Revenge: Part 4
Published Sep 23, 2011

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Welcome to Part 4 Of REVENGE! :D

Thanks for the comments! :) I like getting feedback.

Welcome to Part 4 Of REVENGE! :D

Thanks for the comments! :) I like getting feedback.
Nicole couldn't believe it... I mean, Rachael has been terrible towards her, and all because.. she's Rachael's sister.. Why make someone feel like hell because of that. It was too much for Nicole to take in.. so she just hurried off to her room, locked the door shut, and put a "Do Not Disturb" sign on the door. She got a book and started reading it.. only she wasn't really reading. Her mind was in a mess, she was trying to piece everything together.. but It just didn't fit. Then there was a knock at the door. It was Rihanna...
"She's gone Nicole.. Rachel's been sectioned. And she just went with them without a fight... Do you think there's truth in this IM YOUR SISTER.. shizz.. I mean.. it doesn't make sense" Rihanna said, deep in thought.
"I'm not sure.. I just don't know what to think. How can I believe her.. she's playing games, and It's not fair!"
Later on Rihanna bumped into Hilary in the corridor...
"I feel heart broken.. My friend has been sectioned and Its all my fault! I just wanted to do what she said to make her happy, but she's not well and now she's in hospital and I feel terrible." Hilary said crying..
"Im sorry Rihanna.. I know you have your own problems, I'll be okay.."
"No.. wait" Rihanna said..
Meanwhile Nicole decided she had to do some digging to find out the truth about Rachael.. The truth is that Nicole was adopted as a baby.. and so was Rachael. The two are non-identical twins.. they were split up as babies after there birth parents passed away in an accident. And both adopted parents decided it would be best if they didn't have any contact. Nicole felt angry at her adopted parents.. but realised that, what was done was done. She had to help Rachael. Nicole walked in on Rihanna and Hilary getting passionate on the bed... she was taken aback.. she had no idea they were both lesbians. "NICOLE!" Rihanna shouted in an embarrased tone of voice. "I'm so sorry Ri.. I didn't know.. But I'm happy for you! A little shocked if I'm honest, but I think it's lovely that you've found love with someone! Go for it!"
"Really? ... You haven no idea what that means to me. Thank you Nicole.. oh.. You should talk to my brother" Rihanna said with a wink. ;)
Nicole was intrigued.. she bumped into Rihanna's brother...
"Hey Nicole.. umm, nice dress"
"Yeah. Thanks" Nicole replied.. Clocking just where James was looking.
Nicole confidently went in for the kill... James was not expecting it at all! "WOW" He replied.. shocked. Nicole laughed, she had always liked James, but never really thought about it. James pulled her in for another kiss... Nicole really had made his day! Tina stared... long and hard. She felt heartbroken... She was in love with James and now she saw her arch enemy locking lips with her love... "First you destroy my friend.. and now you've stolen the one I love. Your gonna pay for this Nicole Harding.. Your a demon.. you've destroyed Rachael and now your moving on to me.. We'll see.. Revenge starts now" Tina smiled to herself.

And that concludes Part 4... This is only the beginning.. If you thought Rachael was bad.. Well, wait till Tina gets her airtime ;) mwhahahaha XD

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#1animeiscoolSep 23, 2011

Page 8 very unexpected......\:confused\:

#2mysteryjack1Sep 23, 2011

This story has more twists and turns than a roundabout! And I love it! It's a lot like a teen soap opera, and I love how the plot thickens every chapter! Can't wait for the next one \:cool\:

#3urm0mSep 25, 2011

Poor Nicole she is public enemy number one!

#4tristen_love23Oct 4, 2011

omg i love ur stories.. plz hurry with part 5!! i cant wait to see what tinas gonna do \:D

#5ShokkyOct 18, 2011

An amazing idea! Thank you!

#6megabug7Aug 9, 2012

very good story but where did the pictures go?

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