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Where happiness? Part 1
Published Aug 18, 2011


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garfik1987

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It's Ann's story, about her life, filled with a pain, deprived of love.
It is story about how all good can be lost.
But where the happiness?

It's Ann's story, about her life, filled with a pain, deprived of love.
It is story about how all good can be lost.
But where the happiness?
My name is Ann, I had a happy family. My mum was very beautiful, she was the housewife, the father was the successful lawyer. Every day has been filled by pleasure. But in one day all has changed., in the morning I with mum have gone to the grandmother, but have early returned and have seen that the father not one. I remember they have sworn, as then I have understood, he had other woman
and the father has for ever left the house Mum every day suffered father sometimes called to me, I loved my father. We sometimes met. I told to the father about mum, he worried, but mum didn't want to communicate with him
In one day when I have come from school, there was somebody at our home. He began to live at our home In one day phone has rung out, I have answered, and somebody have told to me that my father has died Mum looked bad
I remember as this man shouted at me that I have left the house and that I disturb them I was lonely, I didn't feel love, happiness, pleasures, warmth of the house. It's all is lost. My life was as glass has broken and it never to stick together. all the same there are cracks I have noticed that every day in houses have started to vanish things. I didn't understand, where they vanished, and has then understood that this man steals things. But mum didn't pay attention. He has sold all, our house became empty When I have come from school, mum lay on a floor, I was frightened, I awoke her, but she didn't answer.She has died. I already was completely lonely
it was sick to say goodbye to the house I was in the house for children, here I have made friends Every month families came and took away children in a family Time passed I already was 16 years old I remember I have thought up the plan to escape, I wanted freedom
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#15fruitopiaVIPAug 20, 2011

Such a sad story, but a great start.  I am waiting in anticipation for the next chapter.

#16melaniecoxVIPAug 21, 2011

A very good story, but very sad.
I loved the way you had screenshots in between without any writing, I havn't tried that before.
Congratulations on having it featured, It feels great when that happens.
 

#17TenshiroiAug 22, 2011

Aww ! Sad but screenshots are wonderful !! Good job ! Thanks for sharing

#18Foxi_iveyAug 23, 2011

wonderful story!  I'm eagerly awaiting the next one.  i need to see how her life looks up eventually.

#19IAMAPERSON13Aug 24, 2011

That was very nice!!! I loved that you didnt have words for every picture really made me just look at the picture and see the emotion of what was going on.

#20garfik1987Aug 24, 2011

Thanks to all that have read and write comments, yours
impressions. I have tried to make story of easier on screenshotsand
and the short description,it is very pleasant to me if the first part was pleasant to you. The second part and as I think it will
be last part will be more interesting. Many thanks that have read this story \:\)

#21RavenRave95Aug 24, 2011

nice.

#22LilyT23Aug 30, 2011

Nice story, the pictures are great

#23isabellbellaSep 3, 2011

Beautiful Screen shots <3

#24DazzersimOct 28, 2011

supperbbb....!!!! luv it.. \:wub\:

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