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Taken (Part I)
Published Oct 2, 2011


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Hellsaint

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My take at a new series, hope you enjoy :D

My take at a new series, hope you enjoy :D
His palms were sweaty from all the practice.
Checking his watch, he finally took notice of the time...

It has been... what... 3 hours already?
Chris Parker got up from his seat and took a breather.

And no, he’s not good at drumming at all.
But the noise helps to drown out all thoughts from his head.
When he is not doing anything in particular, he finds himself walking unconsciously towards the pool...
Remembering events that happened years ago.
Chris inherited a huge load of simoleans from an unknown relative, moved out of his shabby apartment and bought an estate.
He spoiled himself scandalously and flaunted his new wealth on things he never thought he could have bought,
with events that he never thought he could have done.

However, he felt a strange stir when he was acquainted with Joanne at one of his pool parties.
Joanne Walker.
A typical girl-next-door student, studying Graphic Design while working part-time at the beauty spa to make ends meet.
He thought that she would be another one of them, just here for some fun and thrills.
Maybe he could get lucky with her and have her to stay over night...
But years have passed and she was still with him.

Joanne was always there.
She didn’t asked for anything, except to be in his company.
They spent afternoons soaking the sun rays, while talking about their dreams and fantasies.
One afternoon, she surprised Chris by looking straight in his face and asking,
“Chris, will you be alright if I am not with you?”

“... Are you breaking up with me?” Chris started to panic.

“No, silly.” Joanne reassured him by hugging him close.
“I’m wondering if you would be able to take care of yourself if I were to leave this place for awhile....”

“You mean like for a vacation of something? Sure, I’ll be fine! I’m a big boy, Joanne.” Chris grinned.

“That’s... good to know...” Joanne sighed.

Seeing her in deep thought, Chris decided not to pursue on the matter.
Come to think of it, maybe Joanne already knew something then but chose not to tell him.

Chris took a breath and the memories started coming at him again...
“I’m heading for work, see you in the evening dear.” Joanne pecked Chris on the cheek.

“Not so fast..” Chris playfully pulled her closer.

“Chris!! I’m running late...”
She didn’t finish her sentence when he planted a kiss firmly over her mouth.

After some moments, he grinned and patted her hind.
“Now, you can go...”

“Oh Chris...” Joanne giggled and waved goodbye.
Little did he know that that will be the last time he saw of Joanne.

2 years have passed and he still stands at the gates,
hoping to see her at his doorstep with that infectious smile of hers...
The police is still on this case and investigations are ongoing...
But it seems that Joanne Walker has vanished.
There are no records of her since 2 years ago and her relatives are non contactable...
The authorities told Chris to expect the worst.

Nonetheless, he knows. The police is hiding something.
How could she have disappeared with surveillance cameras at every corner the city?

No. She has not disappeared, she has been taken.
And he will not sit around for answers.
That’s all folks. Thank you for reading til this page.
Hope you like the new series! :D

Stay Chill ;-)
-Frank

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#17weirdlingOct 5, 2011

Excellent beginning! \:rah\: Can't wait to see what happens next!

#18fruitopiaVIPOct 5, 2011

Bravo, I am hooked.

#19isarpgistaOct 5, 2011

Great start! \:\) The pics are sooooooo beautiful! Can't wait to see more!

#20rosenoire87Oct 6, 2011

\:wub\: ~Chris is hottt and this chapter was very well written and leaves you wanting more \:\) 

#21urm0mOct 8, 2011

Poor girl and poor Chris

#22LaNellyxDOct 10, 2011

wow! this got me hooked and its just the first chapter? xD lol. i love the little effect you used when he looked back in the past. and they look so cute together<3 \:wub\:  what did happen to her?! D:

#23MangioOct 14, 2011

Congratulations on the feature \:rah\: Joanne is so beautiful and cute.. Chris is so lucky to have her... i wish those strong muscular arms wrapped around me. \;\) Why would the police have something to hide.. has this been connected to some government type stuff? Can't wait for more \:wub\:

#24xhaiiOct 18, 2011

great shots \:D and great story ^___^.. i love how you made the characters \:\))

#25RatRaceRobOct 23, 2011

Beautiful screens-- they really put a dream-like spin on the Chris and Joanne relationship \:cool\:, which makes it that much worse that he's lost her \:eek\: ! Now I really must go and find out what happens next... \;\)

#26MissTsarinaOct 29, 2011

Great start ! Leaving us with a questionning is always a win \:D I'll go read next chapter...

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