair was already as blonde as could be, but she didn't think so.. her hair was already damaged and it just fell out, it all snapped off and left Rachel with a fuzzy, fried.. mess, basically dead hair. She cried and her makeup ran.. "What have I done" she thought to herself.. Everyone was in the common room when they suddenly heard screaming and footsteps running above them.. then they heard Nicole screaming "IM RACHEL STEVENS AND I KNOW WHAT I WANT IN LIFE, IM A YOUNG VULNERABLE GIRL" running down the stairs... No one could believe what they were seeing.. Nicole looked worried, while everyone else looked shocked and couldn't look...
Rachel was stood naked with her hair cut short and eyeliner running down her face.. The room fell silent and no one said anything.
"What you all staring at... Im Rachel and I know what I want in life and its not to be treated like this!" she shouted in a high pitched voice, as if she was holding her nose.. she then ran off upstairs...
Nicole went to check on Rachel...
"Rachel.. are you okay?" She asked genuinely worried.
"Im fine me buttercup.. All good and jolly me, yeah im fine. Im fine! Im alright.. Im alright, im reading a book me right, Im reading a book because I know what I want in life.. Im a young vulnerable broken hearted girl.." She quickly responded.. and then sang "WHAT BECOMES OF THE BROKEN HEARTED" while reading her book, as if she didn't even know Nicole was in the room...
Nicole left the room speechless not knowing what to say.. and Rachel carried on reading her book. ".. I have to get rid of her, I have to get rid of her, I have to get rid of her, I have to get rid of her, I have to get rid of her, I have to get rid of her, I have to get rid of her" Rachel kept saying over and over while reading a book about gardening... Nicole woke up at 3am in the morning after her mobile buzzed.. it was text from Rachel

"Hey.. could you get me a drink from the kitchen. Im really ill, thanks xxx". Nicole being the nice, sweet girl she is, got up and put her dressing gown on to go get Rachel a drink...
But she was shocked to find Rachel waiting for her at the top of the stairs...
"Oh Rachel.. Are you okay?"
"Am I okay.. Am I okay she asks." Rachel replied angrily...
"WELL NO IM NOT. YOU THINK YOUR SO PERFECT NOW YOUR ALL LOOKING GOOD! YOU STUPID LITTLE GINGER LIFE WRECKER!" "Rachel... Why are you being like this.. I've only ever tried to be your friend." Nicole replied feeling upset.
"Yeah well I can't take it anymore! YOUR TOO NICE FOR YOUR OWN GOOD! YOU WRECKED MY LIFE YOU FREAK! YOUR A NASTY GIRL UNDERNEATH ALL THIS FAKE MISS NICEY NICEY ACT! YOU THINK YOUR SO PERFECT WITH YOUR UN-DYED LONG RED HAIR, YOUR SOFT SKIN AND OH I HATE YOU NICOLE HARDING" Rachel spat... Nicole just stared, not knowing what to do our say.
"YOUR A DEMON, A DEMON NICOLE! YOUR A DEMON, A DEMON FROM HELL! YOU WERE SENT TO WRECK MY LIFE! A FALLEN ANGEL THATS WHAT YOU ARE. HOWS LUCIFER? IM GONNA GET YOU NICOLE LIKE YOU GOT ME! ITS TIME!" There was a scream and a loud bang as Rachel hit the cold hard floor...

End of Part 2

Did Nicole push Rachel?! Did Rachel throw herself down the stairs. Or did she slip and fall?!

PART 3 COMING SOON!!!!!!
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#1mysteryjack1Apr 24, 2011

Another great chapter! Just when I thought the bullying would end, here we go again! Looking forward to part 3 \:\)

#2CloudwalkerNZApr 24, 2011

Great continue of the story \:rah\: and the pictures are very well taken \:wub\:

#3urm0mApr 24, 2011

Good part, Rachel needs some serious help though!

#4enigmaheartApr 24, 2011

I love this story, its so funny, the dialogue, and rachel is so mental and needs help... Carry on writing, 5 from me, it deserves nothing less than that \:D

#5EatTheDeadApr 25, 2011

I like it! Can't wait for the next part.

#6Kinaki123465Apr 25, 2011

I believe Rachel framed her, and Nicole Was Just stood there at the time so rachel would make Them all think it was Nicole, I bet she Just Through herself down the stairs. Great Story
                                                                        Kinaki \:\)

#7tristen_love23Aug 26, 2011

omg u have to write more! hurry hurry! lol =)

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